my first veeba and ranjan love story part 29 updated! - Page 2

Note:hey guys!iam writing this colorless because my computer internet isn't working iam on my phone
So here it goes


                    Chapter6

Present
After Veera returned home she went straight to her room and took out a file,a medical report.She had blood cancer 3rd stage no body new that not even Karan or Ranvi she never told anyone because she knew that they all would put their papaji's property on auction and before she could die she wanted to fulfill her papaji and her dreams.At night Abhay was thinking about Veera how she used to vow the boys for winning her motives how she had kept a fast for him he remembered her smile her eyes how innocent she was how could she do this to him how she became so selfish that the one who loved her was dumped by her on her 20th birthday
Flashback
Abay took her to a place with rose petals and then was on his knees proposing her
Abay:I love you,Veera will you marry me?
Veera took the rose from his hand and threw it on the floor and said
Veera:mujhe joh chaiye tha voh mujhe mil gaya sab darte hain mujhse aur mera joh bhi kaam hota hai kar lete hain yeh ho toh tha mera maqsad
                      End of flashback
Next morning
Chaiji: oye cheechri aaj Gunjan di sagai hai Abhay
de naal Veera was broken
Note:that's it for part 6...what step will Veera do or what will Abay do?

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                   Chapter7

Veera hurried in her room and cried her heart out did he forget her?did he not love her as much as she did presently all sorts of questions were going in her mind when suddenly she heard Karan
Veera:arre Romeo tum yahan ki kar rahe ho?
Karan:jhalli tere liye gift laya tha aag ke function mein pehene ke liye
Veera:oh how sweet of you
Karan:here you go
Veera:thanks
She immediately opened the gift wrapped box and saw a beautiful pink strapped and backless lehenga
Veera:wow!she exclaimed Teri choice inni acchi kab se ho gai?
Karan:shut up!
In the evening Veera wore the lehenga and entered Balwant's house and everyone's eyes were fixed on Veera except Ranvi.After Gunjan and Abhay exchanged rings Veera fell on the ground and Abhay shout in the most worried voice
Abay:VEERA!and ran to her while Karan pushed him away
Karan:stay away!yeh sab teri wajhe se ho raha hai!
All looked confused
In the hospital the doctor said
Doc: arre Veera isse toh Maine pehele hi keh diya tha hospital mein admit hone ke liye
Ranvi: ki hoya daactor saahab meri Veera nu?
Doc: blood cancer ka 3rd stage hai aur last stay mein zyada time Nahi hai abhi admit karna hoga aap 10 laac ka intezaam kijhye main operation ki tayaari shuru karawata hoon
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Note:hey guys how is the story till now?


                      Chapter8

Ranvi was in another world how could his Veerakadi hide such a big thing from him it was the matter of life and death...Ranvi and Ratan broke all their FD's but only could get 6 lacs 4 lacs lesser than actually needed to start the operation
Doc:dekhiye patient ki haalat kharaab ho rahi aap please paison ka bandobas jald se jald kijye
Ranvi:ji daator sahaab aap aaperation shuru kijye
Doc:hum aise hi nahi...
Was cut off in mid sentence by Abhay
Abhay:yeh sab meri galti hai agar main yeh rishta...
Was cut off in mid sentence by Karan
Karan:nahi agar yeh sab nahi hota toh pata kaise chalta Veera ke cancer ke baarey mein
Baldev said:ae le Ranvi chaar lac ka intezaam hogaya hai
Ranvi:Magar Baldev kaise...
Baldev:abhi ae sab jaruri nahi hai sivaai Veera ke
The doctor had done the operation but still Veera was unconcious Karan was very jealous by now
Veera:Abhi(semi unconscious)Abhi Abhi
Doc:aap mein se Abhi kon hai
Abhay:ji main
Doc:voh patient abhi bhi behosh hain
Abhay:no problem main disturb nahi karunga
By that time Karan told everything to all the family members all were stunned Gunjan felt bad because of her Veera was in this state
Gunjan:ae sab meri galti ki vajha se hua hai
Ranvi:Gunjan kissi ki vajah se nahi hua hai bas kissmat ka khel samjho
Veera got discharged after a week and came back home


Precap:Ranvi heard Annanya talk to someone and throws her out of his life Gunjan supports him lots of Ranjan romance

Note:thank you everyone guys for encouraging and supporting and also reading my stupid stories...


                      Chapter9
Veera was brought safely to their house while chaiji and Ratan prepared the Aarti ki thaali and accepted Veera as her daughter as they all knew that Veera was aware of her biological mother

Flashback
Ratan and Ranvi were discussing to put their house on auction when Veera heard it and said
Veera:veerji aap nu ae San Karne di koi zaroorat Maine anudhaan sametiwaalon se Baat kiya aur unho ne charity dene se haan kardiya aur beeji mainu pata hai mere janam de bare vich
Ratan:ki!kaise...
Veera:woh college vich nana Nani aai the

