Veeba FF "Sher ki Sherni" Pt-11,pg-34

Lovely_KaranIka

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi guys!! Im here with my another Veeba FF.. 😉i hope u all will like it...😳plz read and give ur comments...😃 sorry for mistakes.
Love u all..!!!!!!🤗🤗
Link to my other Veeba FF "Love you more then my life"https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4102396

Part 1
Baldev was going to his room to sleep after dinner, when Bansuri stops him to tell him something

Bansuri; baldev puttar ruk, menu tere nal aik zaruri gal karni hai
Baldev; beeji subha kar lena abhi menu bari neend aa rahi hai

Balwant; oye beth ja idhar eh gal abhi krna zaruri hai

Bansuri; Baldev puttar hum ne tere liye aik larki dekhi hai, buhat hi sundar hai sher me rehti hai vidaish se parh kar ai hai.. tum dono ki jodi bari changi lage gi

Baldev; eh ki hai beeji.. menu nahi karni koi shadi, menu jab karni ho gi mein bta dun ga ap nu

Balwant; hum tujhe bta rahe hain tujh se poch nahi rahe.. sara din doston ke sath phirta rehta hai shadi k bad zemedari ka ehsas to ho ga tenu

Baldev; lekin papaji mein abhi shadi nahi karn chahta mein wo vee..

he suddenly stops what he was about to say, he was saying he loves veera, but she dont love him..and she told this many times that she dont love me then why im doing this for her..and i know she will never fall in love with me then why im waiting for her..

Bansuri; baldev kithe kho gaya? bol ki keh raha tha.. tu ki??

Baldev; haan.. wo beeji..theek hai mein eh shadi krne vaste tiyaar hun

Balwant and Bansuri are very happy after hearing this

Balwant; ab tu koi kam bhi shuru kar le..shadi ke bad to tenu koi kam karna pare ga apne doston de nal phle di trhan ghoom phir nahi sakda tu..buhat bhari zemedari hoti hai shadi..

Bladev; theek hai papaji jaisa ap logo ko theek lage mein wohi karon ga

Bansuri; mein larki walo ko abhi phone kar k bata deti hun.. aur kal hi bola kar rishta paka kar lete hain..
Balwant; haan theek hai bansuriji ap unko phone par bta do sab kuch

Bansuri; baldev puttar mein buhat khush hun teri haan sun ke.. dekhna tum dono ki jodi kinni soni lage gi

Baldev was lost in his thoughts; kahin mein ne jaldi me galat faisla to nahi kya na? lekin veera menu pyar nahi karti aur kabhi kare gi bhi nahi us ne khud menu kaha hai...lekin mein veera k elawa kisi aur de nal pyaar nahi kar sakta...jo bhi ho ga dekha jaye ga ab mein beeji,papaji ki khushiyan nahi chen sakta, dono buhat khush hain mere is faisle nal...

Baldev; beeji, papaji ab mein sone ja raha hun
Bansuri; haan puttar tu ja so ja,neend aa rahi hogi na tenu

Balwant; aur subha tu ghar par hi rehna, larki waly aa rahe hain tera rishta paka karne..

Baldev; theek hai papaji

and he left

Balwant; bansuriji ap wo ratan parjai ko bhi phone kar k subha bola lo, rishte ki bat karte wakt wo sab bhi hun ge to changa rahe ga

Bansuri; theek hai bola lun gi

Balwant; changa..

next morning in Veera's house,everyone was having breakfast

Chaiji; chote chann tu bhi aj kheton se jaldi kam khatam kar Balwant k ghar aa jana, hum sab bas abhi nikal jayen ge

Ranvi; theek hai chaiji

Veera; chaiji tayaji ke ghar kyun jana hai?

Ratan; wo rat ko un k ghar se phone aya tha, unho ne baldev k liye larki dekhi hai aj wo log rishta paka kar rahe hain to hum sab nu bhi bolaya tha

Veera was shocked,she can't believe what she hear

Veera; ki? baldev ka rishta... lekin ye sab achanak se.. aise kaise ho sakta hai

Gunjan; ki matlab hai tera veera? kyun nahi ho sakta.. mere veerji itne ache hain koi bhi larki shadi vaste haan kar de gi

Veera; nahi bhabhi wo mera matlab ye nahi tha..

Ratan; veera tu bhi tiyaar ho jana.. tu bhi chalna humare sath

Veera; ji beeji

she thought in her mind; baldev is rishte vaste maan kaise gaya..wo bhi aise itni jaldi koi to bat hai,wo to mujh se piyar karta hai na to phr kisi aur se.. ye mein ki soch rahi hun wo mujh se piyaar karta hai mein nahi aur wo jo marzi kare menu ki.. chahe kal hi us larki se shadi kar le mujhe koi fark nahi parta...lekin...baldev kyun kar rha hai us larki se shadi...

mein eh sab soch hi kyun rahi hun mujhe to us se koi fark nahi parta na..ya phr mujhe...fark parta hai..

So guys how was it?😃plz like and comment...😳

Index:

Part 1 - page 1
Part 2 - Page 4
Part 3 - Page 7
Part 4 - Page 9

Part 5 - Page 11

Part 6 - Page 15

Part 7 - Page 18

Part 8 - Page 22
part 9 - page 26

part 10 - page 30
part 11 - Page 34

Edited by Lovelyvb - 8 years ago

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sanjanabaldev

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Posted: 9 years ago

my heart broke!!!!!!!!!! i cant even imagine baldev saying yes even though veera does not love him...but very nice...pls continue today itself...iam shattered!!!!😉

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Lovely_KaranIka

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjanatamannah
my heart broke!!!!!!!!!! i cant even imagine baldev saying yes even though veera does not love him...but very nice...pls continue today itself...iam shattered!!!!😉

even i cant imagine but i have very awesome twist 😆 so he has to say yes to bring that twist 😉 i'll update it if i get more comments otherwise i may stop it here😭

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sanjanabaldev

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Posted: 9 years ago

very nice...iam dyeing to read more...

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Lovely_KaranIka

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjanatamannah
very nice...iam dyeing to read more...

😆 thank u sooo much 🤗

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Roshini Mathews

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Posted: 9 years ago

Baldev saying yes to marriage to another girl...not even in my wildest dream😭...please update the next part soonnn...can't bear this even if it is temporary...

Good plot and very good start Lovely...thank u for the pm🤗

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Lovely_KaranIka

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet
Baldev saying yes to marriage to another girl...not even in my wildest dream😭...please update the next part soonnn...can't bear this even if it is temporary...
Good plot and very good start Lovely...thank u for the pm🤗

same here Roshini di... but im die hard fan of veeba i'll never separate them.. 😉 i have an awesome twist and im sure u all will love it..😃 😛

thank u so much for liking it 🤗 love u!!🤗😳

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