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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: a4aarsh

excites 4 their meeting continue soon



Thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan

awesome updateπŸ˜ƒ and thanks for the pm .



thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyo_Veebafan

Lovely update, thanks for the pm 😊 continue sion!



thank you so much nd wlcm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Firstly thanks a lot to each person who commented and liked my last update also appreciate my work, also thnx who are silent reader of my OS πŸ€— πŸ˜³ Now sorry guyz for to much late update because I am to much busy with my studies that's why I can't update πŸ˜­ enjoy nxt part hope u all like it too sorry for mistakes plz do comment and hit like u also openly criticise me πŸ˜Š πŸ˜• 

Part 8: 

Baldev left home in anger because he also want to met with veera but due to bansuri they both can't meet each other. He wants to meet with her but no one is letting him to meet her, when he pass on tea shop where usually he sit with his friends jaggi and billa also there and they both saw baldev and call him 

Jaggi: pra ji!!! pra ji!!! kithy ja rhy ho itni har bari m? ap sher sy wapis agay aur hum sy mily b nahi itny din ho gay ap k sath chay piay howy ao betho chay pitay hain 
Baldev: tery pas chay pinay k elawa koi kam nahi ki jb dekho chay piny betha rhyta hai aur billa tu b is k sath hota hai 

Billa and jaggi look each other and they can't understand what happened with baldev 

Billa: pra ji ki ho gya hai? hum sy koi galti ho gai ki jo ap hum sy itna gussa ho rhy ho? 

Baldev realise his mistake 

Baldev: nahi aysi koi gal nahi hai ao chay pitay hain 

They both look happy and talk with baldev but he is not interested to talk with him he continouslly think about veera. When he finished his tea he make an excuse and left, now he is very excited soon a pind guyz look baldev 

Man: oye baldev puttar kaisa hai tu?
Baldev: theek hun chacha ji (make a sad face)
Man: aur suna a gya sher sy?
Baldev: nahi meri rooh khari hai (in low voice)
Man: ki? kya kha puttar tu ny?
Baldev: kuch nahi chacha ji m zra jaldi m hun ap sy phr bat ho gi 
Man: changa puttar apny papa ji ko namasty khyna meri trf sy 

Baldev nodded and left, he reached in veera's house soon where gunjan welcome him she look surprise to saw baldev 

Gunjan: veer ji ap yahan kaisy?
Baldev: kiun m ithy nahi a skta 
Gunjan: nahi veer ji mera wo mtlb nahi tha 
Baldev: to phr tera mtlb ki tha tujh sy milny wasty aya hun 
Gunjan: wo to m ap sy subha hi mil ai thi
Baldev: haan m yahan sy guzar rha tha socha tujh sy milta jaun m ny kuch glt kiya kya? 
Gunjan: nahi nahi veer ji kuch glt nahi kiya 
Baldev: (look here and there) gunjan ghar m akyli hai ki koi nazar nahi a rha?
Gunjan: nahi veera hai na ghar m baqi chai ji gurdwary gai hain beji aur ranvi khyton (fields) m gay hain 
Baldev: (a cute smile spread on baldev's face to listen veera's name) acha veera b khain nazar nahi a rahi?
Gunjan: wo apny kamry m hai pta nahi subha kha gai thi aur jb sy ai hai kamry m mun phola kr bethi hoi hai
Baldev: acha m ja rha hun koi kam yad a gya hai 
Gunjan: veer ji! veer ji! suno to 

But it to late baldev already left 

IN VEERA'S ROOM 

Veera look so upset and sad she looks in mirror and talking to herself 

Veera: aj m baldev k itny pas thi phr b wo mery sath nahi tha 

Someone enter in her room from window veera look so sared and she pick a vase. He is none other than sher of pritampura heartbeat of all pp girls, he put his hand on veera's mouth she is almost shouted but baldev stop her. 

Veera: oye tu ithy kya krny aya hai ja mery kamry sy kisi ny dekh liya to kya ho ga? (Plzzz baldev mery khyny sy b mat jana abhi to tujy sahi sy dekha b nahi hai talks with her soul) 
Baldev lay down on veera's bed 

Veera: teri himat kaisy hoi mery bed pr laitny ki?
Baldev: waisy hi jaisy teri himat hoi thi mujh sy na mil kr any ki
Veera: wo to tu so rha tha kaisy milti tujh sy?
Baldev: menu utha b to skti thi na 
Veera: tu yeh sb chor aur ja ab yahan sy koi b dekh ly ga tujy aur kya sochy ga
Baldev: yehi sochy ga k 2 dost batain kr rhy hai
Veera: tu ja na m tujh sy bad m milun gi 

Veera's mobile rang, she pick up the phone

Veera: hie amrit! m theek hun tu kysi hai?
Amrit: m b theek hun m ny tujhe college ki reunion party k btany k liay call ki thi aur us m sb apny partners k sath a rhy hain tu b kisi sath ana warna wo sb tera mazaq urayn gy 
Veera: acha theek hai m phone rakhti hun bye 

Veera look tensed, baldev saw him 

Baldev: ki hoya veera tu perishan kiun ho gai?
Veera: wo mery college m reunion party hai aur us m kisi larky k sath jana hai ab kon jay ga mery sath? wo soch rahi hun

Veera thinks for few minutes and talks again with baldev 

Veera: tu chaly ga mery meri reunion party m partner bn kr?
Baldev: m aur teri reonion party m?
Veera: oye reonion nahi reunion hota hai tu apni dost ki madad nahi kry ga kya? 

Veera makes sad face which melt baldev soon he thinks 

Baldev: acha theek hai m chalun ga ab tu khush ho ja aysa mun mat bna
Veera: thank u baldev and hugged baldev tu sach m boht acha hai chal ab ja mery kamry sy aur ainda mery kamry  aisy mat ana 
Baldev: theek hai nahi aun ga agli bar dekhna tu hi ay gi mery kamry m wo khirki (window) sy 

Baldev left and veera look so happy to meet with baldev and baldev also agree to go with her in reunion party 
 
Veera: baldev pagal hai m kabhi b aisy us k kamry m nahi jaun gi yeh impossible hai 

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update Tfs for pm πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update, thanks for the pm😊
Loved that Baldev is going to be Veera's partner ... 😳 looking forward for the next chapter.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update πŸ˜ƒ thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome update Tfs for pm πŸ‘πŸΌ

 
Thank u so much dear πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyo_Veebafan

Very nice update, thanks for the pm😊
Loved that Baldev is going to be Veera's partner ... 😳 looking forward for the next chapter.

 
Thank u so much for like my work πŸ˜Š ASAP I update nxt part where baldev is going with veera as her partner πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan

nice update πŸ˜ƒ thanks for the pm.

 
Thank u so much πŸ˜Š