Ek Veer Ki Ardaas - Veera

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Posted: 9 years ago
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                          Chapter=13

The next morning Veera was leaving for London she was bidding good bye to everyone
Ranvi:main tainu chadh deta hoon
Veera:ho veerji main ab vaddi ho gai hoon
Ranvi:bohot vaddi hogai ab toh tainu veerji ki koi jarurat nahi hai haina
Veera:veeraji aap bhi na.and hugged when Her eyes fell on Balwant and Bansuri
Veera:tayaji tayiji mainu maaf kardijye mainu toh sirf Baldev nu ehsaas dilana tha ki jab dil toota hai toh kaisa mehsoos hota hai shayad tareeka galat tha
Bansuri:haab ae sahi pehele...was cut off in mid sentence by Balwant
Balwant:koi gal nahi puttar
She sat in the tampo and left for Delhi
Will she go to London or not
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Posted: 9 years ago
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                           Chapter14

While going the driver stopped in mid way to Veera's utter shock
Veera:praaji hume toh Delhi...but what happened next was so shocking she could see her dreams breaking into pieces when the driver started throwing her things outside the tampo and left her abandoned on the empty street.When she could suddenly see hope a tall lonely handsome figure standing at the end of the road
Veera:Baldev...th...thank god tu aa gaiya mainu,mainu Delhi
Baldev:main...he bursted into laughter
Baldev: jab ki main hi hoon joh tujhe aethe laane waala
Veera:kya
Baldev: vekh apne aas paas ird gird
Veera:M...Mandir
Baldev:aethe hi humaara vyaa hona hai
She was standing all numb not able to reply or move he dragged her she was struggling herself free from his grip but of no use the last sentence she heard from the Pandit ji that Shaadi sampan hui thats when she came back to her senses and saw her veerji there standing helplessly
Baldev:ab tu meri voti hai
Veera started crying very badly when his heart started piercing him at her every sob Ranvi came running but was pushed away by Veera
Veera:aap aethe meri zindagi ka tamaasha vekh rahe par kisi awaaz nahi uthai aakhir sauteli joh hoon aaj se hum dono ka rishta khatam...to be continued



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Fantastic Updates
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Chapter=15

Ranvi:Veera tu ae ki keh rahi hai
Veera:aap sab ka plan tha taake main London nah ja paaon toh nahi jaaongi Baldev ne mujh se shaadi toh karley lekin jail se batar zindagi main dungi yeh vaada hai mera chal Baldev
At Baldev's house Veera barged in without any ritual and went straight to their room crying on the bed Bansuri wanted to say something but Baldev indicated her to be quiet and went to his and Veera's room for their so called suhaagraat as he entered the room Veera stood up as he closed ThE door with a silent click and started walking towards Veera while she wad walking backwards until she was hit with a wall behind her when Baldev trapped her hands with one and the other went to catchef her waist and pull her closer when she told him
Veera:tune issi waaste mujhse shaadi ki thi nah s...suhagraat ke waaste mujhe barbaad karne ke vaaste aakhir dushman joh hoon
He instantly left her and thought his motive behind his marriage with his biggest enemy Veera for winning the sarpanch elections once he has her by his side no one will compete with not even Ranvi but he thought then why was he wanting to kiss her that very moment?
Back at Ranjan's house
Ranvi was broken still recalling Veera's words when Gunjan entered to call him for dinner he instantly hugged her and cried his heart out
Ranvi:Veera saare rishte naate kaise tod sakti hai mere naal jabb ke mainu khud nahi pata tha

Flashback
Baldev rang Ranvi
Baldev:Ranvi agar tu apni behen nu zinda vekh nah chahata hai toh aethe apne ghar waalo naal yahab Mandir vich aa jaan
Before Ranvi could say anything he disconnected the line
End of flashback
Ranvi:main uss waqt ki karta
Gunjan:Ranvi Veera gusse mein hai uska bachpan ka vekha
Sapna hamesha ke liye toot joh gaiya hai ab ae sab baatein chadh aur khaana kha ley teri mann pasand cheezein hain
Ranvi:nai pata nai meriVeera ne khaya hoga ya nahi
Gunjan:Ranvi Veera ne kha liya hai meri abhi veerji se baat hui
Ranvi broke the hug and followed Gunjan
Baldev's house
Veera wasn't having anything and had fallen asleep...to be continued
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Posted: 9 years ago
                         Chapter:16                        
                                    The suhagraat


