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Chapter 3 updated. .enjoy and comment please.

Antara was shivering in her room. What a day she had! Her eyes caught the shirt covering her chest. The scent on his shirt reached her nostrils. She sniffed his salty ruggedness and perfume. "Ye kiya kar rahi hai tu Antara? Her inner voice asked. She quickly threw the shirt on the bed and said. "Chort deta hai fhir dawa lagata hai..idiot! Grabbing her towel she left towards the washroom. Half an hour she came out. Her neck burned because of the long scratch. Her whole body was weak because she didn't eat anything since morning. Sitting on her bed she dialled her papa's number. Suppressing her tears she talked to her parents. She felt a temperature when she hung up. She assumed she was having fever. Layin in her bed she feebly closed her eyes and soon she was snoring.

Everyone met downstairs for dinner except Antara. Raghu's eyes were constantly on Antara's door. Daadi/Naani noticed that. "Beta simran jaah Antara ko bula laa. Mom said. Simmi excitedly ran towards Antara's room. "Antara di! Simmi knocked on the door. When there was no response simmi gently turned the door knob and entered inside. "Antara di! "Get up! "It's dinner time! Simmi said while sitting beside her on the bed . When Antara didnt say anything. .simran touched her head. "Omg! "Di ko tez bhukhaar hai! Simran came running downstairs! "Simmi sambhalkey ke bacchey gir jaaogi! Raghu shouted. "Bhaiya..Antara di ko tez bhukaar hai..aur woh soh rahi hai. Simmi said in one breath. '"Subha se kuch khaai bhi nai aur fir upar se mayney...Raghu said and stopped half way. Everyone gave him a questionable look. "Aap sabmmujhey iss tarah kiyu ghoor rahe hai? "Zyaada kaam thaa toh miss kaul couldn't have her breaks or eat anything. Raghu said. Papa and mom headed towards Antara"s room along with simmi. "Beta tu Antara ko pareshaan toh nai kar raha na? Daadi said. "Han..nai!" Mera matlab may kiyu pareshaan karunga ussey? "Woh khud ek pareshaani hai! Raghu said. "Ladtey jhagartey hi pyaar ho jaayega tum dekhna! Daadi whispered in naani's ears. Raghu played with his food rather than eating. "Beta doctor ko phone karo..Antara is unconscious! Mom howled from upstairs. "Kiya? Everyone said in unison. Raghu grabbed his phone and called their family doctor. Because of rain and thunderstorm..doctor said he cant come and asked Raghu to bring Antara to the his place as it was late at night. Raghu ran upstairs to Antara's room. "Mom..woh doctor cant come because of bad weather outside. .humey Antara ko uskey ghar lejaana hoga. Raghu said. "Rahil gaadi nikaalo! Raghu scooped her petite figure in his arms and carried her to the car. The weather was getting worse. Rantara sat at the back..unconscious Antara lay in Raghu's lap. Raghu looked her closely for the first time. "She's beautiful! He thought. He then noticed the scratch on her neck. "Ye kiya huwa issey? He thought. Suddenly Raghu was worried for her. "Kahi kisiney iss ke saath batimeezi toh nai ki? They arrived at the docs house. It was pouring heavily. Raghu patted on her cheeks. "Miss kaul! But Antara still didn't respond. Raghu carried her inside. Doctor attended her right away. "She's having a fever and very dehydrated. "Didn't she eat and drink anything? Doc asked. Raghu felt bad. She couldn't have her lunch break today because of him. "I have to keep her on intravenous whole night. Dr said. Raghu sent Rahil home and he stayed with Antara. Dr's wife being a kind women made vegetable soup for Antara. "When she's awake..feed her this. Dr said. Raghu noded and waited for her to wake up. Thunder rolled. .Antara woke up with a jerk! Raghu ran to her as she was trying to sit on the bed. "Miss kaul! "Are you ok? He asked while helping her to sit. She looked at him with confusion. "May kaha hu? "Aur tum kiyu ho merey paas? Antara asked. He told her everything. "Abh ye soup khaa lo..thori taaqat miljaayegi mujhsey larney ke liye. Raghu said mockingly. Antara frowned. "Nai khaana mujhey. .I'm not hungry! She said while looking away. "Dekh miss kaul tum bahut weak ho..kuch toh khaana parega na? He said. "Ye weakness bhi tumarey kaaran hii huwa hai! "Tumey to may machine dikhti hu..insaan nai! "Teen admiyo ka kaam tumney mujhsey karwaya. Antara said angrily. Raghu gulped. "S..sorry! Raghu said. Antara glanced at him. He brought the spoonful of veg soup to her mouth. "Kalsey may tumey kuch kaam nai bolunga ..chal abh ye khaaley. Raghu said. Frowning. .Antara opened her mouth as Raghu fed her. "Tum itney akdru kiyu ho?" Are you in conflict with the smile and laughter? "Or are you wearing dentures? "Joh hasney se bahaar aajaygi? Antara asked in slight frustration. Raghu's eyes widened. "Dekh tu fir se shuru mat hojaah! "Issey khatam kar aur nikaltey yaha se. Raghu dodged her questions. "Patah nai tumari biwi tumarey saath kaysey rahe paayegi! Antara said while shaking her head. Raghu didn't know what to say. "Baath kam kar aur khatam kar issey! Raghu said. Pouting. .Antara finished her soup. "Miss kaul..what happened on your neck? "You have a scratch there. Raghu said. Antara remembered the scene on the bus. "Tum sey matlab? "Tumhey har baath jaanna zaruri hai? "Im not telling you! Antara said plainly. "Patah toh may laga ke rahunga miss kaul. Raghu said In his heart. They couldn't go home because of the weather. Antara slept while Raghu sat beside her and watched her face whole night.

