Hello everyone.. i am glad u all liked my story. it was a big challenge for me to write something from 1970's but ur comments give me encouragement to do it.. thank u once again...
so we are introduced to both the families and the villages. the other characters vl b introduced as the story proceed...
ANANT- chole, puri, kachori, namkeen, mithaiya wow ma...
SUGANDHA- mjhe mat bol apni bhabi ko bol. usne banaya he tere liye.
ANANT- kya bat he bhabi..
RAMA- kya karu devarji bhagwan ne aulad nahi di to apko aur nimisha ko hi apne bache manti hu aur isliye apke liye ye sab kiya
everyone becomes emotional. tears comes from rama's eyes.
ANANT- kya bhabi. aaj me aya hu aur aaj sab ro rahe he.. pehele ma aur ab aap.
he wipes her tears.
ANANT- ab muskura dijiye bhabi and no more emotional scenes..
RAMA- no..kya??
NIMISHA- angrezi he bhabi, aap nahi samjhegi
SUGANDHA- tu bada samajh gayi?
nimmi bites her tongue and mohan stare her in anger..
ANANT- acha ab ye sab chodiye aur ab jaldi se kuch kha lete he.. fir mauj, masti aur hungama...
anant shouted loudly. but om stops him. all looks at om who was standing near stairs.
OM- mauj masti tumhare tak simit rehni chahiye anant, nimisha ki awaz ek kamre se dusre kamre tak b nahi jani chahiye..
nimisha becomes sad and anant notice it.
ANANT- par pitaji aisa q? nimisha apne hi ghar me q chup chap rahe?
OM- ye uska ghar nahi he uska ghar wo hoga jo uska sasural hoga. wo ladki he anant ye sab use shobha nahi deta..
ANANT- par pitaji...
sugandha stops him by holding his hand..
OM- ye hamare niyam he anant. barso se hum iska palan karte aye he. me karta hu, mohan ne kiya he aur tum b karoge...
saying this om left from there..
ANANT- ye kya bat hui ma. meri behen usi k ghar me ek mehman ki tarah reh rahi he.. q?
SUGANDHA- behes mat kar anant. ek bat man le, tere pitaji ki bat kisine nahi tali he aur tu b nahi talega.. agar iss ghar me rehna he to unki bat manni padegi..
ANANT- chahe galat hi q na ho?
SUGANDHA- ha..
sugandha went from there and rama goes to pacify her.
NIMISHA- bhai.. chodiye na.. aap q meri wajah se sabse jhagda kar rahe he.. me jan gayi hu bhai iss ghar me kaisa raha jata he.. mene sikh liya he.. i have learned to live here..
anant becomes shock to hear nimisha speaking english..
MOHAN- aisa kya dkh raha he? pitaji k banaye har ek niyam ka palan thodi hoga? hamari behen padhi likhi hogi ye kya tu nahi chahta?
anant smiled and hugs nimisha...
...
mohan and anant were having a talk in garden..
MOHAN- unis sau sattar (1970) sal chal raha he anant, par saharanpur abhi b aisa hi he jaisa atrah sau sattar (1870) me tha aur aisa hi do hazar sattar (2070) me b rahega...
ANANT- duniya badal rahi he bhai.. hamara gao q nahi?
MOHAN- bht mushkil he anant.. waise badlav ki ek umeed hamare padosi gao se ayi he..
ANANT- ronakpur?? jise hamare sabse bade dushman mane jate he?
MOHAN- ha.. suna he waha k sarpanch ki beti ko unhone padhaya he.. aur pichli sal barvi me uske nabbe ank aye he.
anant was impressed by her and was thinking who must be she..
MOHAN- suna he bht khubsurat he unki beti.. aas pados k har ek gao me aur pados k sehro me bht charcha hoti he uski.. par hamare aise nasseb kaha jo ronakpur k kisi ko dkh paye..
ANANT- hmm
MOHAN- ek lauti padhi likhi ladki he wo...
ANANT- wow bhai impressive..
their conversation stops hearing ranbir's voice.. RANBIR SINGH best friend and childhood friend of anant.
