SwaRon FF Life Partners *note on pg 78* on 11/4/16* - Page 16

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by piyu_swaron


nice update mansi๐Ÿ˜ƒ
dadi is so sweet I loved her
Taani and dadi's teasing part was amazing 
why swayam's dad behave like that with swayam?
next part exam ke baad update karegi to bhi chalega mansi
thank u so much๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by diyaswaronholic


Waaahh jaan!
Now this is how u roll it!
*standing ovation *

Jaan tune kya likha he yaar
Starting se end tak me couldn't stop reading
Haye, dadis too sweet
the convo! An Mai kya kahu .. they were just perfect
Every place every time there wasn't a thing missing!
Extremely loved it!

Aur kya baat he.
3 chapters mai hi 100 comments!
maine kaha tha na jaan ur Fab writer
ab mujhe zara thode tuition's milenge aapse

Just loved loved loved it
love u more

Ab update kar jaldiii

P.s. ab don't deny ki ur not a better writer than me!
Sab tere writing ke diwaane he
Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š
m glad u like it๐Ÿ˜Š
par u r better writer then me๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by nature2


Great update
Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by rosyrkohli


the update was good 
swayam's mother seems a lil strict i guess 
poor sharon she had a very rough start thr 
thankfully dadi saved her on tat front 
the sweet si teasing in b/w by dadi n tanni was very cute 
n the intro whr sharon meets swayam's dadi was very well penned 
looking forward to the next update ๐Ÿค—
Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š
m glad u like it๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by LaalIshq


Hm Taani n dadi are too naughty...SwaRon fighting...
Amazing update...continue soon...
Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by siri456


nice update

Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by swaronlove001


wow dear aswom update..

loved it...

accha bond ha swaron ka uski dadi ke sath..
nd tanni i love dis girl...

nd swaym apna papa ko hitler bolta ha shyad...

update soon...
Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Vani20


Wow.. nice .. update
Luvd Taani nd dadi part!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by CrazyRedMary


reswa
unres!!
So I just read that intro/prologue. It was really good.๐Ÿ‘ I really like that Taani kept come back again and again. Jeez, girl let them be alone๐Ÿ˜† Can't wait to see how this story unfolds.๐Ÿ˜ƒ Lets continue reading. 
P.S Kind of scared to know what happens next.๐Ÿ˜ณ
oh
m glad u like it
thank u๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by shiningshannu


hello dear๐Ÿค—
i totally liked the update
sharon is orphan๐Ÿ˜ฒ
but i loved the bond between sharon and dadi
dadi is soo sweet i felt
y swayams mom sounds like a angry saasi maa pf tv serial๐Ÿ˜†
and wanna know y swayams dad dont like swayam
soo many mysteries i feel
swayam iz irritated with sharon dat was funny
and the eye lock was too cute
and the way dadi and taani teased swaron was too gud
and how can forget the hug eve though swayam did it cos he thought it was taani but it was tto cute
all in all a nice update
do update soon

p.s. hope the comment is long enough

love
shini
Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š
m glad u liked it shinu๐Ÿ˜Š

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