Ek Veer Ki Ardaas - Veera

VeeBa FF ~ Ek Ajeeb Prem Kahani!! part 11; pg21 - Page 7

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Ok ok...thoda toh patience rakho!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜†

mujhe aur intezaar nahi hora...jaldi๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nahin...par eh meri style hain...๐Ÿ˜ก
Mazak thi haan...๐Ÿ˜†

ok yeh tumara style hai...hamari pyari evanna ki๐Ÿค—
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mujhe aur intezaar nahi hora...jaldi๐Ÿ˜†


Aree ruko toh๐Ÿ˜†... Thoda toh satanah banta hain...๐Ÿ˜ˆ
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Aree ruko toh๐Ÿ˜†... Thoda toh satanah banta hain...๐Ÿ˜ˆ

jaldi jaldi jaldi jaldi๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰Edited by Samanta13 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely Update! When Gunvi called veera Bua..it sounded really wired๐Ÿ˜†
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Lovely Update! When Gunvi called veera Bua..it sounded really wired๐Ÿ˜†


yeah... even i felt tht...
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thnk u all for your comments๐Ÿค—...i guess i hv to update it now...kyunki yeh samanta hai na...meri sirr kha rahi hain...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Part 5
Next day...
veera came down running...
chaiji - oho...cheechidi aaj he seediyaan thod degi ki?? subah inni jaldi main kithe jaa rahi hain???
veera - voh ek zaroori kaam karni hain chaiji...
chaiji - kedi kaam??
veera - vo krishividyalay ke kaam...bohot zaroori hain...
chaiji - acha theek hain...kinni mehnat kar rahi hain tu apne pappaji ke sapne vaaste...mera aashirwaad hamesha tere saath hain...
veera - thnk u chaiji...(thinking)*ab mennu aapki aashirwaad bhi mil gaya hain...ab aur bhi asaani hogi...*

at baldev's house...
balwant - oh bansuri ji pata hain kal veera vaapas aayi thi...abhi sawere he parjaiji ka phone aaya tha...bohot khush thi vo log...

baldev who was coming down heard this...

bansuri - matlab kal thak jo shaanti thi pind main...usska aakri din kal tha...ab yeh veera toh toofaan he layegi...
balwant - bansuri ji kabhi toh meethi gal kiya karo...harr waqat kadwa bolna sehat keliye theek nahin...
bansuri - (makes a face)
baldev - oh pappaji ki keh rahe the aap??veera ki baare main...
balwant - oye maharaj inni jaldi uth gaya...haan vese veera vaapas aayi hain...kal he aayi hain...
baldev - ohh...

suddenly his phone started ringing...he saw tht it was jaggi...
baldev - pappaji beeji...main na nikal tha hoon...theekhe...
bansuri - par puttar naashta toh karle...
baldev - nahin beeji raaste wich daabe main khaaloonga...
bansuri - acha...tho theek hain...
baldev leaves...

veera who wanted to speak to baldev went to his house...

veera - sasriakal tayaji...sasriakal taiji...
balwant - oh veera puttar...sasriakal sasriakal...aaja andar aa...
veera - ji tayaji...
bansuri - (makes a face)
balwant - kesi hain puttar?? voh plaane main sab theek tha na?? koi pareshaani toh nahin hui...
veera - nahin nahin tayaji sab kuch theekh tha...(she looked around to find baldev)vese tayaji baldev kithe hain??
balwant - voh bahar gaya hain...
veera - acha... tho theek hain tayaji...main na ab nikalti hoon...sasriakal...
balwant - sasriakal...
bansuri - (making a face) sasriakal...

veera leaves the house...
she was searching for baldev all around the pind...at last she spotted him in the tea shop drinking tea with his friends...

veera - (thinking)*aaj mennu kisi bhi tarah usse kehna he hoga* (screams) baldev...
baldev - (turns around) 
veera - baldev mennu...tujse kuch zaroori gal karni hain...
baldev - oye tu...ki gall karni hain...jaldi bol na...
veera - (looking at jaggi ang balli) ithe nahin...kahin aur...
baldev - oye kahin aur kyun?? ithe he batana...
veera - (in a bit of angry tone)๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก oye mene bola na...kahin aur...
baldev - acha acha theek hain...jab thak main haan na bolu tu mera sir khaayegi...ab chal...

so veera takes him to a lonely place...
baldev - ab tho theek haina...kinni der se mennu pareshaan kar rahi hain...ab bata jo bolne aayi thi...
veera - ๐Ÿ˜•voh...baldev...main...
baldev - ๐Ÿ˜กoye...seedhe seedhe bata...baat ko ghuma mat...ki kehne aayi thi?? bol na...cheti kar...
veera - main...main tujse pyaar karti hoon...
yes...atlast she said it...
baldev - (shocked) ki???๐Ÿ˜ฒtu...tu mujse pyaar karti hain??? oye paagal hain ki?? aaj koi aprill fools day thodi nah hain...isilye mennu pareshan karna band kar samjhi...(turns to leave)
veera - (holds his arms) baldev...main tumhe fool nahin kar rahi...main sach bol rahi hoon...main tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon...apne jaan se bhi zyaada...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ(her eyes well up with tears)

baldev couldn't believe wat he just heard...his sherni loves him...
baldev - tu...tu sach bol rahi hain???
veera - haan baldev...
baldev - toh fir kyun chali gayi thi videsh?? aur inni saal ke baad aarahin hain...tab yaad nahin aaya mera??
veera - main kese bataoon tennu...tab tere shaadi hone vaala tha...aur main yeh kabhi nahin vekh sakti...isiliye door chali gayi thi main...
baldev - toh pehele kyun nahin kahan tune??
veera - kyunki...kyunki mennu lag raha tha ki tu kabhi mennu vaapas pyaar nahin karega...mene tennu inna vadda dhoka diya tha pehele...

baldev was very happy...he felt like the full earth was heaven for him now...a small smile crept through his lips...
veera - (shaking him) baldev...tu kithe kho gaya?? jawaab tho de...
baldev - oye kesi jawaab?? main tujse pyaar karta tha...abhi bhi karta hoon...aur hamesha tumse he karta rahoonga...

veera couldnt believe...she gave him such a big 'dhoka' and he still loves her... tears flowed out of her eyes...
baldev - oye mene haan kahan...aur tu ro kyun rahin hain??
veera - eh soch ke ki...koi inna acha kese bann sakta hain?? mene tujhe kinna vadda dhoka diya...phir bhi tu mujse pyaar karta hain...
baldev - yahin toh hain pyaar...vese bohot der hogayi hain...chal main tennu ghar chad detha hoon...
veera - theekhe...

they reached veera's house...
veera - bye baldev...kal milte hain...
baldev - haan...chal ja...
veera goes inside and baldev leaves...

๐Ÿ˜•how was it guys??? srry if u felt it was very long๐Ÿ˜•...pls do comment and like!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
Edited by evanna_rocks - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update Evanna. Waiting for more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update Evanna. Waiting for more.


thnk u...pls do like...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous and Awesome written update Evu loved it ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ณ Tfs for pm ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