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beautiful story. The kidnapping was extreme but I guess something needed to be done with these two.

Awesome  Ammaazzziinnggg    Superb!⭐️⭐️⭐️ Edited by GOODLUCKANGEL - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vmpy

awesome,lovely n cute os.

madhu n rk were childish n rheir behaviour was affecting maya but later on dey changed themselves fr their daughter.a v happy ending

Thanks a lot bro. I am happy for detailed comment yes their behaviour was effecting Maya a lot but in end they changed for their daughter and happily lived ever after. 🤗

Finally completed reading !!😊
Superrrb Shahi! Thanxx for writing this cute sweet candy TS for me!🤗🤗 Love u❤️
Loved Rishbala's cute childish antics n Maya..poor baby!🤣 Write many such sweet stories dear..I miss u. U know na??😳😒

Originally posted by: madhurish

oh wow!! lovely! lovely! such a cute story!!😛😛

i loved their silly fights, love , are & concern they had for maya & on each other!!😳😳

poor maya being dressed like rainbow was funny but adorable!! really rishbala is the finest jokers in this story!! finally part was lil emotional & nicely written!! finally they understood their mistake!! yes, fights are normal btn couples but it should not affect their kids!! there is lovely message in this story!!😊😊

good job!!👏👏

🤗 Thanks to understand yes kids normally gets effected between elders fight.

Yes Rishbala was shown cute and adorable around first part but second part I showed their kid type fights which actually proved danger for Maya. Ya rainbow dress for Maya was to enjoy I am happy you enjoyed though it should not happen in such a way.

Last part I wanted it to be little more funny but it really got serious.

I am happy you understood and loved hidden message in the story.

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

fantastic os shahi
loved it
my like button not working

Thanks a lot and I am happy you loved it. 🤗

Originally posted by: silverfire

Very cute.👍🏼

🤗 Thanks a lot dear.

Originally posted by: rima4ever

first of all hats off to u shahi for trying something new

this is really so different and unique from the things u write

Thanks a lot Dia really appreciated comment. Yes it was different from my other work all thanks to Titli she made me write something different. 😆 Edited by beautiful_heart - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

i just loved this story

rishbala were so childish

they always used to fight

i liked radhaji here for a change

her idea was bad but it drove home the point

😆 Yes poor Radhaji I was not getting any better way so she has to take this route. Yes Rishbala was so childish here as I want them to love fighting with each other. 😳

Originally posted by: rima4ever

kudos to u for bringing out the small intricacies of a parental relation

i must say that u r very good at studying human psychology

Thanks a lot and that is a big compliment thanks a lot Dia. 🤗