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Alyna098
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey guys!Iam a very big VeeBa fan so i have thought of a story which is totally different from the original script so here it goes...

Veera Sampooran Singh:
The beauty queen of her college and the only Sherni of Pritampura.Who has big dreams and an urge to fulfill them.Her dreams are to go abroad to pursue her career along with her most favorite Veerji and family.Not interested in any kind of relationship and uses boys to climb the steps of her dream.A very arrogant and self-built person who vows boys for fulfilling her motives
Baldev Singh:
A spoiled brat of his Beeji.The Sarpanch's son and the only Sher of Pritampura who dreamt of becoming the Sarpanch of the village.Who can also stoop low to fulfill his motives.And eventually falls for his childhood-foe Veera at the first sight,but ignores it at first but later on accepts it
Karan Khanna:
Veera's college bestie but secret lover.Supports Veera in all her wishes but never got enough guts to propose Veera.Veera tells one thing to everyone that 3 people cannot be her life partner:1)her Veeraji;2)Baldev;3)Karan.He never protests it nor complains just waits for Veera to realize how much he loves her.Love triangle in VeeBa love story.Ranvijay (Ranvi)Singh:
A musician who loves singing and wants to pursue a career in singing after all his family needs.Loves his step-sister Veera a lot and has done a number of sacrifices for her.He became a mother figure to her from the very time his father gave the responsibility of his sister before he left.He is his child-hood friend Gunjan's love interest.
Gunjan Singh:
Ranvi and Veera's child-hood best friend and loves Ranvi because of his nature and care towards other people.A girl who believes in natural beauty and opposite of her mother.A simple,caring and sweet village girl.Annanya Sharma(Veera's college bestie and Ranvi's love interest)
A very beautiful,manipulative and meanful girl who uses Ranvi for fulfilling her motives
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Bud!
Can't wait for this Story ❤️
And welcome to the forum and VeeBa world dear 🤗
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Alyna098
Alyna098 @Alyna098 Groupbie
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for a very warm welcome to this forumbut can some one help me to update page 2 iam all confused😊
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loveispure
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Posted: 9 years ago
yes dear pliz continue.sadly  few ppl write ff ss os in this forum.i love to read all stories.waiting for urs 
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Alyna098
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey guys here goes chapter 1

                                                     
                                                   chapter 1
             the introduction
Ranvi was driving in his tractor thinking about Veera.He was very exited that Veera was coming in 2 days but also worried because his mother Ratan did not accept Veera even after the long 15 years,not once Veera came in her pind.Ranvi visited her often in her college that also reminded him of Annanya a small smile crept on his full lips.SMASH!!His tractor had crashed in a nearby tree while fixing Gunjan's eyes fell on Ranvi a slight shyness flushed over her face and the very next second decided to talk to him.
Gunjan:ki haal hai Ranvi vadde pareshaan lag rahe ho.
in a worried and helpful voice while Ranvi with all irritation 
Ranvi:main...main toh aethe avai mazey kar raha tha inni kadi dhoop vich..vikhai nahi de raha tractor nu sahi kar raha hoon aur koi kaam nai hai tere paas mere naal galley karane ke illawa meri Veerakadi parson aa rahi hai ussi de vaaste apna kaam khetaan vich jaldi khatam kar raha hoon.ab agar aap ke fuzool ke sawaal hogai toh main kaam karaoon...??
suddenly Gunjan became very sad and tears blurred her vision she ran away not wanting to show them.
Ranvi:lagta hai bura maan gai
and then he drove off to the fields and sat near to the Krishi Vidiyaley board and said
Ranvi:papaji parson meri Veera aa rahi hai aapka sapna pura karne vaaste.
It was 3:50 in the morning while Karan and Veera escaped the college premises for a bachelor party Veera wore a short red dress with loud red lip gloss with red high heels and looking very hot while Karan wore a black and white suit with a black bow and looking dashing.They both entered the party while everyones' eyes were fixed on  a very hot looking gorgeous Veera and Karan noticed it and felt jealous while on the other hand Veera was least bother there on the dance floor Karan heard her voice
Veera:oye Romeo othe ki kar raha hai asley maza toh aethe hai.
Karan:haan...haan aa raha hoon.
They both danced on Baby doll and came back before her convocation.yeah she had lied to her Veerji she had all new plans since the convocation was one day earlier and she had an idea
note:ok guys this is for chapter 1 pls tell whether continue or not
sorry don't know how to post on other pages 
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Alyna098
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Posted: 9 years ago
can't wait for another day so here is chapter2.Veeba's meeting kinda romantic.warning!children stay away!!!!
                             
