Ek Veer Ki Ardaas - Veera

my first veeba and ranjan love story part 29 updated! - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter22

Both veeba left their house and waiting at the bus stand for their bus
Baldev:kithe rahe gai ae bus
Veera:omg mera make-up
Baldev:ae lo ji aethe bus nahi aai aur ae maharani nu apni mak up di fikr hai huh
Under his breath but Veera heard it
Veera:oye tu ne kucch kaha...?
Baldev:oye na ji na sherni nu kon kehe sakta hai kucch
Veera: 😡
Finally the arrived both veeba sat on it,it was a very long journey but how can it be a simplr journey without any obstacle or hurdle so the bus engine went phusss
And they were strandered trying to Figure out something in the jungle at 11:00pm
Veeba jumped out from the bus while everyone were seated and after 5 mins the bus started moving and they were all alone on the bus
Baldev:ae vekho ek aur siyyappa
Actually he was right how could anyonr tolerate
Veera
Pre-cap veeba romance in the jungle

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sanjanabaldev thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome yaar..ur getting better and better after each day..u made me glued to the story.loved it very much.please continue today itself..dyeing to read it1⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
~chapter 23~

Veera was very happy that now she could tell Baldev about her feelings
~flashback~
Veera was packing her bag mummuring inside her breath
Veera:ab ae hi kaam rahe gaya hai mere vaaste
When suddenly a report fell down
Veera:ae ki hai...?
There it came that Baldev took loan from the bank and sold his bike for her treatement her eyes started welling up with tears
Veera:ab main tainu chadh kar nahi jaaongi samjha
~flashback ends~
So they were lost and Baldev was working very hard to find a way out
Suddenly Veera bumped into him and they both fell Veera was on top of him and their eyes wide open
Veera was loving the feel but Baldev felt uncomfortable and got up along with Veera
Note:pls drop ur likes and comments down
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is only veeba story for veeba fan so please change ur cap becz ranjanian feel like they becm cheated and waisted their time after reading this story line up :-)
Alyna098 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Right now my focuss is only on veeba then ranjan so once iam done with them then I can focuss on ranjan
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Posted: 9 years ago
No worries :-) sorry for the post .I felt to share with u my opinion but ur story is going very well :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesomee continue soon 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice continue sooon 😉😛😊😃😳😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Note:sorry guys couldn't update chapter 23 because my CPU crashed so here u go and pls comment and give me ur feedback pls

                                    Chapter:23
After searching for the road for 5 hours Veera and Baldev both gave up
Veera:oye ruk oye
Baldev: 🤢
Baldev:aaj raat yahin batani hogi
A squirrel passed Veera,s and she screamed at the top of her lungs
Veera:veeerjiii
Baldev had to press his fingers agained his ears in order to prevent himself from getting deaf
Veera:aethe janwar bhi hain
The way she said so cutely yet innocently made him forget all the hatred for her but he had to speak rudely in order to send her to London and fulfil her dream
~flashback~
Baldev entered the room and saw Veera holding the report of her hospital and heard her speak up
Veera:Maine isse kinna galat samjha is de sapne tode aur isne...main Kahin nahi jaongi
~flashback ends~
Precap:veeba both found a village called Matkundi and the starting of a new life and disasters
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Posted: 9 years ago
this is really fabulous!!!!
Awesome creative writing skills! Loved it 😊