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SwaRon SS:The feeling of being yours [FINALE CHP UP] - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
swayam meih tera bhoot toh nahi guss gaya ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
usney jo gaya usko sunn kar sharon ke sangh sangh meih bhi gayi ๐Ÿคข
i really really loved the way u hav handled swayam 
it was so realistic they say the best thing
 in a couple is the period whr they tease each other 
tis chapter had all the shades of a perfect romance novel 
from teasing each other to understanding n care n trusting each other 
all the spices were added in the rite proportion 
the short scene whr she asks him why 
was so beautifully penned 
n the scene whr sharon admits tat she is 
jealous was very well penned 
do i need to say wat happens to me wen i read 
abt swayam n his naughty avatar ๐Ÿ˜ณ
all i hav to say is wit each update 
i want another chitra ๐Ÿ˜ณ
n agar woh nahi milah toh u knoe nah kya hoga ๐Ÿ˜†
do update soon dost  ๐Ÿค—




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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey!  I unres'd my comment :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
its very good... loved it...
sharons jealousy...swayam understanding it and explaining her what shemeansto him very good...
waiting for more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
DI!!!!
What the hell, what the freaking hell was this!!
Oh god, I loved it!!
The blushing parts, koi aapse sikhe kaise likhte hai...
omg omg omg!!
every convo, every line was jsut superb, out of the world.
aisa laga ki koi bahot famous writer ne yeh likha
famous? ha aap ho famous aur deserve bhi karti ho!
just love loved loved it!!!
aur likho!!
aur mai toh restless hu hi toh jaldi update bhi karo!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Loved the way how swayam teased her
Sharon going beet root red
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
read both(2nd nd 3rd) the chaps chitra.. loved it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
swaron first nyt was beautiful
the phone call was so cute 
swaron are waiting to say those 3 magical words awww๐Ÿ˜ณ

i like the trust sharon showed on swayam
Loved the way how swayam teased her๐Ÿ˜† nd blushing sharon๐Ÿ˜ณ

