SwaRon FF: Remember You - Page 4

Posted: 9 years ago
ohh gosh... Why i m thinking ke sharon wl frgt her past.?? :'(
awsm update dear... Loved it as usual.
plzzz update soon... God bless
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by AnanyaVruShan


ohh gosh... Why i m thinking ke sharon wl frgt her past.?? :'(
awsm update dear... Loved it as usual.
plzzz update soon... God bless
Yep same feeling here, what if she forgets everything?
By the way awesome update and great job hope you update soon enough
Posted: 9 years ago
you literally scared ma gal
thankfully sharon z alright 
i must say very good update
emotions were penned nycly
update soon dea

love 
shini
Posted: 9 years ago
Great update
U scared me
But thanks for saving Sharon
I think next is memory loss
Update soon will be waiting
Posted: 9 years ago
I was like ..what...is sharon dead?..
you
really scared me dear...
bt rlvd to know that she is fine...
very emotional update dear...
thanks 4 d pm.
Posted: 9 years ago
You just scared the shit out of me,
agar aage nahi likhi hoti tho meri heart attack ho jati.really nic update.wanna read more n more.update the nxt part soon.thnx 4 the pm
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update👏
bt un scared me 2 d hell😲
will be waiting for d next part😊
update soon😊
n thanx fr d PM😊
Posted: 9 years ago
This sounds a lot diff from friendzoned in terms of character.. as u said urself, they were your own creation while here u r dealing with already familiar ones. but then again u r doing full justice to them here as well. 
Coming to the story an accident at this point is scary and seems to be the point that kicks off the story. im a big Imagine dragons fan:) so loved the way chapter 2 started. Ur an awesome storyteller so no doubt im gonna follow this story too.
Posted: 9 years ago
tis was some catch i can say tat 
something got stuck in my throat wen i read the end 
i was completely taken aback wit the end 
n then i scroll down to read ur note 
n relief spread thru my viens 
coming to ur ff swayam's pov his pain was heart-wrenching 
i cud actually emphatise wit swayam 
his emotional experience on a whole was very apt 
his reaction wen he chokes the other person 
n then wen he is embarassed 
on his on behaviour was superb 
he was tat involved in processing tat sharon is hurt 
n his emotional aspects of pain.comes out as a rage 
i think u definitely know how to express 
wat a character is truely going thru 
i hav to say tis was one exceptionally brilliant way 
of presenting ur chapter 
all in all a very emotional update 
do update soon shristi 🤗


Edited by rosyrkohli - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
the both the chapter were quite shock but great and fabulous...
do continue soon

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