                     \CHAPTER 2
             the surprise
Veera after the convocation told her friends including Annanya to join their journey to Pritampura while on the other hand Ranvi went to Balwant's house for asking help from Baldev unaware of Veera's surprise...
Baldev:kya musibat hai.ae Veera nu bhi mainu pareshaan karne ke bahane chaiye.
There at Veera's house everyone was exited except of Ratan.Baldev started screaming and yelling at the workers and said 
Baldev:a mainu uss pind di musibat de vaaste gada manjduri karni par rahi hai iss Ranveera nu vekh loonga.
Ranvi:Baldev meri Veera nu gulaabi rang pasand hai peeli nahi
Baldev:oye chup kar Ranvi tune mainu phasa diya aur kiya toh kiya ab mainu apne tareekey se samjhane do
anonymous person:oye Baldev teri inni himmat ho gai mere veerji se iss tarha baat karne ki...?There comes Veera barging in the house with her luggage all were shocked since Veera had arrived a day earlier.Veeba shared an eyelock but Veera broke it Baldev was breathless she was wearing a navy blue dress just above her knees with red lip gloss on as said before.
Ranvi:V...Veera tu...tu toh kal...
Veera:oho veerji haan ae toh surprise tha... she was cut by Ranvi
Ranvi:tu...tu thag gai hogi inna lamba safar teh kia aa raam karley..ek minute tune khanna khaaya Veera tu bhi na avai uth pathaang harkat karti raheti hai aur mainu chinta vich daal ti hai aur...
Veera:ho veerji saans toh lo..aur kisne kaha ke main akeley aai hoon..mere naal toh puri paltun aai hai aur chill maaro veerji.ae hain mere friends Amrit,Sweety,Shivangi,Ankur,Annanya aur Romeo
all exclaimed ROMEO?I mean Karan said Veera Baldev was sent home by his kabootari Veera at night Veera after eating dinner nd  came out for some fresh air where she saw Baldev with his friends Balli and Jaggi
Jaggi:oh praji appnu koi kuri pasand aai hai ki
Balli:haan praaji suna hai ki Veera vaddi waali patakha hai 
Baldev:haan hai toh ki karana hai haan aarti utarni hai usski...?
Veera:oye tum dono jaao mainu Baldev se kucch akele mein baat karani hai...they left and Veera grabbed the vine bottle from Baldev's hands and took a semi long sip from it very seductively burning fire in Baldev his blood started heating very fast with her close proximity...but why?he flushed out the thought and asked Veera the reason for their conversation
Baldev:oye kabootari ki hua ?
Veera:Baldev mane suna hai ki tu vadda Punjab ka gabru jawaan hai...but cut off by Baldev in mid sentnce
Baldev:haan toh tanu koi praablom hai ki
Veera:saabit kar
and got off from his jeep bonnet but was pulled by Baldev close to his body their lips almost touching...

note:keep thinking for chapter 3
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Alyna098
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Posted: 9 years ago
note:hey guys this is for chapter 3...
           
