tis was some catch i can say tat something got stuck in my throat wen i read the end
i was completely taken aback wit the end
n then i scroll down to read ur note
n relief spread thru my viens
coming to ur ff swayam's pov his pain was heart-wrenching
i cud actually emphatise wit swayam
his emotional experience on a whole was very apt
his reaction wen he chokes the other person
n then wen he is embarassed
on his on behaviour was superb
he was tat involved in processing tat sharon is hurt
n his emotional aspects of pain.comes out as a rage
i think u definitely know how to express
wat a character is truely going thru
i hav to say tis was one exceptionally brilliant way
of presenting ur chapter
all in all a very emotional update
do update soon shristi 🤗
Edited by rosyrkohli - 9 years ago