Flashback ends
Present

Ratan:main aaj se Balke Abhi se hi tainu apni beti da Darja deti hoon they both hug and Abhay and Veera again are to gather everything was perfect when Ranvi went to call Annanya he heard about her develish motives
Annanya: haan Ranvi se shaadi karne ke baad Bhaag chalengey yahan se
Ranvi was shocked couldn't believe his ears what he just heard Annanya was just playing with his emotions the very next second he threw her out of the house and told everyone about her motives Ranvi was shattered with the truth he was been betrayed by his lady love Annanya
The next morning Verra visited Gunjan while Gunjan was talking to a picture
Gunjan:pata Nahi kab kaise Tum meri duniya bann gaye
Main tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon Ranvi
All this time Veera was standing outside her room thinking whether she is dreaming or it's the reality
Veera:Gunjan didi
Gunjan: Veera tu
Veera: ae Sab ki hai hai
Gunjan: sach
Veera went running to Ranvi to tell her this
Veera:veerji zindagi mein aggey bar ye aur Bhool jaye Uss dhokhe Baaz nu aur bhi koi hai joh aapse sacha wala pyaar karta hai
Ranvi:kon
Veera:Gunjan didi
Ranvi:ki
Veera:haan veerji mainu bhi aaj hi pata chala
Precap RanJan marriage and Veera's broken engagement by GunDev from Abhay

Note:hey everyone Karan has left for London University since the classes have started hence no more Karan Veera so here goes chapter10


                           Chapter10
Ranvi couldn't believe what he heard from his dear sisterVeera that Gunjan loves him
Ranvi:mainu pata kaise nahi chala aur main uss dhoke baaz nu... was cut off in mid sentence by Veera
Veera:ho veerji bhool jaye uss nu
Ranvi:tu sahi keh Rahi hai
Ranjan and Veera and Abhay engagement(Karan is unaware of)
After the ring exchange ceremony Baldev barged in and said
Baldev:ae sagaai nahi ho sakti

Flashback
While Baldev was going he saw Annanya and Abhay hugging each other
Abhay:Veera se toh sirf jaayedad ke liye shaadi Karaha hoon pyaar toh tujh se karta hoon
Annanya:1 haftey mein niqalte hain yahan se
Baldev records everything
End of Flashback

Present
He tells everything to everyone thus everyone breaks the alliance
Veera:veerji main jaanti hoon Abhi nu
RanviGunjan
She nodds her head and takes a crying Veera inside
At mid night Veera went to take some fresh air when she heard Baldev with his 2 chamchaas
Baldev:mainu Veera se pyaar ho Gaya hai
Both of them shocked
Jaggi: iss vaaste uss rishta toda
Baldev:haan
Veera ran away shattered that he did it on purpose and didn't hear his full sentence
Baldev:haan tabhi toh uss di jindigi bachali uss dhokebaaz se.




Precap RanJan marriage and VeeBa romance

Note:hey friends how r u guys doing her is another update for u                          Chapter11
Veera while crying in her room:Abhi I love you please phone uthao mera pls
Abhay:Baldev ne jOh kaha such kaha mujhe bhool jao
Veera:KAYAAR shouted a heartbroken Veera
Next day they all were preparing for the haldi ceremony
Gunjan:arre Veera tu nahi lagaayi gi
VeerA:nahi main BAldev se Milne jah rahi hoon bye
All were in shocked weren't they childhood enemies?
Veera:BALDEV
Baldev:ki hai kiun gala phaar kar chilla rahi hai?in an irritated tone Veera just hugged him in an unknown place outside the pind Veera:I love you Baldev
Baldev:Lekin...
Veera:Nahi main tujhse pyaar karti hoon
Baldev cupped her face in his hands and said:koi gal nahi
While she was taking a leave he suddenly grabbed her hand and pulled her close and with the other hand grabbed her waist and said Baldev:itni bhi kya jaldi hai...?
Veera:main bhi toh ae hi keh rahi hoon inni bhi kya jaldi hai?

Precap Baldev arrives at Veera's house with a alliance of Baldev what will she do forget her abroad dreams and marry an illiterate person and her childhood foe Baldev?what do u think guys?

Note:chapter 12    

                                       
                                Chapter=12

The day was here when Ranjan got married and now it was their suhagraat Ranvi:Gunjan shayad main tujhse kabhi pyaar nahin kar paaonga
Gunjan: koi nai tu thag gai ho gey aa raam karley
Ranvi:changa
Next morning Baldev managed to convince Bansuri that he loves Veera so with an irritated face accepted while on the other hand Balwant was already very happy because for the first time his good for nothing son took a very wise decision So they both along with the other pind women arrived in Ranveera's house and asked for Veera's hand for Baldev all were shocked
Balwant:ji hum Veera da haath Baldev de liye maangne aaya si aur iss mein Baldev di marzi shaamil hai aur Veera ki bhi
Ranvi: Gunjan Veera ko bulaao
Gunjan:changa
Veera came down with earphones on and then saw everyone and was shocked when Ranvi spoke up Ranvi:Veera tayaji ka kehna hai ki tu aur Baldev ek dujey se pyaar kartey hain aur shaadi karna chahatein hain kya yeh sach hai?
Veera bursted into laughter and said
Veera:veerji main aur Baldev se continued laughing
Baldev:Veera tu ne toh kal...
Veera:namuna tha ke kis tu ne panga liya hai Iam Veera Sampooran Singh jisse apne dapne poore karne hain aur kucch nahi anyways shaadi aur tujh jaise anpar gabwaar se never now get lost! And went away Ranvi:VEERA!ki hua isse...aap sab mainu maaf kar dijye main kucch...
Balwant:nahi puttar hum chaltey hain Baldev in the vine shop thinking how to kidnap Veera and make her his completely...

Note:kill me after this horrible update criticisms are always allowedEdited by Alyna098 - 9 years ago

no veeba? we all want veeba and not ranjan...please post the veeba part too today...dyeing to read it!!!😉

Yeah from tomorrow there will be only veeba veeba and veeba and very little of ranjan so chill 😛

you wont post the next part today?come on yaar..just one part😕pls