RaYa New Story : Complicated Luv Story Update Part 10 on Page 32 - Page 5

Posted: 9 years ago
too good.pls cntinue soon.n thanks for the pm
Posted: 9 years ago
Looks interesting...pls contnue.
Posted: 9 years ago
heyyy thats really very nice update...
good going...
hahhahaa...dabbu priya hai...nice...
ohh ronit n priya are buddies...
awww!!! priya n ronit dance...n ram raging with anger...

continue soon...
thnkx for the pm...😊
Posted: 9 years ago
interesting preview...
some fight gonna happen kya..???

eagerly waiting...😊
Posted: 9 years ago

Part 3

Here is short update but this is little filler imp for flow of story
sorry and thanx for all the support

Ram now burning with anger to see priya dance with ronit.and hand in hand coming towards him but he controls his anger.

Vik : must say Priya u r trually a good dancer. And Ronit u r to awesme yar means tum dono ek dum professional dancers ke jaise dance kar rahe the.


Ronit : hmmm dekha main to hamesha se hi kahta tha priya ki tum apni dance ki hobby ko profession bana sakti ho but tum to tum ho...

Ram : Hmm sahi kaha tum achha dance kar leti ho priya.lekin tumne to mujhe or kuch hi kaha tha us din..

Priya: Main samzi nahi Mr. Kapoor kis din..



Flashback:
15 days before at
MEHRA'S PARTY:

Vik-neha: chalo yar tum dono plz itne din ho gaye shadi ko or aaj pahli bar hum itna bol rhe hai to ek couple dance to kar sakte ho tum.

Ram : main koi dance wance nahi karne wala hu.kya pta ise dance aata bhi hai ya nahi gir vir gayi to THE RAM KAPOOR KI IMAGE kharab ho jaegi.

Priya: Hurts with ram's word and say Sahi kaha Mr.kapoor ne mujhe to dance aata hi nahi .aur mera bhi mood nahi dance karne ka.

Ram : ye mat bolo mera mood nahi hai ye kaho ki mujhe dance aata hi nahi hai.

Priya : Ha jaisa aap sahi samze Mr.Kapoor.

FB end

Ram : mam kuch yaad aaya Mehra ki party me.

Priya: mujhe to yaad hai par shayd aap bhul gye ki aapne kitna Underestimate kiya tha Image and all bhule to app bhi nahi honge wo sab so main bhi kisi ese wese ke sath dance nhi karti.


Ram : ye esa wesa Tumahara Pati h bhul to nahi rhi ho.

Priya : pati hai parmeshwar nahi and morover itne din baad Ronit ke sath dance ka moka mila so...

Ram now full of anger hering her last sentnce ronit ke sath

Ram : Ha ronit ka sath to tumhe...Ronit dosnt hear this and
say hey ram plz 2 min mujhe Dabbu se kuch bat karni hai plz excuse us

And Ronit drags priya to food corner

Vik to neha : thank god ye ronit priya ko waha se le gya warna ram pta nahi kya bol deta gusse me.

Vik : Ram tu itna gussa kyo kar rha hai priya par yar ek dance hi to kiya hai usne and morover wo dono best frnd the yar itne din baad mile to normal hai.

Ram : itne din baad mile to apne pati ko bhul jao and baho me bahe hatho me hath me daal ke dance karo and see kaise ronit use apni Hatho se khila rha hai.How romantic...and make faces

Neha : yar Ram tu bhi mujhe kitni bar ese hi khilata hai kai bar vikram to kabhi jealous nahi hota.

Ram : Ha to wo meri patni hai Sari dunia Use The Ram Kapoor ki wife se jante hai yha so ye sab mera Haq hai .


Vik : Kaun sa haq ram kya tune use kabhi patni hone ka Haq diya.nahi na and tu hi kahta hai na ki Tum dono me pati patni jaisa koi rishta nahi hai na hoga to ye sab kyu...


Ram thinks vikram sahi to kah raha hai jab hamara compromise ka rishta hai to Ronit ke sath dekh kar mujhe itna gussa kyu aa raha hai.

Ram : Vik bahut huya yar main ghar ja rha hu.

Vik: are priya ko to leke jaa..

