Rishabala TS: Surprise Pack Love (COMPLETED)

Posted: 9 years ago

Hi everyone 😃
I am back with a OS again !!! 😉
This is for SuRu again for helping with the formatting, I was so confused and again she came in a shinning armor to help like always 😳 Love you Suru ❤️
Hope you all enjoy reading this ⭐️⭐️

Surprise Pack Love

It has been a very busy day. The preparation for the college youth festival kept me busy all the day , now i just feel like sleeping but i have to wait till i reach home. It almost takes me an hour to reach home. I decided to play some game on my mobile.
 
"Lets play 10 questions madhu ?"
 
That was the first thing i saw when i opened my mobile. I didnt recognize the number but replied anyways.
 
- "Who is this ?"
 
It took only a moment for the reply to come.
 
"will tell you surely but at then end but only if u agree to play with me"
 
I thought for moment before replying 
 
"Rules??"
 
"None" came the instant reply.
 
"Fine but I start though" I texted back, normally i would not reply to strangers but this person knew my name and i still had half an our on the bus to get home and i knew this was someone i knew because today only in college canteen we played 10 question.
 
- "As you wish"
 
I decided i would start trying to guess who it was so i asked ,
 
"1.Do i know you ??"
 
It took longer for the reply to come. So i closed my phone and started looking throught the windows enjoying the breeze. Then my phone finally buzz, I opened the screen and saw the reply .
 
"You know me but not well, My turn now...1.Whats ur fav colour?"
 
I replied instantly
 
 - "Blue,my turn now , 2.Are you a boy or a girl?" 
 
 I thought it could be one of friends who were trying to just have fun with me.Then the reply came it was quicker than last one.
 
"Boy and single 😉 ok now ,  2. Fav pastime ?''
 
The reply made me laugh someone was eager for giving the information i thought . So this was a boy .
 
"Oh , giving more information than required. My fav pastime is Painting, 3.Do you go to my college?"
 
Glancing out of the bus window I realized i still had almost 20 minutes to reach my stop and then a 15 mins walk till the house. I wish i could buy a bike.Then i felt the buzz again 
 
"Yep , we both are from the same college,  3.Do you any siblings?"
 
"Yeah a elder brother and a younger sister, 4.Will you surely tell me who you are after the 10 questions?"
 
"I already told you i will at the start of the game . A question wasted now , 4.Your fav place to hangout?"
 
This question made me think , to be honest i would go to any nice place but for coffee i would love to go to only one place.
 
"XYZ Cafe , 5.Fav colour ?"
 
I asked this question because i was unable to guess who it was only a very few close friends called me madhu other than them everyone called me Madhubala , so this was someone who knew that my close friends called me madhu but then i thought at the end i would get to know who it was , why think so much.
 
"Copying my question ain't you ? btw this doesn't count as a question and coming to my fav colour its black , 5. Fav Holiday destination?"
 
I replied with in a second.
 
"Paris , 6. Fav food?"
 
"Madhubala ...Aahaan ! You just stole the question out of my head btw i love Pizza with extra cheese and 6.Same question"
 
"Hahahahahaaa , Now look who is copying . I would prefer noodles anytime , 7. How did you get my number?"
 
"I took it from Trishna , Dont get angry at her i said i needed ur help in some preparations "
 
Trishna is my best friend and i would kill her if this guy turns out to be weird one .
 
"I wont get angry on her as long as you don't try kill me"
 
"No worries then as i have different plans 😉 , 7. Do you have any crushes ? "
 
"Getting personal are we ??? But yes I have a crush and i wont tell you who it is !!! 8.Are we from the same batch or are you my senior?"
 
At this moment my bus came to my stop , i got down and started walking and the buzz again.
 
"Hahahahaa... don't tell me , I will figure it out sooner or later and i am from your batch only 😉 8.The thing you hate the most?"
 
I thought he can never find it as i haven't told Trishna still who my crush is and this random guy thinks he would find it out.
 
