TRUST NEVER FADES-Sandhir(SS) completed - Page 5

Posted: 9 years ago
new & awesome concept...plz update soon...
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by -Glitz-


Hi
Sry 4 cmntng so late
Juzz nw c ur pm
Awsm update
I hpe the baby is sandhir's.
Y they r separated?
Rd bhnd bar?
I hope evrythng bcme 5ne.



glad u like it
thanks
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by SWA1992


new & awesome concept...plz update soon...


thanks will update shortly
Posted: 9 years ago
thanks a ton guys it means a lot to me...
so u all are predicting so many things thanku for that...


guys many of u are saying to update a long one but guys I m updating from phone and sometimes updated thing disappear suddenly earlier also.
so I have decided to update in parts a and b of chapters. hope u like.
Posted: 9 years ago
I am so sorry I am commenting so late. But I have very busy... 😕

Coming to the story.. 

It's such an interesting concept Parul... amazing!👏

And RD in jail? That's a first. And Riya? What's the history between RD and Sanyu I wonder...

Hopefully you'll answer all these questions soon... 

Please update soon please... Want to read further...

Love

Sush
Posted: 9 years ago
chapter 2 part a

Rd stood numb there his heart skip a bit and he says RIYA...
harsh: did u said something?
R: who is riya ...I mean look m not interested but she she's my lawyer so...
harsh: (laughs) lawyer u mean...
R: I mean lawyer only don't think much and hears the papers please hand over to ur so called top lawyer
harsh: OK I'll ask for bail
R: whatever.

hospital
s: where's my daughter?
receptionist: ma'am please calm down what's her name?
s: riya
rec: OK room no 312 third floor
(sanyu runs like insane towards the elevator and reaches third floor)
s: doc how's she?
doc: relax ma'am she just have fever and know everything is fine
doc excuses himself

sanyu was crying very badly and suddenly feels one hand on her shoulder and she turns and hug that person

s: parth (still crying)
p: shh sanyu she is fine now (and he wipes her tears and make her sit )
s: how u here?
p:firstly u tell where were u haan?
if I won't reach on time it could have cause danger to Ri( parth calls riya as Ri)
s:thanks woh I had some case so ...
p: r u serious sanyu? Ri is having fever and u were busy with u r so called case..
BTW what case?
s:(stammers) RD's case m filling on his behalf
p: what come again?
s: u heard me right
p: no u won't
s: but...
p: but what haan? let me remaind u this case is very week . everything is against him .I'm personally investigating there is nothing and what happened 2 years ...
s(cuts him in b/w) please stop
I want u to help me Mr.acp?
p: sanyu why are u becoming so harsh and formal and suddendly from no where Mr.ACP
s: then what u want haan.
u know already I never mix my professional life WD my personal life.
p: OK my jhansi ki rani do whatever pleases u

(then they heard Riya's voice)
R: ma ma...
s: Riya beta hws u now? kya hua beta ?
p: sanyu stop Yar u are questioning my princess with a hammer of u r questions.
p:Ri (parth calls riya ri pyar se) hws mybacha?
Ri: m m fine... pa
p: oh my princess (kisses her on her forehead)
doc: so she is fine now u can take her home (and doc left)
s: parth please if u can take riya home I m m going to police station.
p:(not liking a bit) OK tc.


police station
sanyu enters with harsh
s:(to inspector) here's the parole for Mr RSS
inspector: OK ma'am and (signals other) call Mr rd shekhwat
h: thanks beta if u wont be then I'll..
s: its OK sir its my job
(meanwhile RD also comes and stretches his arms and they share a eye lock)
RD: OK miss oops Mrs whatever sanyukya
thanks now I'm leaving
s: wait Mr RSS , since m your lawyer so u better cooperate and I need u to..
RD ( cuts her ) u need me (smirking)
s: stop it. I mean I need u for my investigation so meet me at 1 pm in myoffice .
RD:m tired so going home to take a short nap.
s: OK then m busy whole day
so meet me at 6 pm in my home and no excuses.
I hope u know my address , if not so ask anyone they will tell u(proudly)
don't be late I hate late commers.
RD: really u hate been late but at once u were one among them(smiking)
s: (angerly) time heel everyone and everything
(and she left)
RD was dumb stuck with her boldness.

PRecap- RD in sanyu's home and meets riya some flashbacks


so I wrap up with this plz do comment HAPPY RAkSHABANDHAN...

I also want to thanks my readers my buddies and even my silent readers(I would be really Happy if u all comment )
love
parulEdited by coolishparul - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
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unres

moi first 

Love the update and it was super quick...hehe

Parth ACP... interesting... 

are you sure this is a three shot? there are so many questions to answer and you only have one chapter left...

Either way i love it... and don't blame me if i demand a full blow fan fiction on this😆

love

sush
Edited by Sush94 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Sush94


res

unres

moi first

Love the update and it was super quick...hehe

Parth ACP... interesting...

are you sure this is a three shot? there are so many questions to answer and you only have one chapter left...

Either way i love it... and don't blame me if i demand a full blow fan fiction on this😆

love

sush

thanks dear
m also thinking about it whether to write 3 shots or SS
so I decided to write SS on your demandEdited by coolishparul - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
parth is ACP ! !!!!! interesting update soon

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