Posted: 9 years ago
Something for everyone

Ashni
Two hearts one old one young ,
One tired and one full of fun ,
When they met , fire versus the ice ,
The ice tired to douse the flames ,
Which only grew stronger in each frame ,
The young fascinated by the smile
Fell fathoms into the game ,
Nothing could shake her style,
Headlong she went along the tide,
The ice started to show cracks ,
And slowly melt ,
Such was the power of the flame,
Soon two hearts begun to beat as one ,
But the fun had just begun ,
Cause the path of true love ,
Is never straight ,
Through twists and turns ,
That brought many a tear ,
And plenty of pain
Finally life gave them a chance ,
To begin life anew ,
And that what we all are waiting for in KTLK 2

Edited by bc123456 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Res for comment on poem - sry will write my morning
 
Edit:
 
Here I am.. Sorry for the delay
 
well the first thing this poem reminded me of was the 'goriya doctorni' song that was picturized on Ranga and Armaan during AshNi sangeet.😳
 
Loved the.first 3 and last 2 lines too too much.. actually loved the whole poem too much... πŸ˜ƒ
 
so true, in our heart of hearts, we still wish for ktlk season 2. πŸ˜ƒ
 
 
Edited by sshirley - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful poem. a sweet way to  summarize  ashni love story . Loved the lines in the beginning
Two hearts one old one young ,
One tired and one full of fun
and
Soon two hearts begun to beat as one ,
But the fun had just begun

super like dear

Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice Poem Dr babs πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Loved it
Posted: 9 years ago
Stupendous.. Fantabulously captured the essence of this immortal show..
 
Wish they would come back with KTLK season2.
Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely Ashni poem πŸ‘


Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!!! Just WOW!!!

GREAT and AWESOMEπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Posted: 9 years ago
You have given entire story in this poem..πŸ‘
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by sshirley


Me first


πŸ‘
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by sshirley


Res for comment on poem - sry will write my morning

Waiting Shirley 

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