" Video games , i hate it when I lose it with my brother, 9. What colour is your hair?(I am running out of ideas 😆 )"
 
"Not bad i have Black hairs, 9.Will you go to a date with me tomorrow?"
 
I read the message twice. What the hell has he gone crazy.Oh now i want to reach home and sleep this is exhausting.
 
"Date?? I don't even know you !!! How do I know you aren't some sort of creepy stalker or a crazy murdered"
 
- "You would have to trust me Madhu"]
 
"NO" I replied instantly.
 
"If you know who I am would you consider your decision again ? Anyway you have one more question left"
 
"Maybe i would consider it , 10.Who are you ?"
 
Now I was at the park near my home , I decided to take the shortcut through it and my phone buzzed again.
 
"Turn around"
 
"What? That was not a question nor a answer"
 
"10.Please?"
 
My legs got stuck on the ground i was finally coming to know who it was . Now the game has ended  but the curiosity of who he was and why he wanted me to turn made me turn and when i turned i found myself very close to a boy. I could see that his jacket fitted him perfectly and it was unzipped a little to show the white shirt underneath.My eyes traveled a little up a strong jaw , sharp nose , brown eyes messy black hair and mobile in his hand.
"Rishab Kundra i mean Rk", I asked in shock. He moved back and gave a heart melting smile then my phone buzzed again.
 
"Surprise" 


My head snapped back to Rk . So , he was the one texting me. I was shocked.


"Hey , Madhu would you reconsider your decision please!!"
 
Rk said , I was shocked would be a understatement but was he serious or this was a prank. Why would the most handsome boy of the college like to go out with me. I knew i like him since the day i saw him helping the children at the orphanage he looked so cute and innocent . While all this was going through my head , I forgot that he was waiting for the answer infront of me.
 
"Are you kidding me?"
 
I asked. He pulled me towards himself by sliding a arm at my waist.
 
"Do you think I am?"
 
 rk asked . I was really shocked . The expression on my face made him remove his arm.
 
"Sorry madhu , you don't have to make fun of it. If you don't want to go out with a simple NO would work".
 
I could see him start to make a move then i realized he was serious I quickly grabbed his hand his touch gave me glitters , i could feel butterflies in my stomach. Oh!! I thought this only happened in books.


"So, is this a yes?"
 
he asked me with a smirk. I couldn't speak anything i was feeling shy. He was my long time crush I remember when we were small he used to come at my place to play with my brother and now see where I am.
 
 "Yes rk , lets meet tomorrow"
 
"Oh! i was afraid you would say no"
 
he admitted. I chuckled at this how could rk think i would say no.
 
"Ofcourse not''
 
i whispered.


And this was just the beginning.
 





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Edited by AzraZaidi - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Firstly A BIG THANKS dear for this lobby mindblowing surprise pack love story!!! 🤗

Wat to say yaar u r truly a cute OS writer expert!!!
it's totally unique story with damn cute style of proposal scene!!! love it love love it sooo much!!! ❤️
keep it up my jaana!! u rocked!!! 👏

And I maintained my position again!!! me first to comment!!! yiiipppeee!!!! 🥳 Edited by My_VivJaan - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
i read this before only 😉but didnt got time to unres anyways now saying a fabulous and Awesome update i loved it well written !! 👏😳
Edited by -ChitraRocking- - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
cute & sweet os..
thanx for the pm 😛
Posted: 9 years ago
Aww this was a cute one..just luvd it 
Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing OS!!!!
Super cute...thanks for the PM!!!!:)
Posted: 9 years ago
tnx fr surprise os nyc dear
Posted: 9 years ago
Good OS Azra Di!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon & pm Me!
Posted: 9 years ago
Aww so cute...
loved tis phone qn ...
lvly dear...
do write more...
ll be waitin...
Posted: 9 years ago

awesome os 😉

loved love the game ...😃 



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