FF|| Raaz- The secret(Completed||)

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Hi everyone😊,this is Jess here, well I've made an FF on Saras and Kumud. I wanted to write it before but I was a little busy so I did it now.



My other work on Samud:




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Posted: 9 years ago
i've commented there.but plz post the ff in this thread if u want d readers 2 c it
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I had posted it i the fan fic section but I'm posting it here so that'll it be easier for you.

     Raaz- The secret

What happens when a group of students in archaeology decide to dig the secrets of an old mansion which is abandonned and is totally isolated from  civilization? What happens when strange things begin to occur? 

Character sketch:


Saras Vyas: 23 years old, student in archaeology 


Kumud Desai: 20 years old, student in archaeology



Danny Vyas: 22 years old, Saras's brother, student in archaeology



Anushka Gupta: 22 years old, Kumud's best friend, student in archaeology




Sunny Malhotra: 21 years old, student in archaeology, hates Saras



                                            More characters coming...


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Introduction - page 1
Part 1 - page 2
Part 2 - page 3
Part 3 - page 4
Part 4 - page 6
Part 5 - page 8
Part 6 - page 9
Part 7 - page 10
Part 8 - page 12
Part 9 - page 13
Part 10 - page 14
Part 11 - page 16
Part 12 - page 17
Part 13 - page 19
Part 14 - page 20 
Part 15 A - page 22
Part 15 B - page 24
Part 16 - page 25
Part 17 - page 27
Part 18 A - page 29
Part 18 B - page 33
Part 19 - page 36
Part 20 A - page 37
Part 20 B- page 39
Part 21 - page 40
Preview to part 22 - page 43
Part 22 - page 44
Part 23 - page 47
Part 24- Page 47
Part 25- page 47
Thank you + final note - page 47
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Introduction:


A bus is shown going towards a forest. Inside, a heeled shoe had been thrown at a guy but he dodged and it it he window.

"What is wrong with you?"
"You dirty dog! You threw my sunglasses outside."

It was Kumud and Saras fighting. They had been enemies since the day they met. Kumud was sitting in the cafeteria with Anushka and Sunny. They were talking when suddenly, Kumud felt something hot and sticky on her, she touched her hair and found noodles there. She was angry and saw the person who did that. It was Saras.

"You Jerk!"
"Hey, calm down girl, I slipped, right Dan?" He looked at his brother who nodded.
"Slipped,My foot!" she gave him a tight slap.
"How dare you raise your hand on me!" He looked at her in anger. Everyone present there stared at them. She was scared when she saw anger in his eyes. Fortunately for her, Sunny came to her rescue.
"Come on, get out of here now."
Saras got out of there furiously accompanied by Danny.

Since then, they had been fighting and on top of that, they were both students in archaeology. They had a project to do on abandoned regions. They were allocated an old mansion which was far from the city or any village. They were heading there.


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samud fighting like hell...this is so diff.nice
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

samud fighting like hell...this is so diff.nice

Yeah, I wanted to try something different😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok when is the update, a young Saras is something new I am looking forward to. Thanks for the change in characterisation.
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Originally posted by: kiranpreethee

Ok when is the update, a young Saras is something new I am looking forward to. Thanks for the change in characterisation.

The next update is tonight, I guess😊 Thnx for commenting.
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Very nice update 👏 👏 waiting for more... 😳