SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn #2 LastChap-57, Pg 62. (16Oct'14) updtd. - Page 34

aswom chap nd shayad neww ha ki .------------- so update soon???

Amazing ch...n hope swayam london nhi jae!!!! UPDATE SOON

really nice Sakshi... yup swayam can never stay away from sharon... omg..I think it's a good news... swaron are gonna be parents... if it is..then I m super happy.. nd ya the reason is apt.. thanks 4 d pm...

heyya

Lovely update, got nothing more to say 👍🏼

Edited

Swayam london jaa rha hai! Oh thankgod lol i was guessing kuch zyada hi :p
I really liked the way swayam bared all his soul infront of sharon, he was so upset and it clearly felt in their talks, very good work there...then i loved how sharon was clueless when swayam asked will she be able to live without him and she had nothing to say, then how cutely she tried to say and swayam engulfed her in a hug. Veryy nicely written these talks tkd i loved it.
Then nandini coming back and swayam going for a meeting...they are going to have a baby?
Update soon :X
Edited by surbhimathur - 9 years ago

Hey Shakshi

I am quite inactive since couple of months, so did'nt get time to resume my reading here,But yes i read previous updates n i tell u,ur progressing great including story plot n to make bind readers for next to next stanza.Every update has different charm n thats whats u are doing..Loved the way u wrote their honeymoon sequence,whole update was apt n romantic one..In between u added few nature stuffs to elaborate that particular part.I must say the dialouge delieveries are sugary sweets..So i like all the updates,the one u showed ups n downs of swaron life..Now the previous two updates i felt confused as yet u didnt revealed the reason behind swayam's harsh behaviour.U were constantly making us curious yet u didnt revealed the reason.Anyways last update was gud to read swayam's apology to sharon n sharon forgive him..But still the reason is due..So do update soon n Raaz se parda uthao as soon as fast..Sorry for such a late feedback..I will join u proper from next update..Till then keep updating..

And yeah,u are doing great job @ writing,Keep it up
Thanx for all the PM's


Prateek

Swayam moving to London...
Leaving sharon alone...
No no no plz aisa mat karo...
Ya phir dono ko saath mein bhej do...
So...coming back to the update...as usual. Yet another fabulous update...
SwaRon understands eachother so well..perfect hubby wifey...hope swayam comes back soon from Delhi..

Once again superb update...& now waiting for the next chap update soon...

unresed on page 51 😃

chap 53
sorry i cudnt cmmnt earlier
wow
the song
their situation
swayam's guilt
sharon's love
allm in all was a treat to read wid the apt song in the background
i had read it earlier
but sorry cudnt cmmnt then
they having dinner together
after so long
their moments
this is wat u cal an update
thnx 4 d pm