My Poems thread (Two new poems on Pg.4)

Posted: 9 years ago
                                                       

                         


Friends, I love writing poems but in very simple language. I wanted to share them with you all, so opened this thread. 

Read them as and when time permits and do give your valuable feedback.
Hope, you all will enjoy going through themπŸ˜ƒ

LION
Denizen of woods, the blazing Sun
Black brown ribbons tied all over this saffron hunk
Blotting the soil with leathery pads, he walks
Hurling through the bushes, his roar freezes hovering thoughts
On hunting grounds, he stabilizes solemnly
Canine marks on wild skins point his killing instincts
Prompt enough, his prey seldom escapes
After fleshy treat, he reverentially vacates the place
 
Poster animal, when breathing, can't be forged
Generally, is deceived, shot and then robbed
Trafficking of his parts, earn poachers countless bucks
But his ideal, scintillating preaching can't be sold in trucks
Adorned by kingly crown, majestic is his approach
Queen of his province, he never scorns
Disrespectful means don't cram into his skull
His manipulative, harmless tactics, man should surely learn

CORRUPTION
Once the leading country of developing world
Is now lagging behind
Engripped by the jaws of corruption
India lacks smooth growth, despite having brilliant minds.
 
Politicians getting richer day by day
Turning thieves from elected custodiers
These need to be hanged till death
To make our country's economy steadier.
 
Wherever you see corruption lies
In the offices, behind the walls
Nor the private firms are left untouched
Everyone waiting in his court for attractive balls.
 
Common man, the ultimate sufferer
Also has his hand in this problem
Give bribes to officers to get things done
No matter whether belongs to bungalow, or slum.
 
Corrupts move freely with head held high
Innocents are put behind virtual bars
Still lawmakers say, laws are same for all
For the bare footers, for the people owning ambassador cars.
 
History is the prime witness today
Geography contains countless living proofs
That the country being infected by corruption
Finds it difficult to even provide its denizens, the roofs.
 
This weed is affecting the crops
Decreasing the annual yield
This need to be rooted out fast
To prevent the loss of main crop from the field.
 
Take the pledge today, O Indians
To be honest with your motherland
Youth has to realise his powers
To bury the ashes in the sand.
 
 
INTERRELATION
 
Love is what nature is to tree
Dependence is what flower is to butterfly
Frenemy is what snake is to snake charmer
Compatibility is what hair is to barber.
 
Influence is what role model is to struggler
Best friend is what book is to reader
Best adviser is what mother is to child
Client is what tourist is to guide.
 
Help is what neighbor is to neighbor
Idol is what father is to children
Sweet nuisance is what brother is to sister
Companion is what mistress is to mister.
 
Enemy is what rust is to iron
Strength is what pillar is to building
Fear is what God is to holy people
Boss is what Akbar is to Birbal.
 
Rattrap is what world is to poor
Loyal is what rain is to ocean
Cheat is what fox is to crow
Adaptability is what forehead is to eyebrow.
 
Life is what fiction is to Shakespeare
Desire is what win is to competitor
Intelligence is what invention is to inventor
Proud is what student's success is to mentor.
 
Detective is what brain is to man
Encouragement is what marks is to student
Happiness is what toffee is to kid
Protection is what surety is to bid.
 
Imagination is what creativity is to artist
Freedom is what expansion is to air
Obsession is what gadgets is to tech savy
And hobby is what poetry is to me.
 
SHOULDN'T WE BE PROUD OF INDIA?
 
In the middle of the universe
Amid the crooked rulers curse
Emerged a talented world
That, eventually, shot various birds
Which were at the top of the world
Proved achievements to be its natural mania
So, shouldn't we be proud of India?
 
Not more than 66 years has passed by,
Since India saw tricolour freely fly
But our scientists after working for hours
Succeeded in sending a rocket on a mission to Mars
Too early for any country to achieve this feat
In aeronautics, it leapt in front from back seat.
 
Twice, it has won cricket world cup
Is proud mother of 5 times chess champion
5 times world boxing champ also born here
Gold medals in kabaddi, something it never shares
Medals in big tournaments have added feathers to its hat
Is at the top in cricket's oldest format
So, shouldn't we be proud of this hungry rat?
 
Has touched various milestones in literature
Is home to countless living creatures
No restriction on mass media here
Has developed best strategies to combat loss in shares
Its cinema has also grown enough
On international platform, its presence is tough
So, shouldn't we be proud of the knowledge of this buff?
 
World class doctors are its citizens
Skillful engineers, also its denizens
Is not behind anyone in commerce sector
To attract talented bees, provide sufficient nectar
Has enough room for everyone's views
A place from where tycoons grew
So, shouldn't we be proud of this director with hardworking crew?
 
Its culture is a thing of beauty
Responsible inhabitants know their rightful duty
Its languages are very well furnished
Have unique aura, which everyone want to cherish
Children are taught to respect elders here
How to be modest and polite and how to care
So shouldn't we be proud of this country with strongest chair?
 