Ram
( thinks jo bhi ho dunia ki nazar main to hum couple hai)
:Kya musibat hai yar...and going towards where priya and ronit takes juice. From juice stall

At Juice Stall

Priya : excuse me 1 Orange juice and 1 apple juice.

Ronit : tumhe yaad hai ki main sirf apple juice pita hoon.

Priya : kaise bhul sakti hoo.
Tumahari har ek chiz yaad hai.

Then jst ronit's phone rang and ronit goes out to take the call.

Ram listen all convo and rage in his eyes his just say tumahara or ronit ka mel milap ho gaya ho to its late we shuld leave now.

Ram words mel-milaap hurts her but control her tears and say Mr.kapoor Aap jaiye main aayi bhi party me apne aap thi to wapas bhi apne aap aa jaungi apko meri chinta karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai.

Ram : with full of anger in his voice Ha Ha main kyu chinta karu jao bhaad me tum...main ja rha hu.

Priya talk to herself Bhagwan bhi aa jaye to na inhe samz nahi sakta inko bhi or inke mood ko bhi.

Now Ram leave the place and also VikNeha too.

Ronit : hey priya sorry yar wo maa ka phone tha mene unhe tumahre bare me bataya wo tumse milne ka bol rahi thi.

Priya: No need to sorry yar main jaldi hi aunty se mil lungi.

Ronit : jaldi nahi kal hi ok kal tum or ram hamare ghar dinner par aa rhe ho and thats final ok...

Ronit again priya its really late we should leave mene ram ko jate dekha chalo main tumhe drop kar deta hu .

Priya: are its ok main khud manage kar lungi.

Ronit : Shutup yar hamesha se wahi " ronit me khud manage kar lungi ". Chalo ab.

And priya and ronit leave the party.

Ram reach KM and waiting for Priya but after 1 hours there is no sign of Priya.

In Car

priya sochti hai ye Mr. Kapoor ko kabhi kabhi kya ho jata aaj kis baat pe gussa the or unhone Ronit ke sath wali bat kyu kahi
kahi wo Mere or Ronit ke bare me nahi nahi priya ye tu kya soch rhi hai Mr.kapoor bhi to ronit ko jante hai wo esa kyu sochenge and mujhe Ronit ko sab batana hoga meri ram ki shadi and all...

Ronit sochta hai ki ye priya ese ek dum se kaha gayab ho gayi thi and Shadi wo bhi ram se kya hua hoga main puchu ki nahi kya karu ab ye shadishuda hai ye meri dabbu nahi rahi jo har choti choti bat mujhse share karti thi kya karu and then Both together say "wo main"
Both laugh and Ronit say ladies First

Priya : Ronit main janti hoo ki tum kya puchna chahte ho par main tumhe puri bat kal shanti se bata dungi esa karte hai kal dinner pe to hum mil rhe h kyu na Kal hum wahi uddipi center pe mile

Ronit: Ok dabbu...

Priya gives him angry look
Scene shift to Raya's room
here
ram think ye priya ab tak aayi kyu nahi uska phone try karta hu as usual priya ka phone unreachable...and in waiting of priya ram goes to bed and sleep...
Morning :
Still couch is Empty where is priya guys ???

End


Posted: 9 years ago
Episode -3 
ohh so Ram is angry 
obviously he will be  na 
hmm 
Ram and priya fb was good so she didnt dance with him 😛 
and seeing their closeeness he is getting furious 
hmm  so he slept 

priya must be washroom or somewhere 😛

thanks for the pm 
Posted: 9 years ago
Read All three parts
Thanks for the Story
It's very Different story
why Ram is always Angry on Priya??
Priya Hurt by Ram's word
Hope Priya will be safe
Continue soon
Next time PM me 😊

Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
priya is hurt by ram's  words
continue soon
thanks for pm
Posted: 9 years ago
hey nice update...👏
i love the way story is going...
hmm ram jealous of ronit...nice
priya hurt for ram's behavior...
priya jaldi utke changingroom mai ready hone gayi hogi...just guessing..😆
continue soon...
thanks for the pm...😊

Edited by jodude - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Loving the story as it is progressing and ram was jealous of ronit when priya danced with him n ram-priya ki comprmised marriage hope raya ke beech pyaar jaldi ho jaye

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