RANBIR- kya mere shehri dost.. aaj subah lauta he aur mjhe bataya tak nahi?
they both hug..
ANANT- maaf karde yar...
MOHAN- tum dono bate karo me chalta hu..
ANANT- aur bata kaisa he
RANBIR- ekdum badhiya.. me to waise ka waisa hu tu sheher ka chora jarur hogaya he..
ANANT- (laughed)
RANBIR- acha bata aaj rat ka kya plan he?
ANANT- kuch nahi q?
RANBIR- to chal me tjhe party me lekar jata hu..
ANANT- party? saharnpur me?
RANBIR- nahi.. gao k kuch dur valentine day k liye program he isliye disco night arrange ki he.. chalega na?
ANANT- neki aur puch puch? ofcourse chalunga...
...
RITIKA- tu pagal hogai he?
RITIKA VERMA best friend of navya. her father is manager of navya's father..
NAVYA- isme pagal hone wali konsi bat hogayi?
RITIKA- navya tu mjhe rat ko tere sath chalne k liye keh rahi he? wo b kisi par...par...
NAVYA- party...
RITIKA- ha wohi.. party me...
NAVYA- dkh kal na valentine day he..
RITIKA- wo kya hota he
NAVYA- valentine day matlab... ye din do pyar karne walo ka hota he..
RITIKA- par kisine dkh liya to? tjhe to sab pehechan jayenge..
NAVYA- koi nahi pehechanega qki party me mask pehenkar jana he..
RITIKA- ab ye ma...mas.. mashk. kis bala ka nam he?
NAVYA- mashk nahi mask.. matlab mukhota.. hamara chehra dhaka rahega to koi nahi pehechanega...
RITIKA- par...
NAVYA- par var kuch nahi.. tu chal rahi he. jab bauji so jayenge tab hum nikal jayenge... thk?
RITIKA- thk...
...
It was night around 11.30...
anant and ranbir were enjoying party whereas navya and ritika were roaming here and there. all were covered with mask.. suddenly someone came and said something to ritika.
RITIKA- navya.. haveli se sandesh aya he navita bhabi ghar bula rahi he..
NAVYA- kya itne jaldi?
RITIKA- ha jaldi chal...
saying this ritika went from there.. navya turned around nd got bump with anant.. anant had removed his mask for sometime but navya was still covered with mask.. she looked at him and thought that he vl recognised her so she covered her face with chunri..
NAVYA- oh god.. andhe ho? dikhayi nahi deta? stupid...
navya went from there while anant was shocked..
ANANT- god? stupid? english? oh yes... ronakpur ladki...
anant runs behind her to stop her..navya was running thinking that he had recognised her...
ANANT- rukiye...plz listen... suniye..
anant was calling her but she dint listened.. suddenly anant called her..
ANANT- are oo jhalli...
navya stopped..
NAVYA- kya kaha apne me jhalli?
navya has removed her mask but she had covered with pallu and hence anant could not see her. he was standing behind her.
ANANT- kabse bula raha hu aapne suna nahi.. jhalli bolte he sun liya?
NAVYA- shut up..
ANANT- acha suniye to... waha se jayegi to ronakpur dur padega.. yaha se jayiye..
NAVYA- tumhe kaise pata me ronakpur se hu? tum kya mera picha karte ho?
ANANT- nahi nahi... darasal bht suna he apke bare me.. apke intelligence k bare me aur apki sundarta k bare me.. kabse apki awaz sun raha hu.. chehra to dikhayiye apka..
NAVYA- hamara chehra itni asani se nahi dikhta kisi ko
ANANT- acha? to hume kya karna padega?
NAVYA- u have to earn it...
ANANT- aur wo kaise?
suddenly navya heard ritika calling her..
NAVYA- fursat me batayenge..
ANANT- suniye.. kal rat jheel k pas apka intezar rahega mjhe... tab batayiyega...
navya smiled and went from there. whereas anant was happy and excited to meet navya tomorrow...
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