Veeba OS "Happy Shappy wali Friendship to Love" - Page 5

Posted: 9 years ago
πŸ‘I just read ur all Os part i must say all parts interesting nd amazing yaarπŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by nedhvik-91


πŸ‘I just read ur all Os part i must say all parts interesting nd amazing yaarπŸ‘πŸ‘
do continueπŸ˜ƒ

Thank you so much to read my all parts πŸ˜Š thanks for appreciating my work dear πŸ€—
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by nedhvik-91


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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely os πŸ‘ plz continue.
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by TeriGalliyan


lovely os πŸ‘ plz continue.
 
Thank you so much πŸ˜Š yup I continue it soon πŸ˜‰
Posted: 9 years ago
 nice one,do continue 
Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for those who comment on my OS luv u all πŸ˜Š πŸ˜ƒ this part is your birthday gift Sanjanatamannah sorry for to late gift πŸ˜³ hope u all like this part 
Part 5: 

Everything was done very perfectly in ranvi and gunjan marriage at bedai of gunjan everyone was getting emotional gunjan say bye and meet everyone baldev was not here 

Ganjan: papa ji yeh veer ji kha hai mujhe un sy milna hai 
Balwant: wo puttar tujy to pta hi hai k baldev jb b udas hota hai yun hi gaib ho jata hai wo apny anso sb sy chupata hai 
Gunjan: pr mujhe un sy milna hai m un sy mily bagair nahi jaun gi 
Balwant: puttar to ruk m dekhta hun usy 
Gunjan: acha papa ji m intzar krti hun 

Veera calling baldev but his cell phone was switch off 

Veera: pta nahi yeh baldev kha chala gya hai ab m hi dhondti hun aisy b koi krta hai kya 

Veera saw baldev, he was sitting alone and look so sad 

Veera: baldev! baldev to ithy aram nal beta haai aur andr sb tujy dhond rhy hain teri waja sy bedai ruki hoi hai 

He wiped his tears and look 

Baldev: to chal andr m ata hun kuch dair tk 
Veera: kuch dair kiun jaldi a na sb intzar kr rhy hain tera 
Baldev: acha na to chal m a rha hun 
Veera: acha theek hai pr jaldi a jana

Baldev nooded and veera looked at baldev who looks so sad because of gunjan's bedai but she didn't say anything and left 

Gunjan: veer ji ap kithy thy m ap k intzar kr rahi thi
Baldev: wo... wo gunjan kuch zarori kam tha bs is liay chala gya tha 

Veera look at baldev and baldev also look veera, and avoiding to look veera because veera knew baldev is not busy 

Balwant: acha ab tm dono behn bahi bs kro ratan parjai ji tusi log niklo ab boht waqt ho gya hai 
Ratan: ji para ji ab hum chalty hain humy ijazat dyn 

Gunjan meet baldev, baldev get emotional he can't stop her tears 

Baldev: gunjan apna khiyal rakhna aur tujy kabhi b kisi b waqt kisi chiz ki b zarurat ho mujhe bula lyna m hamesha tery sath rahun ga ranvi m ny aj tujhe apni sb sy qeemati chiz dy di hai is k hamesha khiyal rkhna koi glti ho jay to maaf kr dyna chay menu saza dy di 
Ranvi: baldev kysi galan kr rha hai m kiun dyny lga tujy saza chad in baton ko ab na humy dair ho rahi hai hum chalty hain 
Baldev: haan to sahi khy rha hai 

Everyone was gone baldev sitting in his room thinking about gunjan when suddenly someone come in his room from window 

Baldev: kon hai? oy veera to ithy ki kr rahi hai wo b mery kmry wich to is trhan kiun ai hai wo b itny rat gay?
Veera: to aram naal nahi bol skta ki sb ko pta chal jay ga k m tery kamry wich hun 
Baldev: to ab menu ay bta k to idr ki kr rahi hai wo b itny rat gay meri behn to theek hai na? (Baldev get tensed)
Veera: o haan gunjan didi mera mtlb hai k gunjan bhabi bilkul theek hain 
Baldev: to phr tu ithy ki kr rahi hai tujhe us k pas hona chaiy tha
Veera: baldev to pagal hai ki aj unki suhagrat hai mera uthy ki kam mujhe kabab m hadi bnany k koi shok nahi hai
Baldev: to phr to rat k is waqt mery kamry wich ki kr rahi hai?
Veera: wo... wo baldev m ny tujh sy maafi mangni thi
Baldev: maafi ab kis gal ki?
Veera: wo jo m ny tery naal dhokha kiya tha us k liay menu maaf kr dy 
Baldev: dekh veera m na wo sb kb k bhol chuka hun to b bhol ja aur ja yahan sy 
Veera: nahi to nahi bola hai m ny dekha hai teri ankho m abhi b anso a jaty hain us k bary m soch kr menu maaf kr d na 
Baldev: acha m ny kr diya ab tenu maaf ab ja yahan sy
Veera: sachi to ny menu maaf kr diya dil sy maaf kiya hai?
Baldev: haan haan dil sy maaf kiya hai chal ab ja is sy phealy koi a jay 
Veera: nahi anda koi sb so gay hon gy thak kr 
Baldev: acha to tera yahan rat rukny k irada hai ki?
Veera: oy nahi wo m khy rahi thi k ab tu ny menu maaf kr hi diya hai to hum dost bn jaty hain 

Veera moving her hand forward to baldev but baldev can't shake hand 

Veera: ab hath mila b ly na hum dost bn jaty hain 
Baldev: ummm... sochun ga samjhun ga kal parson kuch khaun ga
Veera: ki? kya khy rha hai to bta na mujh sy dosti kry ga?
Baldev: kha hai na kal parson tk kuch khaun ga 

Veera come closer to baldev, baldev move back he fell down on bed and veera also slip on baldev they look each others eyes 

Veera: khy do na k tm mujh sy dosti kro gy
Baldev: dekhun ga, samjhun ga kal parson kuch khaun ga
Veera: baldev ab tng mat kr na dosti kr ly na jb tk to mujh sy dosti nahi kry ga m tb tk tery oper sy nahi uthun gi
Baldev: ki? m tujhe apny oper bardasht nahi kr skda to boht bhari hai 
Veera: teri marzi hai na kr mujh sy dosti m b nahi hatun gi 
Baldev: acha acha kr lyta hun tujh sy dosti ab hat mery oper sy 
Veera: ay hoi na gal chal aj sy hum dono dost bn gay hain wo b achy waly
Baldev: achy waly nahi zaberdasti waly

Veera start laughing and they shake her hands 

Veera: chal ab m chalti hun bye good night kal milty hain 
Baldev: gud night ab ja yahan sy 

Veera left baldev' home now both are friends πŸ˜Š 

Hope u all like this part plz do comment I am waiting for your comments πŸ˜Š sorry for mistakes πŸ˜• πŸ˜³





Edited by cuteBiya - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by a4aarsh


 nice one,do continue 
 
Thank u so much πŸ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update! loved it β€οΈ update soon πŸ˜³πŸ˜›

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