waiting for next part.. update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update. 
Loved how Sharon told him about the photograph. Just loving the understanding between them. Also waiting for confession now and the last part was bang on ๐Ÿ˜† Naughty Swayam ๐Ÿ˜‰ and Blushing Sharon โ˜บ๏ธ What an amazing sight ๐Ÿ˜› 
Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was a Sunday and Swayam decided that he will make lunch for Sharon. . .Without her help!Doesnt matter if he had never steepped in the kitchen in the past twenty three years of his life.
"Swayam aap kya kar rahe hain?Main banati hun na"
"Sharon"Swayam looked at her and kept the knife on the slab and came towards her.He grasped her wrist,made her sit on the sofa and gave her favourite novel in her hand.
"My Queen you sit here and your husband will do everything. . .Tum toh har din mere liye kuch na kuch karti hi rehti ho kabhi mujhe bhi mauka do"Swayam kissed her cheeks and left for the kitchen.
"Swayam dhyan se. . .Kahin aaapko lag na jaye"Sharon shouted from the hall much concerned for her precious hubby.
"Don't worry Sharon. . .You enjoy the novel"He replied back.
He placed the laptop on the slab in a corner and wore the apron like a king's crown.He wanted to make chicken dumplings for Sharon as it was her favourite.
"Pheww. . .Internet Zindabad"Swayam said getting all ready.
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     Sharon was reading the novel when Swayam came out of the kitchen doing "Tan Tana"
"Your delicious food is ready Madame"He bowed down before Sharon.
She looked at him.His forhead had droplets of sweat,his hairs and face was full of flour,His index finger bandaged.Tears brimmed in her eyes. . .She looked at him lovingly and engulfed him a tight hug.
Swayam was taken aback for a moment but then he placed his hand around her waist and held her protectively.Tears of happiness rolled down her cheeks.Nobody had taken so many efforts for her.Each and everyday she thanked God for choosing Swayam for her.
"Sharon kya hua?"Swayam said breaking the hug.Concern written all over his face.
"Haan Swayam bus vo maine kabhi socha nahi tha ki koi meri is tarah care kar sakta hai. . .Aapko nahi pata Swayam aap mere liye kitne special hain"
Swayam smiled and wiped her tears off her face.
"Gosh Sharon tumne toh mujhe dara hi diya tha. . .And tum ab in cheezon ki aadat daal lo kyunki agar main nahi janta ki main tumhare liye kitna special hun toh tum bhi nahi janti ki tum mere liye kya ho"
She smiled through tears and took his hand in hers and kissed lovingly on his bandaged finger.
"Bahut dard hua hoga na?"
"Nahi. . .Thoda sa hua tha. . .Abhi tumne bilkul theek kar dia"She broke into smile and kissed his forhead.
"Ab chalo na. . . Chal kar batao khan kaisa bana hai?"
Sharon sat on the chair and Swayam served the food to her.
"Sharon aap kha kar btaiye na khana kaisa bana hai?"Swayam said mimicking Sharon like she does everyday to which she chuckled and said "Jaan tumne banaya hai bura kaise ho sakta hai?"mimicking Swayam like he replies everyday and they both shared a hearty laugh.
Sharon took the first bite and closed her eyes.Swayam gulped down in nervousness looking at her expressions.
"yummm. . .Its awesome!Swayam Its so tasty!!!!Mujhe lagta hai maine aaj tak itne ache chicken dumplings nahi khaye. . .Its so delicious"
"Sachi?"Swayam said with excitement in his eyes.
"Haan Swayam yeh bahut yummy hai"and she made him have a bite too.
"Swayam ab jab bhi mujhe dumplings khane honge main aapse hi kahungi. . .bas!Sharon said more like declaring it.
"Aur main khushi khushi tumhare liye yeh karunga"Swayam said and Sharon looked at him lovingly and again got engaged in relivishing the taste of food like a child gets engaged in his toys and Swayam kept adoring the smile playing on her lips.
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"Nahi. . .Nahi. . .Nahi. . .Hum abhi chalenge bas. . .Swayam dekhiye na kitni achi baarish ho rahi hai bahar. . .please bas thodi der na. . maine keh diya na hum abhi jayenge."Sharon was standing on the sofa and Swayam was trying to calm her down.It had been three days that Sharon was asking Swayam to go out on a drive in the rain but Swayam had been too busy to come with her.But today she was adamant. . . Yes she was veery sweet but how could Swayam forget that she was the WIFE!!!!
Swayam was seeing this side of Sharon for the first time so he really didn't know how to calm her down.
"God!Gusse mein ye Sharon se Siren ban jati hai. . ."Swayam mumbled to himself.
"Kya kaha aapne?"Sharon said forwarding her ears.
Swayam looked at her and finally let out the sigh of defeat.He came towards her and said "Vo main keh raha tha ki. . .
Swayam took her in his arms in bridal style making her go shocked and said "Yeh baarish aapki zindagi ki sabse special baarish hogi Mrs.Sharon Swayam Shekhawat"
Sharon blushed and hid himself in his chest against his heart which has started to take her name with its every beat.
I am a bit unsure with this chapter. . .I hope you all will like it.And yeah next chapter will have some Rains,SwaRon music and Romance.
NOTE-If you want pms for future updates and my future works please add me in your buddy list.Thanks!
Now,Reviews please!
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NEXT CHAPTEREdited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
heyyaa 
meri mr india๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜› *ab tho theek hai na*
update was too gud evn though it was simple u made it beautiful in all the way๐Ÿ‘
loved the way swayam cooked for his sharon
and the mimic was too gud๐Ÿ˜†
sharon in siren mood awesome๐Ÿ˜ƒ
swayam saw dis shade sharon for the first tym 
n atlast swayam had to agree to sharon was too cutely written
waiting eagerly for their rainy romance 
update soon samjhi meri mr.india

love๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
rajdhani express๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


Edited by shalomshini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Me wanna be first!!
di aap thik toh ho???? Doctor ko bulana padega I guess???
APNE KABSE ITNE JALDI UPDATES DENE CHALU KIYA???
Anyways update was beautiful!!
Swayam made chicken dumplings! Wow ...
THEN d mimics.. just perfect
I expected d dumplings to be horrible but kamaal they were amazing!
Aakhir hmamare Swayam ne banaye
the last part was sooo cute di
siren sharons d best aur Swayam if u want more info.. internet zindabad ๐Ÿ˜›
loved loved it di
mindblowing!
Aur mai kitne baar bolu.. pls warning dedo aise scenes keliye warna me will definitely get diabetes