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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 9 years ago

Namma ooru Bengaluru!! Aah bliss! Sweet man! Cannot be happier! And my god what eh twist she's being stalked? So he is going to save her? But why did she zero down upon him? I get it the officer gushed about him but what's that got to do with his thief status?

Hmm I'm kinda intrigued!! I wanna know more! And she's beautiful he's got that he's hot shes got that sweet man!!

Let's see how things go from here!

Cheers

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 9 years ago

amazing update !!! khushi being stalked and that's the reason to have a bodyguard.. that too good looking bodyguard.. well looking forward to know who is the stalker who have made khushi go all pale.. loved the update.. well looking forward to blooming love of ARSHI in Bangalore.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chor ban gaaya kotwal!

And what a charming chor indeed. Inviting Khushi to sit in her own house.

She's being stalked! That's horrible. And definitely worth giving away Raizada heirlooms to catch the stalker.

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 9 years ago

what is the mystery about Khushi?? waiting to know it..

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484026

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Posted: 9 years ago

Unres for the previous update on page 4.

Res for this chapter

Unres

Impulsive and a supposedly intuitive businesswoman Khushi.

Witty, petty thief Arnav.

I have issues giving a makeover to Arnav here, you know, because of my habit to visualize.

Is your Arnav like this

or

Like this?

Lavanya has made an appearance that too as Khushi's assistant. Some justice delivered to Khushi Kumari Gupta.

Khushi thinks she is being stalked. Now the Chiatuness settles well.

Edited by Viji79 - 9 years ago

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 9 years ago

wonderful update

loved it

thanks for the mail

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for the update. The characterization of Arshi is interesting. So Khushi hired a bodyguard to keep her safe from her stalker.

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533840

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Posted: 9 years ago

simply superb
loved it]

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

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Posted: 9 years ago

Arnav is a thief , I should say (a handsome hunk , ufff) . He is residing in Bengaluru , the garden city . Khushi has hired Arnav as Bodyguard coz she is stalked , a thief thinks like a thief . May be this is why khushi hired him , story is getting interesting day by day .

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 9 years ago

You have created two very interesting characters and one very very mysterious buildup. Enjoying the story!😆

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