At Baldev's house Veera slept without eating anything just when Baldev came in and saw the half blanket on her and her backless short dress exposing her creamy skin to his naked eyes just when he was controlling his emotions he saw she had turned and he got the view of her angelic face and an dried up tears he couldn't understand why buthe felt like howling that he made his Sherni cry he thought she was totally his by soul and her body he wanted to relish every inch of her and that too now so without thinking he went to her picked her up in his strong arms and never realized that she was awaken by his move and now dumbstruck he gently placed her on the bed still looking at her body when Veera frowned in confusion

Veera:oye tu ae ki kar raha hai? Baldev:pyaar This scared her inside to the core she was moving backwards on the bed but Baldev pulled her arms and held it strongly in his hands protectively yet possessively she was trying to struggle a lot when he said
Baldev:chup ek awaaz nahi She suddenly stopped her struggles and closed her eyes tightly when she feel his face coming closer and closer and closer almost touching her lips but not quite in a husky and intense voice

Baldev:sofay par sone di jarurat nahi hai tu bistar istemaal karley Covering the blanket she had no words left but to get mermerized by his beauty and left.This tim Baldev controlled his haywire emotion how could any man control his emotions when a girl keeps seducing him
Edited by Alyna098 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alyna098

                         Chapter:16                        
                                    The suhagraat


At Baldev's house Veera slept without eating anything just when Baldev came in and saw the half blanket on her and her backless short dress exposing her creamy skin to his naked eyes just when he was controlling his emotions he saw she had turned and he got the view of her angelic face and an dried up tears he couldn't understand why buthe felt like howling that he made his Sherni cry he thought she was totally his by soul and her body he wanted to relish every inch of her and that too now so without thinking he went to her picked her up in his strong arms and never realized that she was awaken by his move and now dumbstruck he gently placed her on the bed still looking at her body when Veera frowned in confusion

Veera:oye tu ae ki kar raha hai? Baldev:pyaar This scared her inside to the core she was moving backwards on the bed but Baldev pulled her arms and held it strongly in his hands protectively yet possessively she was trying to struggle a lot when he said
Baldev:chup ek awaaz nahi She suddenly stopped her struggles and closed her eyes tightly when she feel his face coming closer and closer and closer almost touching her lips but not quite in a husky and intense voice

Baldev:sofay par sone di jarurat nahi hai tu bistar istemaal karley Covering the blanket she had no words left but to get mermerized by his beauty and left.This tim Baldev controlled his haywire emotion how could any man control his emotions when a girl keeps seducing him

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Alyna098

                         Chapter:16                        
                                    The suhagraat


At Baldev's house Veera slept without eating anything just when Baldev came in and saw the half blanket on her and her backless short dress exposing her creamy skin to his naked eyes just when he was controlling his emotions he saw she had turned and he got the view of her angelic face and an dried up tears he couldn't understand why buthe felt like howling that he made his Sherni cry he thought she was totally his by soul and her body he wanted to relish every inch of her and that too now so without thinking he went to her picked her up in his strong arms and never realized that she was awaken by his move and now dumbstruck he gently placed her on the bed still looking at her body when Veera frowned in confusion

Veera:oye tu ae ki kar raha hai? Baldev:pyaar This scared her inside to the core she was moving backwards on the bed but Baldev pulled her arms and held it strongly in his hands protectively yet possessively she was trying to struggle a lot when he said
Baldev:chup ek awaaz nahi She suddenly stopped her struggles and closed her eyes tightly when she feel his face coming closer and closer and closer almost touching her lips but not quite in a husky and intense voice

Baldev:sofay par sone di jarurat nahi hai tu bistar istemaal karley Covering the blanket she had no words left but to get mermerized by his beauty and left.This tim Baldev controlled his haywire emotion how could any man control his emotions when a girl keeps seducing him

awesome dear continue soon waiting for the next update <3 <3 👏😃
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[COLOR=magenta]Chapter17


It was Veera's first day in her so called 'sasuraal'(in-laws house) she came down wearing her black dress with black heals.Bansuri kept starring angrily at her and said

Bansuri:Veera ae tera sasuraal hai maika nahi ke inna saj dhaj ke niqli hai itna bhi nahi pata ke sasuraal mein kaise rehte hai ja,jaa ke rasoi mein khaana bana

Veera:main aap ki ghar ki naukrani hoon ki joh hukum diya woh maan loon main nahi karne waali

Bansuri:Ratan ne sikhaya nahi chal char ja kar dhung ke kapre pehein le tere pak phere ki rasam shuru hone waali hai

Veera:oh hello kaisi rasam main ae shaadi ko nahi maanti main ne toh lawyer se bhi baat kar liya annul
Karne vaaste

Just then RanVi entered for pak phera

Ranvi:Veera apne se baron se aise baat ki jaati hai haan main jaantaan ki Baldev ne joh kiya

