It's a love story.baby just say yess SS...part 2 n 3 on pg 3

Hellooozzz... Very much new here, bt decided to come up wt a piece... Tamatars r well accepted...


PART I

She was sitting on d long gallery seats, scratching the desk...with a book open in front...bt...she was hardly reading. Her mind,,,,was a seagull...flying to so far a land she herself knew nothing of. And,,,,she was constantly scratching,,,,as if in a mood to drive out all d old wood polish of d desks. But,,,,,,did she actually know she was scratching...????
'' So... Here u are...''...he crashed just beside her...'' ..err...studying??... Come on! Sems r just over...what's so much of studies now!!''
She was silent, as if her brain could not detect the signals of speech just delivered beside her.
'' Hey! R u listening??? I mean...where r u???''
'' Hmm...'', finally,she uttered.
'' Thank God! At least u proved u r not suffering from aphasia...''
A smile crossed her face...
'' yeah! So...how r u?''...she said,staring straight into his eyes.
'' What the...? R we meeting after 6 years...???''
Sort of...that's something she felt. Every meeting to her was something new. Why not????? Life took just a nanosecond to change so abruptly...
'' I was asking u where u are...''...he uttered...
'' SOMEPLACE ELSE!''...somehow she liked using these couple of words,,,,,they gave her a feeling of being someone,different from anyone...
'' And where's that????''...he smirked. She looked at him. This smirk somehow always added to his good looks.
'' If only I knew''...she looked away.
'' What would u have done...if only u knew?????''...he was smiling.
'' I wud have actually been there...''...she said without wasting a second...
'' Hah! U talk strange... U really do...''
'' Yeah! I know...bt... I guess... I wud... Rather like to b strange...''
she had stopped scratching for a while. Bt she started again...this time consciously...and she uttered them...very softly...
And...he was silent...but she could feel his eyes...staring intensely at her...
'' i know! And that's the reason AL... I LOVE U!''
Her scratching increased,,,,perhaps a sign of undecisiveness. But she said nothing..as she never did...whenever he said something of that sort...
'' and I know u wud say just...nothing!!''...it was he again...
They both fell silent after this, she scratching,,,and he,staring blank at d white board before the class...
'' sometimes silence hurts d ears more than noise does...''...he broke d silence,,,which hurt his heart more than his ears!
'' what's d time???''...she had stopped scratching finally...
'' Why do u always change d topic AL????''
She was arranging her bag...as if unaltered by anything around...
'' u...leaving?????''
'' next class starts in 20 min... I need to freshen up..''...she was shuffling her long black hair...
'' R u listening to me? Rather...do u actually listen to me ever..?''...he cud feel a pain...bt cud not detect its origin...
She was ready...to leave...
'' i need an answer AL!!''
'' See u in 20 min then...'...and before he cud utter another, she had left the LT...
AND...He stared at d door...swinging with d momentum..she had just left.
He...fell back on d seats...
Oh godd! A pain...but...where? His head? Eyes? Throat? HEART?...
He picked up his smartphone...swiped... And...
There she is...who left...as much on his wallpaper.as in his mind,as in his heart...
DO NOT TRY TO UNDERSTAND A GIRL COMPLETELY...IF U DO U'LL EITHER GO MAD...OR...START LOVING HER...



so that's the first part...like only if u like...will update 2nd part only if I get some response... Edited by ---Kaushi--- - 9 years ago

It's amazing Di🤗

Thank u dear ashu! Thanks a lot!

kaushu di!!!! 🤗
its awesome!!
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continue soon! ... 😳

Kaushu yr brilliantly written.
Loved liked every part of it.
U poytraited the emotions so well.

Continue soon.

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Thank u all! Will update soon...

Thank u jyo...means a lot!

hey nice start...nice stry

errr...kaush di...

Originally posted by: Aru_A

errr...kaush di...

ermmm...what do u expect me to.say...what do.u expect me to say on this...

im having flashbacks...frm various parts of my life...frm various parts of the AT...frm various corners of my brain...frm various sides of my heart...

compliment???

if..if i am capable of saying anything...anything at all after reading this...i cud somehow realte...idk why...just that...i rub my hands rather than scratching desks...

n will u ever tell their names...AL n LT i believe...

those lines in between...n of course the ending...something tells me that SHE...was an impersonation of Kaushitaki Karmakar...

All I can say is... I love u Aru... N will always do so... N yeah! I will tell there names... N... She... Is...a mystery...she herself...can never solve...