OS - Is it ever too late? last part pg5 - Page 5

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by .pia_12.


Superb update!!!

Thanks!
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by bpatil3


Happy ending.
Finally Ram realized what he want in life and priya is so happy by his decision.
Life is not about just earning money, making name , fame but to cherish and enjoy  what god has given to us with our loved ones. At the end of the day these bring smile on our face nothing else.

Truly fabulous writing, enjoyed thoroughly.
Yes, I truly believe in spending time with the family too. We can live with spending or making a little less but our true happiness comes from the ones we love😃
Posted: 9 years ago
very nice OS...
pls write more...
thnks for the pm...😊
Posted: 9 years ago
do continue writing the awewome stories on RayaEdited by aanchaltulshan - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
i loved every bit of the storyEdited by aanchaltulshan - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by DiehardRaYafan




Thanks for your lovely comments! Even though it was pretty obvious that RaYa were husband and wife...I am glad that I was able to keep some level of suspense😃

Yeah it was pretty obvious
but you have presented the story with so much suspense that it seems both Raya are unknow to each other and living separate life with their family
Posted: 9 years ago
This is a lovely OS and so very true.
We should not wait for the right moment but live every moment to the fullest. Just loved it.
Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful writing
read all the three parts...good suspense
Posted: 9 years ago
aweme...
sorry for late...
thnx for pm
Posted: 9 years ago

your stories r always delight to read will gonna read this one too...

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