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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

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@Leprechaun

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Posted: 9 years ago

NiceEdited by Edna_Philip - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

simply brilliant
loved it

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

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Posted: 9 years ago

avi!

your ideas always surprise me Chaitalee Ghosalkar!! kaha se laati ho tum aise unique ideas...

a Raizada who is Khushi and a theif who is Arnav?? too much to digest man!

well kudos to you for writing THIS!

I am smelling something fishy. why khushi is saving Arnav now and hiring him as her bodyguard??

mystery always excite me. let me see how you unfold this. ..

Edited by .Avanti. - 9 years ago

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 9 years ago

Welcome back. How do you come up with such different story lines yaar 😊. Enjoyed reading the first chapter and I am all buckled up for the suspense ride 😛. Thanks for PM.

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rk2127

@rk2127

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

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Welcome back.

You gave Arnav Akash's lanky personality. And he is Arnav __? A robber or robs well sought out things for fun?

A well planed and thought out process he follows for robbery - made 2 mistakes in one incident to land in this situation. And going against his nature - likely made a third one or is his idea of these mistakes are disillusion and he is being played all though.

Khushi Raizada? Ms. at that? Wants a robber as her body guard? Something she had planned to do in return of his freedom from this case? What's cooking?

This story is already intriguing, just like all other. You came back with a bang so like you Chaitalee. 👏

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

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Posted: 9 years ago

Khushi is a Miss.Raizada?? Then Arnav??

okay.. When i concluded that Arnav was "robbing" the precious pendant , my thoughts immediately fled to the Aryan style of getting things done.. Alas..!!

bodyguard?? This is pretty intriguing...!! Khushi surely must be in some danger coz of which she cleverly manipulated our hunk for her service... for more!! :D Hmm..!!

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

fantabulous update

loved it

plz continue soon

thanks for the mail

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javeria

@Javeria3991

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

congratulations on starting a new story.

Interesting start. i love arnav's character a smart thief but a greedy one and because of his mistake he is in jail.

Khushi is mysterious. Its odd that ho one gives a job to a thief of a personal guard. I think Khushi life is in danger, i am curious to know more about her.

waiting for the next chapter...

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