SwaRon FF: Remember You - Page 2

Nishi

@.nerfherder

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Shrishti..another FF from you..how awesome is that

Brilliant Start..the SwaRon convo was superb and Swayam's musings of their whole journey..beautifully written.

Sharon's Accident 😲

really eager to read more..

Thanks for the PM..

update soon

Cheers

Nishi.

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

tis was one hell of an update

firstly becoz i got swayam's pov

u summarised everything his journey wit sharon so emotionally

tat i had to re read the whole thing

it had its own beauty

as a writer shristi u definitely knoe ur character's trait

n conveying a character's emotions to the reader in a unique, compelling way.

waiting to see how the chapter's will shape up after

sharon's accident

i m expecting a very high on emotions n intense swayam here

do update soon 🤗

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Reserved.Will unres ASAP.Eeeppp ^_^

Heya Srishti. . .This FF is really a pleasent surprise from you 😊

You have managed to handle Swayam so well.What might he have thought when he would have seen Sharon for the first time in junior college. . .His thoughts were really penned down well.

You have tried your best to keep Swayam closer to what he is oops i mean was. . .I liked the convo over the phone. . .It was damn cute 😆

Sharon's accident in the first chapter itself. . .Scary!!!!

Update soon gal. . .Will be waiting 😊

P.S. Is it only me who found your writing style a lot different from friendzoned???Anyways I like both. 😊 Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 9 years ago

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