HOW ARE WOMEN TREATED?
 
Throughout the struggling life span
Girls are overshadowed by man
Being born in the patriarchal society
It's difficult for them to detach discrimination moiety.
 
Since the ancient times in the world
Women are being considered as pearls
Treated like a precious stone
Shaped according to man's wants.
 
Sati system, a scar in history
Wives made responsible for husband's death, still a mystery
Had to pay for what wasn't their fault
Were buried aside the husband in family vault.
 
The managers of society are harassed for dowry
The gift of God beaten brutally for petty cowries
Sometimes are even set on fire
Are these sadists not equivalent to General Dyer?
 
Being abused for giving birth to a girl
Blamed for that bed to which she isn't the nurse
Oh Lord! Who will make these unscientific people aware
That child's gender is that to which father is the mayor.
 
Female foeticide, a serious problem till date
People don't realise, to a new life, women are opening gate
If females are murdered at infancy
Who will help this world grow and diversify, I fancy.
 
Physical constriction and molestation, proliferating crimes against girls
Insane using the innocence hidden in curls
Making their strongest attire, the weakest clothing
Are alive, courtesy this ability of women, they are forgetting.
 
Life isn't stopped if dew drops don't show up
No one is harmed if rainbow doesn't turn up
People will manage if cock will not crow
But life will not persist if women aren't nourished after being sown.
 
Winters can be at its peak without the appearance of fog
Humanity can prevail even if everyone become rogue
But human race will become extinct without females
As this kind of poison, man can never tolerate.
 
Remember! These dark clouds shouldn't depress you at all
Rather, for you, it should be an emergency call
Should encourage you to evacuate ill before flood comes
So that flowers can blossom in the spring and soil be devoid of scum.
 
 
EVERYTIME IT DO HAPPEN
 
Every time we stand in our life
Two ways descend from there
One takes you towards your goal
Other, no one can predict where
 
Every time we come across people
Two kinds of them prevail on Earth
 One helps you achieve something big
And other, works to turn you into dirt
 
Every time we want to live to the fullest
Two options arise before us
One provides enjoyment while being in limits
And other, makes you board notorious bus.
 
Every time we decides to trust somebody
Two thoughts come up in our worrying mind
One is that the other person may deceive you
And other, benevolence is still alive, though is hard to find.
 
Every time we bid goodbye to someone very close
Two conflicting notions emerge from somewhere
One makes you happy for the other man is starting afresh
And other, makes you gloomy for he is leaving from here.
 
Every time we are called by someone needy
Two methods could be used for his help
One is to be sympathetic towards him
And other, we empathise to help better, this kelp.
 
Every time we try to do something new
Two contrasting souls, like the walls, stand in front
One makes you optimistic about your dreams
And other, drags you far off and you bear its brunt.
 
Every time we are bothered by cyclones of thoughts
Whatever be the situation in our life
Like, what to do and what not to
To adopt the sharp, or blunt end of knife.

         
Edited by HimaniCID - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
These were few of many poems that I have writtenπŸ˜ƒ. Please don't forget to give your feedbacks, both negative and positive welcomed😊 Edited by HimaniCID - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
OMG ... ⭐️ kya poems hai Himani πŸ‘πŸ‘... kya baat hai ... β­οΈ
tumhe to ek poet hona chahiye tha ... πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ
Very Good ...  πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘ bahut he achi poems hain β­οΈπŸ‘β­οΈ... especiaaly wo corruption wali to mindblowing ... β­οΈ
Posted: 9 years ago
Really outstanding work, Himani. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ β­οΈ Each of the poems is superb! The quality of writing, similes and metaphors and especially the expression of content is truly superb. The penultimate poem is especially amazing. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Kudos! Keep it up and looking forward to many more.
Posted: 9 years ago
Many many congratulations first of all Himani.. All the poems are examples of your wonderful writing skill.. Lovely concepts and presentation.. Looking forward for more from you.. Keep it up.
Posted: 9 years ago
mindblowing work himaniβ­οΈβ­οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘..loved all the poems πŸ˜ƒ...u r really very talented..
Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...Himani...πŸ˜›
very nice poems.πŸ‘...OMG...you are so amazing in writing poems...excellent...πŸ‘πŸΌ liked ur all poems...really fantastic and so true...πŸ˜›
good job dear.πŸ‘...keep it up...πŸ˜› πŸ‘πŸΌ
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by DemonStar


Really outstanding work, Himani. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ β­οΈ Each of the poems is superb! The quality of writing, similes and metaphors and especially the expression of content is truly superb. The penultimate poem is especially amazing. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Kudos! Keep it up and looking forward to many more.

Just what I wanted to say πŸ˜ƒ

Looking forward to many more of your wonderful work! β­οΈ
Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful poems Himani πŸ‘ Edited by debasree04 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely poems himani di
Wonderfully executed with beautiful concepts and imagination power
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