thanx a lot everyone for such lovely and encouraging comments π€π€π€π€π€.. it really means a lot to me. I am so overwhelmed and touched reading all the comments. love u lots guys π€π€π€π€
Originally posted by: pinki123Omg nami havent got enought words
i swear i loved that os sooo ooo much
i cant explain u are zhe best writer soo much creativity wow wow nami
u r sooo Talented u should be a a writer wow
u dont know how mad i was for reading ur story i gave my father a glass of water but in my mind was only ur.story and then i throw the water on the ground.. omg dear ππ... did ur father scolded u then?π dhyan raka karo pinki ππ
please please nami continue yesterday i was not able to sleep i only have to think about ur Story
please nami cont cant wait
Love u alot dear π³
Originally posted by: soji123amazingπ
what a start yaar ...but i always thought that why soham hide fact that parmeet is not in delhi ,,bani is going to find him...is this really the reason that he has promised bani that he will not tell this to rajji...but i thought something else ...i think he hide this fact from rajji because he knew it very well that how much rajji loves bani ...if soham will tell her then rajji will get sad again...so for me he hides banis truth for rajji s happiness .par fir bol deta he na wo parmeet ke bareme jab rajji ko slap karta heπ.. agar rajji ki parwa hoti toh tabi bhi nai bolta tha..but that time toh uske upar bhoot ka asar tha naπ...but its my thoughtπ
very weldone nami ...i always thought the same ...buaji should take sohams test ...rajji has already accepted her marriage ...its only who is showing that rajji is nothing for him...buaji should also teach some lessons to soham...soham needs it more than rajjiwhen i was reading ki mann family was behaving normally ...i thought they wnt soham to make realise the importance of rajji ...but i love the soham's restlessness to talk her ...i always want a field scene where he rem rajji and wait for her ...may be rajji take tiffin for her father ..will keep this in mindπ kahi na kahi kaam ajayagaππ
when i read rajji said she want to go to mamaji house for some change ...i laugh bcz i also thought the same but in different manner...and seeing temple and marrige ...is that the time when she met an accident ..iski umeed muje tere se hi thi meri antaratma ππππ I knew u would be the one asking this questionπwhen soham said he is going to gill house ...i dont understand why simran bhabhi start crying ...and said chach kar ke bhi rajji se baat nahi kar sakta ...i totally get scared and start thinking what may have happened ...bahut bure buer khayal dimaag mein aane laage
when gill family memebers behaved with soham rudely then i thought it was their anger
when soham see rajji outside jewellery shop...i thought he was hallucinating ...but then he saw amreek ..then i get confirmed ...its really rajji and amreek
and when at gill house she told amreek is her husband ...i was totally confused what is going on
mera haal bhi soham jaisa hoon gaya ..mera intention bilkul waisa hi tha to make ur haal just like soham ka as I was writing that scene from soham's point of view πππ... aur tune bol diya ki tera haal bhi soham jaisa ho gaya means I am successful ππ..
this is best thing about writing that next thing should be beyond reader expectation and imagination...which increases curiousity level of reader .. I am happy if u felt that curiosity leveland you did it successfully ...for me you are one of the best writer in the worldπ m overwhelmed dearπ€and pata he na thanx nai bolna heπ
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