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Posted: 9 years ago
Congrats on the new story. I'm so excited to read this one.

So Arnav is a thief? Hmmm. Very nice twist. So Khushi offered him a job in exchange for her silence. This is gonna be fun to read. I'm so glad you are writing again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
good to see you back.. welcome.. ðŸ˜Š
interesting start of Disillusioned.. from thief to body guard.. lets see how many more mistakes is arnav doing at he is continuing them?? description of khushi was quite enchanting.. well would like to see the reasons behind khushi gave arnav the job for his freedom..   best wishes and happy writing.. ðŸ˜ƒ


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Posted: 9 years ago
Is Arnav a Gupta?
And why would Khushi want Him around her?
Interesting start, Chaitu!
So happy to see you writing again.
Waiting for the next chapter. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yayyy!!!! A new story...😊

Awesome start...

Arnav is a thief... And khushi's personality is quiet intriguing... Why is she hiring a thief as her bodyguard... He can't be trusted... So there must be a strong reason behind her this decision...

Eagerly waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow, this seems to be a very interesting and a totally new concept...
and khushi is already a raizada here...
eagerly waiting for the next chapter...
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was beautiful start...
So Arnav is a thief and he went to Kushi's house to stole their heirloom jewelry...  So Kushi is a Raizada not Gupta????


Cant wait to read more on this story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hmmm...lovely update..the concept is very fresh n new!!
Continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh chaitu, new story
awesome news
will read now
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very interesting and thrilling start Chaitu ! 
Yay, a new fanfiction and this time Arnav has come in a  thief's avatar to steal our hearts. ðŸ˜³

Seriously, I got bored of reading Arnav being filthy rich fanfictions and despite that can't digest Arnav's character being poor, it does not do justice to his 'I own the world' persona. But thieves are supposed to be sly, smart, shameless, they can get whatever they want by hook or by crook  and Arnav seems to fit the bill.

Oye, if Khushi is a Raizada  then what is Arnav's surname a 'Kumari' 'Gupta' or 'Jha'?
And hope Khushi is born to the rich and not married to some obnoxiously rich old man called Snakewa ( Tera koi bharosa nahi, because can't trust you when it comes to twists)

What makes me wonder is why does she need a thief as a bodyguard, how could she even trust a petty thief, she could have hired a professional.

P.S. I demand you gift me the same pendant for my next birthday. ðŸ˜‰

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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
 
Unres
 
It generally takes some time for me to settle down in your story and DI follows the norm.
 
This is so welcomingly different.
 
Khushi is a Raizada here and Arnav is, well, don't know yet.
 
The narration of the theft wants me to doubt if you have any personal experience.
 
Don't know what the third mistake holds for Arnav but I am thrilled because it is not going to offer anything less than a fun/thrill ride when the writer here is Chiatu.
 
 
Edited by Viji79 - 9 years ago