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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Kusum04

Very nice update 👏 👏 waiting for more... 😳

Thnx for commenting😳
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Part 1:

Saras, Kumud, Anushka, Danny and Sunny were in the bus that was heading to the abandoned house. Saras and Danny were talking loudly and that irritated Kumud. She went to him," Does everyone need to hear your useless talks?"

"I didn't tell you to hear them."he said with a smirk.
"Well, unfortunately, I'm forced to."
"Good for you."
"You're such a..."
"Excuse me,"
"You're not excused, you b*stard." This was the limit, she had called him a b*stard. He removed her Gucci sunglasses that was placed on her head and threw it outside.

"How dare you do that? Do you know how much it costs?"
'No I don't."

The next thing that happened, a heeled shoe came flying in his direction. Luckily, he managed to move and his face was saved.

"What is wrong with you?"
"You dirty dog, you threw my sunglasses outside."
"You were the one who started it."
"But you were the one who was talking so loudly."
"B*tch"
"What did you call me?"
"Are you deaf? I just called you a b*tch."
"You scoundrel, I'll not spare you."

Anushka and Danny had to intervene before things start to get out of hand.

"Guys, stop it please, Kumud come let's go."
"Yeah bro, leave it."

Sunny all this while was sitting at the back completely and was listening to music.

After a while, the bus stopped.
"What happened?"
"Don't know Dan, I'll ask the driver."

Saras came back," Bad news guys, there is a problem with the engine, we'll have to walk from here."

"What? Walk and that to in a place infested with mosquitoes. No please." Kumud went back to her place.
"Kumud, we have no other options"
"But Anu, why can't we wait here till tomorrow and inform the administration that our bus broke down."

Saras burst out laughing.

"What happened now?
"You are so smart, what do you think? Didn't I try to do it before? There is no network over here."
"Great, this is going to be worse than hell."

Sunny came to Kumud,"Don't worry, I'll be with you."
"Thanks Sunny."

All of them got out of the bus and started walking. 
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After 1 hour, all of them were tired and found a place to rest under the shade of a tree in the vicinity.

"Oh God, I've never walked so much in my life." Kumud said as she sat near the trunk of the tree.

"Hey that's actually good you know. You can lose weight."
"What are you trying to say? That I'm fat." she said with shock on her face.
"You are saying it yourself."

"Bro, at least stop fighting here, we don't know in which direction we need to go."

"I do have a map with me." A familiar voice said.
"Sunny, couldn't you tell it before!" Saras was frustrated,but he kept his calm as he was already tired.
"Saras, I forgot." He said casually.


"Sunny, how much more do we need to walk?" Kumud asked as she walked towards Sunny.

"1 km more, Kumud." he put his arms around her and led her away from Saras.

"Danny, I swear I'll kill that guy, what does he think of himself."
"Calm down, bro"

After resting, they set back walking. On the way, Kumud started feeling dizzy.

"Kumud, what happened?"
"I'm not feeling good Anu."

"Miss Attitude is back."Saras said sarcastically.

"Saras!"
"What Anushka, she never misses a chance to throw her tantrums."

Kumud held her head but the heat was killing her and she fainted. But before she hit the ground, Saras held her in his arms. For the first time, he saw her closely, he looked at her face, she looked so innocent...

Sunny tapped him on his shoulder. He took Kumud from his arms. Anushka saw the tension,"Guys, we should get going otherwise, we'll be stuck in the dark.


The update is short but next time I promise it'll be longer. Do not forget to like and leave your comments.😊

Love Jess❤️






 



Edited by Jess2014 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
samud fight...kumud fainting,saras holding her n watching her close was so beautiful
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Hey Jess😃 This is too good👏 👏 keep up the good work dear😃
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very nice, looking forward to next update 😊
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Fantastic update
looking forward for the next part
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

samud fight...kumud fainting,saras holding her n watching her close was so beautiful

Hi😊 Glad to know that you liked it😃
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Originally posted by: jyo_loveurlife

Hey Jess😃 This is too good👏 👏 keep up the good work dear😃

Jyo🤗 thanks for commenting 😳
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very nice, looking forward to next update 😊

Hey,
thanks for commenting😳
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Originally posted by: mehhak

Fantastic update

looking forward for the next part

Hi😊
Next update is tonight😃