Next morning Antara was fit and fine. Rahil came to get them. "Miss kaul you can rest today. .no need to come to the office if you are not feeling ok. Raghu said while arriving at Naik residence. "Nai it's ok..I'm fine..may kaam kar sakti hu. Antara said. "Beta tu theek hai na? Mom said while coming to them. "May abh theek hu mom. Antara replied. Everyone left for their rooms as mom headed towards the kitchen. Antara freshened up and went to meet the two sexy ladies. The grannies were pleased to see her. "Antara di you are back! Simran came running into her embrace. Antara took her in her arms. "Breakfast is ready everyone! Mom howled from downstairs. Everyone met at the dinning table. "Tonight we'll be eating out ..the Maliks will be joining us as well..Raghu aur Arti ki engagement ki date fix karni hai. Papa said. Raghu choked on his food. "Excuse me. Raghu excused himself and left. "Isko kiya huwa? Mom asked. "Bhaaiya ko shaayad Arti pasand nai hai mom. Rahil said. "Kaysey pasandh nai hai? "Rishtey ke liye khud Raghu ne haa kiya thaa . Mom said. "Shayad munda ko kisi aur pasandh araha hai. Daadi whispered in naani's ears. Antara was witnessing all this.

At the office Raghu was pacing his cabin. He forgot that he was getting married soon. Aur aaj unki sagaai ki date fix hojaaygi. He ruffled his hair in frustration. Antara knocked the door and entered his office. She stood still when she saw his restlessness. He banged on the table..hard! Antara shivered. "Ra...Raghu...She said softly. "Kiya hai miss kaul? He asked while raising his tone. "Ye files..she said. "Han toh rakho aur dafa hojaao! He fumed. She was leaving when Raghu grabbed her wrist. Antara stopped and twitched her head. "Terey galey me ye nishaan kaha se aaye? He asked in his husky voice. Antara gulped. "Cho..chort lagi hai mujhey. Antara said. "Kaysey lagi ye chort? He asked. "It's my personal problem ..may tumey kiyu batao? She replied. Raghu pushed her in the wall..and caged her in between his arms. Antara started to tremble at his behavior. "Tu..tum ye kiya kar rahe ho? "Jaaney do mujhey! Antara said nervously. "Payley mujhey bata ye chort kaha se lagi ! Kisi aur ka gussa Raghu Antara par nikaal raha thaa. Antara couldn't look into his eyes. It was turning red. She was super scared! "Raghu tum mujhey dara rahey ho! Antara said. "Han toh batati kiyu nai? "Tu bata de I'll let you go. He said. Antara knew he wont let her go easily. "Woh kal bus me kuch gundo ne meri Izzat...Antara gulped and continued. "They tried to rape me. Raghu's palms balled into solid fists..his eyes became like fiery furnace! Antara squeezed herself and hugged her chest out of fear. "Kaunsi bus thii? He roared like a lion. Antara gave him the detail. He released her. Breathing heavily Antara ran to her cabin. "Kitna gussa karta hai ye ladka! "Uff..meri toh jaan nikal gayee thii! Antara said while leaning on the door. That evening Raghu went to the bus stop and waited for the bus to arrive. "Raghu please jaaney bhi doh na..it's over..Antara pleaded. "Its not over miss kaul. .abhi tu dekh may kiya karta hu inn sab ka! Raghu said angrily. " k..kiya karogey tum? She asked worriedly. "Tord fodh! He said. Antara's eyes widened. The bus arrived. Raghu got in and talked to the driver. He gestured Antara to come in and show him that person. Antara looked around and pointed towards a guy at the back. That was it! He grabbed the guy by his collar and threw him outside the bus. Antara screamed. Raghu came out followed by Antara. He bashed him up badly. "Haath torwana ho toh tabhi kisi ladki ko haath lagana! Raghu roared. Poor guy lay there with a black eye..bleeding mouth and broken bones! Picking him up he threw him in the bus. "Hospital lejaah issey! Raghu ordered the bus driver. He grabbed trembling Antara by her hand and pulled her towards his car." Aaj ke baad tum bus se travel nai karogi! "Samjhi tum? He asked his deep voice. Antara gulped and noded. "Chal baith! He commanded. They got in the car as Raghu drove away.

