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Posted: 9 years ago

The story starts 4m Asad leaving for New York leaving Zoya alone even after her request n tears. Dis is my take of d further story. Some call it as dark. I can't believe dat Asad had stopped only cuz of Dilshad. Link to d plot of d story here https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4139112 .


Prologue

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4140158

New Character

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4140158

Part 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/112613290

Part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113239609

New Characters

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113384221

Part 3(A)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113384221

Promo 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113384221

Part 3(B)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114107855

Promo 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4140158?pn=19

Promo 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4140158?pn=19



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Prologue

Dilshad visits Khan Villa as Zoya's phone number always came unavailable. She did not found Zoya in d house. She went inside Zoya's room n found a letter on her table pressed by a paper weight. She held d letter n started reading it.

To Mrs. Dilshad Ahmed Khan,

            I am leaving everyone as I don't tolerate u all anymore. Ur respectable son Asad betrayed me once again. He wanted to go New York. Wen I refused to come wid him teln him dat v sud not leave everyone, he left me alone even after requesting him not to leave me. He never really loved me. He only loved n cared abt himself. He wanted to go 4m everyone to find peace. He did not cared abt me n refused to stop 4m going. Wen I told him dat u went to live wid ur good for nothing jerk n cheater husband Mr. Rashid Ahmed Khan, he again cornered n manhandled me. He is not a gentleman but a jerk like his father who don't respects women n their emotions. By d way, ur husband cheated u even before those 17 years. He had 2 other child wid ur rival dat is Ayaan n Nikhat. Then came Nuzhat after he left u. Now, I have no relation wid all of u who only gave me pain. U only wanted me to get married to ur loser son to win a challenge wid ur rival. U also wanted a wife for ur mannerless son. U played too much drama to make those 2 people marry who were just mismatch. U even went to d extent of pretending to be sick. Ur son only deserve dat bitch Tanveer as his wife not me. I vl never return in all ur lives. I have all my faith in love n relationships. Everything is fake. All people in dis world r selfish. I vl never be d same Zoya again as I have never got anything by being good. I hate u all very much.

                                                             -Zoya

Dilshad is shocked as she reads d whole letter.

"Asad, u hv not done right," said Dilshad in anger.

Dilshad informs everyone in SM dat Zoya left somewhere. All r shocked. Except Gaffur, Razia n Dilshad, everyone searches for Zoya but she is not found. Dilshad informs Anwar n Zeenat dat Zoya has left somewhere. Next day, Anwar n Zeenat arrives in SM. Dilshad tells them everything dat happened 4m d time Zoya left KV after 1st nikaah attempt. Anwar n Zeenat luks angrily at everyone. For them, they r the culprits of their Zoya. Anwar goes to Ayaan n slaps him hard across d face. Ayaan n others r shocked.

"Why did u beat my son?" asked Shirin.

"Wow, after so happened u r shamelessly asking why I beat ur son," replied Anwar.

"Anwar, she herself is shameless who told her son to ask for his brother's would be wife. She even tried to force our Zoya to live wid her shameless son," said Zeenat.

"I am sorry for my mistake," said Ayaan.

"To hell wid ur sorry, Ayaan Ahmed Khan," roared Zeenat n asked, "Wud u traded ur sisters like Zoya?"

Ayaan is speechless.

"Answer me damn it," yelled Zeenat angrily.

"No," said Ayaan in a low scared voice.

"U r such a shameless person who has hurt even his fiancee," said Anwar angrily.

"But d nikaah had happened. It was Zoya's fault too," said Shirin.

"Just shut up," shouted Zeenat, "How come it was Zoya's fault? She unfortunately got stuck. She wanted to save ur step-daughter's life 4m getn ruined but her own life was ruined instead. Have u all enquired whether d nikaah really happened? How come Zoya get married to anyone wen her name was not registered n her guardian was not there? How can someone get married by just saying Haan' dat also wen they r actually talking to their cells and r unaware dat their nikaah is happening. The nikaah has never happened."

All r shocked to hear dis.

"2day, v vl go to d maulvi n clear everything," said Anwar.

"V have not realized dat. Plz, forgive us," said Ayaan.

"Forgive u all? Never. V vl never forgive u all. Pray dat Zoya is fine. If sumthn happens to her then I vl file a police complaint against all of u," threatened Anwar.

"Nothing vl happen to Zoya. Have faith on Allah," said Dilshad.

"Don't give false assurance to us wen ur own son is d biggest culprit behind her leaving everyone," said Zeenat coldly, "He is d most selfish man v have ever seen. U have not even informed us before deciding to get ur worthless son married to our Zoya. U only wanted to win d challenge wid Shirin. Wen Zoya lived here as Ayaan's wife, have u ever fought for her? Have u ever called or talked to her? U r also an equal culprit like others. I wud not have told Zoya to live in ur house in d 1st place. She wud have better lived in some hotel."

Dilshad is shocked n hurt.

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Posted: 9 years ago
New Character:

Haider Sheikh(Mohit Sehgal)
Haider has come to Siddiqui Mansion for business purpose. He is actually came to revenge on Gaffur n Razia who r the reason of his troubled past 17 years ago wen he was 10 years old. Gaffur n Razia has caused his father's factory on fire in which his mausi(maternal aunt) n 8 year old cousin Chutki whose real name was Zoya had died. Due to dat incident, his father died due to tension n his mother committed suicide. Through Anwar n Zeenat, he finds out 4m some photos dat his Chutki is none other than their Zoya. He comes to know abt some other crimes committed by Gaffur n Razia.
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very interesting concept
zoya's emotions were very well written
do continue soonEdited by smj7 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting
Anzee's emotions are very well justified.
Thanks for the pm
Update soon pls
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Interesting concept. Please continue soon
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Wow the prologue so gripping , ohh stupid asad 😑poor zoya😭
The prologue was amazing πŸ‘, really can't wait for ch 1 😳. Do pm me if you can or I will find my way in somehow  hehe.πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ

Edited by Anaya52 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome
thanx for pm
plz pm me for updates
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Really liked dis concept... continue soon..