                           CHAPTER 3
                 the welcome party
Baldev pulled Veera very close to his hard body their lips almost touching and huskily asked Veera
Baldev:aur saboot vekh na hai ke main pind da gabru jawaan hoon ya nahi?
Veera was struggling a lot to get her hand free but all in vain he was a way too stronger than her.Suddenly to Veera's surprise he pushed her away and told her to leave as it was getting even darker but the stubborn girl wasn't in any mood to go
Veera:oye Baldev ae sirf tera nahi mera bhi pind hai samjha issliye main nahi jah rahi samjha! she declared...
Baldev:oye bandariya tu kya yahan pind di rakhwaali karne aai hai?
Veera:peheli gall main koi bandariya shandariya nahi hoon aur duji gall main pind di rakhwali nahi karne aai main toh kal ka plan pooch ne aai hoon...chal bata kya plan kiya hai veerji ne mere vaaste?
Baldev:voh tu kal vekh lena samjhi bhootni!he said in a cold voice and strode towards his jeep and then home leaving a confused Veera behind
Veera to herself:bohot raat ho gai hai aur ae Delhi toh hai nahi pind waalon nu pata chalega toh siyyappa hojana hai sachi..she said under her breath and went to her house for some beauty sleep.
In the morning veerji,Gunjan didi,chaiji and Karan leaving Ratan all screamed in joy surprise .She was shocked but then happy to see everyone but became sad not seeing Ratan any where
Ranvi:oye Veerakadi ki hoya tu acchanak inni udaas kiyun hogai...?
Veera:ho veerji main aur udaas kisi ke sapnon main bhi nahi.
toh veerji surprise...
Karan:oye jhalli have patients tera surprise le kar bhaag nahi rahe hain aaj shaam ko tayaar ho kar neechey aana samjhi...
Veera:ok done!
At the evening everyone came dressed suddenly Baldev saw Karan and decided to talk some general things about business...
Baldev:heloji heloji ki chal raha sab vaddiya hai nah ji?asked a very exited Baldev
Karan:yeah sab accha bas Veera kab aai gi...?
Baldev didn't like any guy talking about Veera and tried to change the topic but before he could say anything Veera came down wearing a baby pink and silver bloused saree and looking hot with silver high heels and red lip gloss and curly hair as usual...
she came down the stairs to Karan and Baldev both were in surprise
Karan:Veera your looking hot as usual but...saree?
Veera:oye Romeo har baar short dresses pehena zaroori nahi hota hai kucch desi bhi accha lagta hai...stupid
Baldev:haan...tu joh bhi pehenegi bandariya hi lagegi..he lied not wanting to show how much he needed her
Veera:whatever.. and walked away to veerji but Ranvi was looking over something else to the second beauty queen of the college Annanya Sharma who wore a punjabi pink patiala suit just to impress Ranvi for fulfilling her motives Gunjan noticed it and her heart broke into pieces after realizing that Ranvi loves Annanya not her...
Veera:oye jawaan e janeman, ae ki pehna hai tujhe toh...was cut off in mid sentence
Annanaya:hey!tujhe bhi toh nahi pasand hai desi attire pehena...but see you wore it
Veera:meri billi aur mujhe hi meow...clever dude...anyways enjoy the party...
Baldev kept staring at his lady love Veera but couldn't understand why?
suddenly he noticed that the doris' of her saree were open exposing her full creamy skin of her back...without thinking he grabbed Veera from the party to her utter irritation
Veera:what!mainu jaane de party enjoy karne de na...
she shushed her by putting his index finger on her rosy red lips he turned her around nor she protested and tied her dori his fingers touching constantly on the creamy skin of her back and when he was done he said
Baldev:tainu agar kucch pehene nahi aata toh pehenti kiyun ho?
Veera was speechless and both returned to the party from the courtyard outside the house seeing them together Karan felt a bit jealous but later convinced himself that they are only enemies and nothing else...Gunjan was running through her room and  SHUT! closed the door shut behind her and cried her heart out she shouted
Gunjan:kiun Rabji kiun mere naal hi aap aisa karte hain peheli meri beeji jinho ne kabhi mainu apna nahi samjha aur jiss mein apnapan nazar aaya usse hi paraya kar diya kiun...and cried herself to sleep...

note:this is for chapter 3 pls tell me is it boring?shall I stop this ff?pls comment your views over this chapter.
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Alyna098
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Posted: 9 years ago
 note:hey guys Iam new to this forum pls bear with my Punjabi and Hindi and i don't know how to type other pages here goes chapter 4