Precap: interesting. Stay tuned. Mwaah...love to all. See ya!Edited by sanjinimala - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful dear πŸ˜³
update soon 😊
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Wow 
Sanju baba 
Apki mahema aparam paar ..how i wonder what u are..
Kya update wright kiya hai 
Raghu ne kaha main tuje chod de ga. .an antra baith gye..
An wall scence was wow 
I love thet mument antra say tuje kya main kuch bhi kar..
Updated soon 
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Posted: 9 years ago
finally u updated 
yipeee 
this was out of the world yaar 
now is starting to notice her closely hayee
itna gussa uff toba only raghu can be like this
he let out his frustration on antu 
how come he suddenly asked abt the scratch??
ufff bashing bashing is raghus habit 
love is coming i can see it now 
engagement nahiii jaldi kuch karo sanji ji
pls cont asap
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Awsome chapter dude... 
just loved it very very much...
can't wait for next chapter
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Chapter 4 updated enjoy and dont forget to comment. Thank you!

Raghu was really pissed off. He was speeding towards Naik Residence. Antara was panicking big time."Raghu please dheerey chalao na! Antara said. "Chup baith samjhi na!" Ek bhi awaaz ki na toh mujhsey bura koi nai hoga! Raghu fumed at her. Her body trembled at his deep voice. "I asked you for a ride that day but you..akar ki dukaan! "Tewar dikha rahi thii tu mujhey! "Agar tujhey kuch hojaata toh? "Kiya jawaab detey hum tumarey momma papa ko? Raghu asked angrily. Antara just stared at his face. "Mera muh kiyu taank rahi hai? "Aagay dekh! Raghu said. Antara quickly composed herself and looked ahead. Rest of the drive was in silence.

Arriving home they found everyone ready for the dinner out with the maliks. "Get ready beta we'll leave soon. Mom said to Raghu. "Antara beta tum bhi taiyaar ho jaao..jaao jaao hurry up! Mr Naik said. "Lekin uncle may waha aakar kiya karungi? Antara said. "Chalo na Antara di! Simmi insisted. "Tum akeli ghar par kiya karogi..chalo na beta. Daadi said. Raghu was waiting for her answer. He wanted her to come with them. "Accha theek hai i'll come. Antara replied. After listening to her reply. .Raghu left to freshen up.

