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👍🏼UNRES
Fantabulous update!👏 Beauty & love born as words. This one is getting better and better with new new chapters. And your poems are precise, brilliant and classic!👏Their beauty is surely in what they sing for. They spoke more about their love for each other.
I am really liking this beauty with a daring brain more and more as she puts him in emotional turbulance. She never hides her burning and yearning for him. How evident is that how much love she is having for him? He must accept her love. That is the best favor he could do if he sincerely loves her. Also I'm saddened by his helplessness. He will understand her. But who will understand him?
I'm just dedicating my favourite lines I wrote for someone else to Devapriya also. Hope you don't mind. They are so apt for this girl, or every girl-- "They (her feelings) sought something beyond what his body could do (to her body). She wanted him to know her, accept her, respect her and unconditionally love her. She wanted him to bridge her isolation, rescue her, draw her unto him and make her his own. She longed to feel his feeling of wanting to protect her in his love. She desired to be touched with his yearning to fill the voids of her soul and to feel the bliss of love when she could harmoniously blend in him like a river merging into boundless ocean."
I'm really basking myself in your story. 😆 I may go writing essays on this couple but stopping here for having less time. Though the rest of the story is in your hands, I wish they finally annihilate the system of Devadasi and live with each other! I wish this girl doesn't marry the stone. Yet, I'll wait. Once again, this story is brilliant.👏 Especially I liked how they danced together into losing in each other! She is a piece butter melting in his love. Thanks a lot for writing it.
Fantabulous update!👏 Beauty & love born as words. This one is getting better and better with new new chapters. And your poems are precise, brilliant and classic!👏Their beauty is surely in what they sing for. They spoke more about their love for each other.
I am really liking this beauty with a daring brain more and more as she puts him in emotional turbulance. She never hides her burning and yearning for him. How evident is that how much love she is having for him? He must accept her love. That is the best favor he could do if he sincerely loves her. Also I'm saddened by his helplessness. He will understand her. But who will understand him?
I'm just dedicating my favourite lines I wrote for someone else to Devapriya also. Hope you don't mind. They are so apt for this girl, or every girl-- "They (her feelings) sought something beyond what his body could do (to her body). She wanted him to know her, accept her, respect her and unconditionally love her. She wanted him to bridge her isolation, rescue her, draw her unto him and make her his own. She longed to feel his feeling of wanting to protect her in his love. She desired to be touched with his yearning to fill the voids of her soul and to feel the bliss of love when she could harmoniously blend in him like a river merging into boundless ocean."
I'm really basking myself in your story. 😆 I may go writing essays on this couple but stopping here for having less time. Though the rest of the story is in your hands, I wish they finally annihilate the system of Devadasi and live with each other! I wish this girl doesn't marry the stone. Yet, I'll wait. Once again, this story is brilliant.👏 Especially I liked how they danced together into losing in each other! She is a piece butter melting in his love. Thanks a lot for writing it.
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