SwaRon SS:The feeling of being yours [FINALE CHP UP] - Page 4

it was an amazzingg update chitra
i am so happy to read tis update
u definitely know how to capture sumbody's mind
 a very expressive n fantastically handled chapter
the flash back was a visual treat for me
a nervous sharon n a very understanding n caring husband swayam
u gave a very true picture of how things are dealt in a arrange marriage
i really loved the section whr they dont sleep
 instead the use tat tym to know each other making thr bond
the phone call was so cute
all in all a very clean update 🤗

Thats a lovely update.
Although dont like the cliffhanger.
Thanks for the pm and update soon!

Chitra, God buddy you stole the show. That was such an adorable piece.

chitra this is great yr...

their first night was wowww..

swayam is sooo understanding..
he is a darling..

waiting for the 3 magical words..

update soon..wanna know who that girl is...
thanks 4 d pm

read both the updates in one go...continue soon n do pm me whn u update...

Res..



For now...
H@ppi frndship day...
Here's a frndship band for u

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Edited by GlamourousPearl - 9 years ago

First cumz first...huge se bhi huge wala thnku for ur pm... :)

Cuming to ur update..
happy is definitely not da word to describe how m feeling after dis update ...trust me when I say at da flashback part my one hand was glued to my forhead n my lips crept up till my ears n my heart prayed for a lifepatner like swayam of ur ss...trust me ur dis update took my heart away...take a bow for DAT...at da lines where he tries to comfort Sharon saying" nonvegetarian" n da "dil ki manzoori"...I wished dat instead of hugging my bunny it was u... ;) ...

U r marvelously fab gal...

An understanding n cheater swayam...n odd combo...bt here its truly justified...loved it completely...
Dos 3 wordz ...I guess I m waiting more den dem for deir confession ...
N lastly...da cliffhanger...u better b quick wid da next update...

Awesome update continue soon.

understanding swayam... this is what i love about him...

nice update
<3d the way u penned down the cute moments during the first night of their marriage
next updaate kab milega? jaldi update karo na yaar
waiting 2 knw who the girl in the photo was
thanks 4 d pm