In half an hour he came down. "Jaa simmi Antara ko bula laa. Mom said. Simmi ran towards Antara's room. "Dont run bacchey gir jaaogi! Raghu shouted behind her." We'll sit in the car you guys come.papa said. One by one everyone left towards the car.Raghu's gaze was on Antara's door. He couldn't shift his gaze when he saw her coming down with simmi..giggling and laughing. For a moment Raghu was lost. He was still deeply lost when Antara and simran came and stood beside him. "Bhaiya! Little simmi's voice broke his trance. "Chaley? Simmi said. "Han..chalo. Raghu said while composing himself. They came out to find the others had already left. Simmi got in the back seat. "Antara di aap bhaiya ke saath baytho na please! Simmi requested. Before Antara could say anything Raghu opened the passenger door for her. Knowing that he was upset..Antara didn't say anything and got in quietly. Soon they were heading towards the restaurant where everyone were suppose to meet. "Bhaiya Antara di kitni sundar lagrahi nai? Simmi said from the back. "Simmi! Antara said while feeling a Little uncomfortable. Raghu glanced at Antara. Antara felt his gaze upon her." Ghoorna bandh karo aur aagey dekho tum! Antara said. "Antara di your are so pretty iss liye bhaiya aapko dekh rahe hai. Little simmi sang. Antara blushed and looked away."itni si baath pe may blush kiyu kar rahi hu? Antara thought. Raghu smiled at Little simmi. "Khadoos smile bhi karta hai? Antara was amused at the sudden change.

They arrived at the designated place. The Maliks were already there. After greeting each other the family went inside the restaurant. Aarti came and stood beside Raghu. Antara and simmi left the two alone and joined the ladies. Raghu noticed that. Aarti was talking to Raghu but Raghu was lost in Antara. His eyes were upon her. Aarti followed his gaze and found that he was lost in Antara. Aarti wasn't liking this at all. Making an ugly face she sat down. Antara was busy with daadi and naani. " my pretty ladies kiyu upset dikh rahey hai? Antara said softly. "Kiyu ki humey ye aarti pasandh nai hai. Naani said. "Kaash aarti ki jagah tum hoti beta. Daadi said. Antara's eyes widened. "Aap kiya bolrahi hai daadi? Antara started to sweat at daadi's words. "Antara di aap meri bhaabi ban jaao na..please! Little simmi whispered in her ears. Antara felt a knot in her belly." Ssshhh...ye nai ho sakta simmi! Antara whispered back. "Kiyu nai ho sakta? Rahil asked softly." Tum bhi? Antara asked unbelievably. "Ye kiya ho raha hai? Antara thought. "Sab merey hi pichey par gay..Antara said in her heart. Finally it was decided that the sagaai will take place in two weeks and in a month..the wedding. Everyone was Happy except Raghu and the group of four. "We have to act quick! Daadi whispered to naani. The dinner started. Raghu was not in his right mind. Looking at his confused face..Rahil whispered in his ears. "Bhaiya agar aapko Aarti pasandh nai hai toh mana kardo iss rishtey ke liye. "Nai yaar..ye sab may mom dad ki khushi ke liye kar raha hu. Said Raghu. "Aur what about your happiness? Rahil asked. Before he could answer Aarti interrupted them. "Raghu lets go outside. .I want to talk to you akeley me. "Jaa na beta. Mrs Naik said. Reluctantly Raghu had to go with Aarti. "Tumari beti ki akal humesha ghaas kiyu charti raheti hai? "Bhejh diya bichaarey Raghu ko uskey saath.Daadi asked naani. "Patah nai..jab se terey betay se shaadi ki hai tab se uska akal ghaas hi charta raheta hai. Naani replied with an attitude. The grannies giggled looking at each other. It was time to go. Raghu and Aarti came inside. Raghu's gaze moved to Antara who was chatting with simmi. "It's late I think we all should get going. Raghu said. Everyone agreed. Soon everyone were in their cars..heading towards their residence.

