Veeba OS "Happy Shappy wali Friendship to Love" - Page 3

Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for those who comment on my OS πŸ˜Š hope so you all like and comment on this part πŸ˜› plz do like and comment in this part otherwise I think stop writing  waiting for your comments and sorry for my mistakes πŸ˜³ 
Part 4: 
Next morning veera woke up with noise of drums, she can't understand who beat drum in early morning 

Veera: itni subha subha kon pagal ho gya hai jo dhol bja rha hai sony b nahi dyty aram sy aik to agy hi veer ji ki tention ki waja sy rat ko late soi thi k unki shadi kaisy ho gi gunjan didi sy aur ab itni subha yeh dhol ki awaz ny utha dita dekhun to sahi k kon pagal ho rha hai subha subha 

veera go in her room's window and look down, she shock to saw baldev and her family are here and baldev were dancing with her friends but why they all come to her house she can't understand the situation 

Chai ji: oy balwant tm log itny gajy bajy k sath kya kr rhy ho humary ghar wich?
Balwant: chai ji phealy andr any k nahi khao gi?
Ratan: ao ao pra ji andar ao betho 

Everyone settle veera also come she look at baldev but he can't notice her 

Chai ji: balwant ab to bta dy k tm sb yahan kaisy ay ho? aur gunjan nu akyly ghar kiun chor ay ho?
Balwant: ab chai ji us k rishty ki bat krny ay hain to usy kaisy sath la skty thy 
Chai ji: ki khy rha hai gunjan k rishta pr kis k sath?

Ranvi was look disturb to listen this 

Balwant: chai ji hum chaty hain k ranvi  aur gunjan ki shadi kr dyn
Ratan: ki kya kha ap ny pra ji?
Balwant: wohi parjai ji jo ap ny suna hai kiun k ranvi aur gunjan aik dosry nal piyar krty hain aur yeh gal humy baldev ny btai hai aur usy veera ny
Chai ji: to sach khy rha choty chan to gunjan nal piyar krta hai?

Ranvi start blushing and shying he looks at veera she smiling veera look at baldev but he can't this thing is irritating to veera why baldev can't see him 

Balwant: chai ji ranvi k sharmany k mtlb to samjh gi hon gi ap ab ap humy b bta do k apko yeh rishty manzor hai k nahi?
Ratan: kaisi galan kr rhy hain pra ji ap humy yeh rishta manzor hai veera ja aur ja kr sb k mun mitha karwa 

Veera nooded and she gives sweets to everyone she also give it to baldev 

Veera: mujhe tujh sy bat krni hai zra chal mery sath uper kamry wich 

Baldev come in veera's room 

Baldev: haan bol veera kya khyna hai? (In anger)
Veera: wo menu pochna tha k to is sb k liay kaisy man gya? to yeh sb nahi hony dyny wala tha na? phr kiun...

** Flash back start ** 
Baldev come home in anger 

Baldev: bi ji gunjan kha hai?
Bansuri: ki hoya wo uper apny kmry m hai

Baldev come in gunjan's room full anger where gunjan talking with himself 

Gunjan: ab m ki kran aik yeh ranvi samjhta kiun nahi hai bta dy na sb ko k hum aik dojy nal piyar krty hain aur shadi krna chaty hain agr ranvi to mujhe na mila na to m sach m mar jaun gi 

Gunjan look in mirror, she saw baldev and stop her talk 

Gunjan: veer ji ap ithy kaisy? aur ap ny...
Baldev: (cuts gunjan) haan m ithy aur to yeh sb kya bol rahi thi abhi to us lambu mera mtlb hai ranvi nal piyar krti hai?
Gunjan: haan veer ji ap ny jo suna wo sach hai m ranvi nal boht piyar krti un apni jan sy b ziyada aur agr wo menu na mila na to m mar jaun gi veer ji (gunjan start crying baldev stop him)
Baldev: nahi gunjan m tery phealy piyar ko tery sy dor nahi hony dun ga kiun k m nahi chata to b meri trhan tarpy 

Gunjan understand why baldev say this veera is responsible for this 

** Flash back ends ** 

Baldev: 

Baldev: bs isi waja sy m man gya kiun k m nahi chata k meri trhan meri behn b akyly m apna pheala piyar na milny ki waja sy roay veera to ny sach kha tha k jb pheala piyar nahi milta to ankh sy anso nahi niklty dil b rta hai jo kisi ko nazar nahi ata... zindagi ka pehla pyaar kon bhulata hai, ye pehli bar hota h jb koi kisi ko khud se barh kar chahta h...
Uski pasand, uski khwahish me khud ko bhul jata h, akele mein uska naam likh likh kar mitata h...
Baat karne se phle sochta h, kya kehna h, baat hone ke baad fir kuch kehna reh jata h, hota h itna khoobsurat pehla pyar pr mujhe mera pheala piyar nahi mila balky aik boht wada dhoka mila ab m kisi k nal piyar nahi kr paun ga kabhi b kabhi nahi 

Baldev eyes are filled with lots of tears he can't hide her tears from veera, he wiped her tears

Veera: baldev ruk meri gal to sun aik bar 

Baldev go down and join everyone, veera followed him and stop to saw baldev look so happy he hide her sorrow from everyone but veera knew he didn't happy by heart 

Veera: jany anjany m baldev nal m ny boht ziyada glt kita hai mujhe aisa nahi krna chaiy tha (she look baldev) sorry baldev menu maaf kr dyna mujhe yeh nahi krna chaiy tha 

Sorry for long and late update πŸ˜• if I don't get enought comments on this part I stop writing plz tell me I write furture or not waiting for your replies πŸ˜­ 
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice post  .i like it . thaks .

gd job keep it up πŸ˜‰
Edited by -Babli- - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
At first no one can think that veera will choose baldev .πŸ˜†

 but he is a cute gye . πŸ˜›
Posted: 9 years ago
its super!!!!please continue soon.ur good but just be careful with the spellings and grammar...u rock!!!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜†
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by -Babli-


Nice post  .i like it . thaks .

gd job keep it up πŸ˜‰
 
Thank a lot dear 
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by -Babli-


Nice post  .i like it . thaks .

gd job keep it up πŸ˜‰
 
Thank a lot dear πŸ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by -Babli-


At first no one can think that veera will choose baldev .πŸ˜†

 but he is a cute gye . πŸ˜›
 
Yup you right no one can think this but our baldev is so cute that's why veera has no option πŸ˜› πŸ˜†
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by sanjanatamannah


its super!!!!please continue soon.ur good but just be careful with the spellings and grammar...u rock!!!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜†
 
Thank you so much πŸ˜Š and I try to solve my mistakes πŸ˜•πŸ˜‰
Posted: 9 years ago
Have u hard that oil song that  ranveer was force to sing .it very funny one  πŸ˜ƒ .
but at the same time i was very upset  and feeling very bad for ranveer😭.
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by -Babli-


Have u hard that oil song that  ranveer was force to sing .it very funny one  πŸ˜ƒ .
but at the same time i was very upset  and feeling very bad for ranveer😭.
 
Yup u right babli that oil song was to funny πŸ˜† i also feel bad for ranvi πŸ˜­

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