OS:- Devdasi- Love OR God - Page 2

it was awsome Edited by scarletmalik - 9 years ago

I have mentioned this before and again this reading your peice of work takes me to a different world completely ...This was very beautifully written though beautiful is definitely an understatement...Edited by frappie - 9 years ago

UNRES

Part 1- Gambheeram! (majestic)👏

part2- ati gambheeram!👏

Your description of new main priest reminds Aham.😊 and while reading, I imagined him as a priest (in the attire from Parashuram's episode. Thanks to VasusenaRadheya's caps!)

What makes this story special in my eyes is the whole theme is refreshing. It has something natural. Am I smelling a hidden twist? I like stories of this kind. I guess I'm going to read about two lovers who forget to tell each other. May be Devapriya will tell him. She is very bold type. She is capable of a even his apaharan & bhaag jaaoying. Anyhow let me wait.

Writing on an already written character and creating a fresh character are very different which needs a mother's care.. I liked the way you created Devapriya! Dashing, daring, intelligent, injured and bleeing soul still keeping head straight.

Waiting for next update. But no hurries...Edited by Brahmaputra - 9 years ago

Read the first part . Quite interesting to be absolutely frank . I'm totally liking it the way you've wriiten the first part . You've created the a mystic air of the bygone era where it is quite easy to picturize that time & the characters...at least the character of Devpriya has been sketched very nicely .Edited by VasusenaRadheya - 9 years ago

I love this part of your OS Devdasi-Love Or God.

Diii how can you write so well that you actually make me read it at 2 am ... awesome Di...

Wow ! So Now, Devpriya Is Getting Attached To Her Lord, The Purohit...I Think This Is The Difference Between Old And New Times - In The Olden Days God Himself Came Down To Save His Darling, And Now He Came In The Disguise Of A Human Due To The Increasing Rate Of Disbelief In Him !

Panchu I am sorry for being sooo late to comment.I loved Devpriya though she is kind of grey.I guess the  sorroundings make her lie to herself and behave falsely masking her inherent goodness.I think she is compassionate by nature which is revealed by her saving the cat..I loved her rebel nature.And I sooo love Pooja.And now comes the best part the hero...I actually want to fill this page with blush smileys.His sculpted muscular body,thunderstorm voice ,handsome face ,beautiful lips...I am losing my self control Panchu.Eager to see the Romance pure and divine romance And also hope He will be able to make her understand the God in the stone Updateee

Originally posted by: scarletmalik

it was awsome

loved it

 

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

interesting story