Next day at Naik Residence Antara helped mom prepare breakfast then she gave green teas to the grannies. They blessed her. Getting ready for the office she came to simmi's room to help her get ready for school. In a month Antara was famous in Naik Residence. She won everyone's heart. "Antara di I cant find my rumaal..can you please find it for me? Rahil howled from his room. "Abhi aai rahil! Antara said. Getting simmi ready for school. .Antara ran to look for Rahil's handkerchief. "Antara beta newspaper kidhar hai? Papa called from his room. "Ek minute papa..abhi aati hun! Mr naik has given strict orders to Antara that she should call him papa and not uncle. "Ye lo tumara rumaal..Antara gave the handkerchief to rahil and ran to papa's room. Raghu who was standing on the stairs..was watching her. She was all over the house! And everyone loved her to death. Automatically a smile appeared on his lips for the very first time. Unaware of his presence Antara sat on the stairs. .tired! When she heard footsteps behind her she twitched her head to see. "Tumey bhi kuch chahiye toh boldo. Antara said. She stood up when she saw him smiling for the second time. "He never used to smile before aur abh bina baath ke hasta hai. Antara thought. Daadi naani noticed them. They were once again flying on cloud nine! "Office nai jaana? "Ya fir tumey ghar ki bahu ki tarah ghar sambhalna hai? Raghu asked with his hands in his pocket. Antara raised his eyebrows. The grannies covered their mouth with their hands in bewilderment! "Mayney joh sunna kiya tumney bhi wahi suna? Daadi asked naani. They were startled by little simmi. "Bhaiya I'm ready for school! Simmi said while hugging Raghu. Raghu smiled and ruffled her hair."chal grab your lunch I'll drop you off. Antara was speechless for a moment. Raghu and simmi had a beautiful bonding. Antara admired that a lot. "Miss kaul chaley ya fir khadi khadi sapna dekhna hai din bhar? Raghu asked while snapping his fingers infront of her eyes. Antara composed herself and ran to get her stuffs. Soon they were heading towards simmi's school. Antara watched how Raghu held simmi's tiny hands and took her to her classroom. Simmi gestured to him to lean down. Simmi kissed his cheeks as he leaned down. Smiling raghu kissed her chubby cheeks. Simmi waved to Antara and ran inside her room. Antara just witnessed the other side of raghu. She was stunned. "Shayad Raghu utna bura bhi nai hai jitna may soch rahi hu. Antara thought.

They arrived at the office. "Raghu aaj construction sight pe jaana hai yaad hai na? Machmach said. "Han yaad hai..get the things ready we'll leave in half an hour. Raghu said. "Miss kaul tu taiyaar hai na? Raghu asked. Antara noded. Antara grabbed her important files for the site and headed towards Raghu's cabin. She raised her brows when she saw him fiddling around with his tie. Antara cleared her throat. "May kuch help karu? She asked politely. "Ye tie patah nai kiyu nikal nai raha...Raghu said. "May kardeti hu. Antara said while putting the files on the table. Machmach paged from downstairs. "Bhaai we are waiting. .door jaana hai we'll be late. "Five minutes yaar..we'll be there. Raghu said. Antara tried hard to remove the tie. While she was concentrating on the tie Raghu was concentrating on her face. "Kitni sundar hai ye. Raghu thought. "Ye lo..hogaya! Antara said. "Thanks. Raghu said. Antara noded. "Chaley? Antara asked. Raghu grabbed his important files and then they both came down. Getting in the car they left towards the construction site followed by mm and ruksana.

Precap: Antara is trapped inside the construction building. The building could fall anytime. No one was allowed in the building as it could collaps anytime. Without listening to anyone Raghu enters the building. .risking his life. Stay tuned.
Edited by sanjinimala - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
i was lingering on this thread for god knows how long for the update
finally u updated
m in love with this story 
guess the dinner didnt go too well for raghu
he is falling badly for antu 
arti urghh hate her haadi mei kebab 
lol grannies convo was hilarious 
lol everyone asking antu to become their bhaabi raghu tu bhi man ja 
tie scene was awesome 
loved the whole update
seriously cant live without reading this story everyday and u update so late *sad*
precap yesss u read my mind yaar 
now realization with hit raghus mind 
pls cont asap dying to read more and please give longer update *puppy face* 
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

i was lingering on this thread for god knows how long for the update

finally u updated
m in love with this story
guess the dinner didnt go too well for raghu
he is falling badly for antu
arti urghh hate her haadi mei kebab
lol grannies convo was hilarious
lol everyone asking antu to become their bhaabi raghu tu bhi man ja
tie scene was awesome
loved the whole update
seriously cant live without reading this story everyday and u update so late *sad*
precap yesss u read my mind yaar
now realization with hit raghus mind
pls cont asap dying to read more and please give longer update *puppy face*



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it's vry vry beautiful,lovely,cute updateπŸ‘πŸ‘
naani and dadi both r sooo cuteeπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
so finally raghu liking antaraπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
precap r vry interesting plzzz update asap
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