                           CHAPTER 4 
After Veeba returned to the party an awkward silence was followed by both of them.Veera was finding her Gunjan did before she could go any further there came a very beautiful Gunjan looking most beautiful lady in the party Veera felt very jealous because looking beautiful was only her right she saw a waiter passing by with juices on the tray she came in middle and the whole tray and juices were split on Gunjan,Veera had a victory smile and told everyone that she is taking Gunjan in the washroom for cleaning this mess and before that scolded the waiter
Veera:oye tainu vekhai nahi de raha tainu pure paise nahi milenge
Gunjan:Veera chaddh nah gareeb insaan ke paiese...was cut off in mid sentence
Veera:Gunjan didi ae ki keh rahe hain galti ki hai saza bhi milni chaiye...chaliye main aapnu washroom le chalti hoon
Gunjan:changa
In the washroom Veera said :Gunjan didi aapnu pata hai ki khubsoorat dikhna sirf aur sirf mera haq hai aur kisi ka nahi
Gunjan:jaanti hoon mainu pata tha ki tune hi cold drink mujh par giraaya main kissi ko kucch nahi boloongi
after they returned to the party they saw Ranvi on the stage with a mike and started singing his song(the one played in the show) everyone clapped for him and others were shocked that Ranvi had an hidden talent of singing so beautifully.Gunjan was mesmorised by his voice and thought that he loves her not Annanya she became very happy but it did not last long Ranvi started to propose Annanya
Ranvi:Annu,main tere jitna parha likha to nahi aur na hi bohot ameer hoon bas tujh se pyaar ho gaya(coming down from the stage and the very next instant was on his knees)kya tu mujh say shaadi karegii?
Annanya:dekho Ranvi mujhe praha likha ya raeezada toh  nahi chaiye par haan tere jaisa seedha saadha insaan joh dusron se bohot pyaar aur kurbaaniya kare toh mere taraf se haan hai yes I will marry you.Gunjan left the party and ran away again to her room.
The next morning everyone were busy preparing for the engagement when Gunjan entered and saw all the preparation and got confused since there was no upcoming festival she saw Veera and thought to ask her
Gunjan:Veera ae ki chal raha hai?
Veera:voh darasal Gunjan didi veerji ki aaj Annu de naal sagaai hai.
that very instant Gunjan broke down and ran crying to where Balwant and Bansuri were sitting she said
Gunjan:beeji papaji mainu...mainu shaadi karni hai kissi videshi de naal
Bansuri became very happy on hearing videsh.


note:suspence a new character will be introduced as Gunjan's fiance and Veera's love interest whom she betrayed despite she truely loved him but why?
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Alyna098
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Posted: 9 years ago
note:hey guys Iam back with bang
       

Abhay khurrana




                                                       chapter:5
Bansuri became very happy while Balwant had a doubt because he could see her unhappy.
At the evening everyone gathered for the ring exchange ceremony everything was good suddenly Annanya got a call and rushed 
Annanya:haan haan kaam hogaya ab iss jaaidaad aur kheton ko humara hone se koi nahi rok sakta hai
unknown person:sahi keh rahi ho par ab jao nahi toh kissi ko shaq hojayga
Annanya:haan chalo bye.
The next morning the boy's side had brought alliance for Gunjan from London.Gunjan wasn't happy nor was the boy 
Bansuri:Gunjan puttar jah chetti kucch khane mein kucch bana de aur haan Veera nu bula uss ke paas acche mak-up(make up)ke saamaan hai.
Gunjan:changa;unhappily
Veera came in the house 
Veera:Balwant tayaji main aa jaon?
Balwant:haan,haan puttar aao na mera sher puttar
Veera:GUNJAN DIDI,GUNJAN DIDI
an irritated Basuri said:galla phaar kar chila kiun rahi Gunjan apne kamre vich hai
Veera:changa
Veera prepared Gunjan as soon as the boy's parent's along with the boy entered the house Bansuri screamed
Bansuri:GUNJAN,GUNJAN
there comes Gunjan along with Veera,when Veera saw the boy tears started welling up her eyes blurring her vision she made an excuse and ran away 
Veera:mainu...mainu kucch kaam yaad aa gaya hai main aa ti hoon.
while Abhay kept starring at until she vanished from his view he didn't ask any questions to Gunjan nor her family just kept silence..because he was forced in this marriage.
flashback
 Abhay's mom:tum agar ye shaadi nahi karoge toh hum tumhe humari property mein se kucch nahi denge and an dishearted Abhay left with a heavy heart.
                                  end of flashback 

note:thats it for chapter 5 pls don't ignore and drop your comments and likes here

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Posted: 9 years ago
I could only hope that you finish it off well. The way you have turned the characters on their heads, it's going to be very challenging. To be very honest with you and myself, I'm not liking it.
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