Veera had cut him off in mid sentence

Veera:oh please yeh lecture mainu mat sunnaye aur nahi chaaiye apki hamdardi chale jao yahan se pls

Just then Baldev made his entry and told Ranvi to go now as Veera was fuming and also to Veera to go to their room Veera stormed out of the house

Baldev:VEERA.
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Veera sat at the Choupaal drinking black coffee when her phone rang she opened her volet and saw Karan

Veera:haan Romeo bol

Karan:oye jhalli tu kab aa rahi hai classes ek mahine mein shuru hone waale hain

It made Veera shattered she disconnected the phone without replying and ran to her house tears rolling down her cheeks closed the room door and broke down on the floor but never noticed a lone figure standing there all in pain and wanting to howl



Pre-cap:sarpanch elections and Veera confesses her love to Baldev
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Chapter:18

Veera was crying in her room when Baldev came and said
Baldev:tainu ki pind vich baar laani hai ki rona band kar
Veera:tainu ki farq painta hai tainu jo chaiye tha woh toh mil gaya na
Baldev:tainu London jaana haI na main tainu bheju ga jaldi se ab toh rona band kar vekh Veetakadi mainu toh bas teri khushi chaiye aur tainu London jaane se khushi milti hai toh tu wahi jaayegi
Veera had no words but she thought that this Baldev is not that whom she knew for the first time she saw his soft corner and slept but got up with a jerk and started thinking
Veera:mainu apna sapna poora karna hai lekin uss insaan nu chad ke jaongi joh mujhse apno zindagi se bhi zyada pyaar karta hai
And finally realizes love for Baldev and tries to confess first she went in the kitchen but messed it up then she tried to press his clothes and burnt her hand
Veera:ouch
Baldev:vekha tu aise harqatein kar kyun rahi hai Karan sahi kehta hai jhalli hai tu poori ki poori
Veera:oye aethe main tainu apna pyaar confess karne di koshish Kar rahi hoon aur tu mainu hi suna raha tu hai jhalla main nahi stupid
And walked out of the room leaving a stunned Baldev behind what did he hear that his sherni loves him is it a dream the only sherni and beautiful girl of Pritampura leaving her abroad dreams has fallen for him
He decided to speak to her no matter she betrays him like before but live every moment of it he came to the kitchen while she was drinking water the glass of water was pulled from her mouth which shocked her and that was followed by a hot kiss from her husband she was still stunned to reply or do any movement but it was broken by Jaggi and Billa who told him about the upcoming elections Veera convinced Balwant for supporting them and the next day they went for the registration and Veera supported him a lot in the campaigns

Pre-cap:the final verdict of the sarpanch elections                           Chapter:18 Veera was crying in her room when Baldev came and said Baldev:tainu ki pind vich baar laani hai ki rona band kar Veera:tainu ki farq painta hai tainu jo chaiye tha woh toh mil gaya na Baldev:tainu London jaana haI na main tainu bheju ga jaldi se ab toh rona band kar vekh Veetakadi mainu toh bas teri khushi chaiye aur tainu London jaane se khushi milti hai toh tu wahi jaayegi Veera had no words but she thought that this Baldev is not that whom she knew for the first time she saw his soft corner and slept but got up with a jerk and started thinking Veera:mainu apna sapna poora karna hai lekin uss insaan nu chad ke jaongi joh mujhse apno zindagi se bhi zyada pyaar karta hai And finally realizes love for Baldev and tries to confess first she went in the kitchen but messed it up then she tried to press his clothes and burnt her hand Veera:ouch Baldev:vekha tu aise harqatein kar kyun rahi hai Karan sahi kehta hai jhalli hai tu poori ki poori Veera:oye aethe main tainu apna pyaar confess karne di koshish Kar rahi hoon aur tu mainu hi suna raha tu hai jhalla main nahi stupid And walked out of the room leaving a stunned Baldev behind what did he hear that his sherni loves him is it a dream the only sherni and beautiful girl of Pritampura leaving her abroad dreams has fallen for him He decided to speak to her no matter she betrays him like before but live every moment of it he came to the kitchen while she was drinking water the glass of water was pulled from her mouth which shocked her and that was followed by a hot kiss from her husband she was still stunned to reply or do any movement but it was broken by Jaggi and Billa who told him about the upcoming elections Veera convinced Balwant for supporting them and the next day they went for the registration and Veera supported him a lot in the campaigns Pre-cap:the final verdict of the sarpanch elections
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super se upar hai..👏loved it to the core!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! iam ur big fan!please continue today itself..now...iam so addicted and cant wait to read the rest..u rock!!!!👍🏼