Kuch kahi Ankahi continous.... (VIRIKA SS) Updt Pg4 - Page 3

Posted: 8 years ago
Tere mere milan ki yeh raina...
naya koi gul khilayegi.. tabhi toh chanchal hai tere naina..
dekho na.. dekho na...


Viren was still in the bed where Jeevika just came out of the bathroom after taking shower. She was busy drying her hair while mumbling one of the songs which was playing somewhere outside.

Ahem ahem.. ek gul toh sambhal ni raha.. aur tum aur khilaane ki baat kar rahi ho... waise mujhe koi aitraaz nahin hai par uske liye aapko thodi si zehmat uthaani padegi Mrs Vadhera.. naya gul khilaane ke liye purane gul ko thodi der ke liye bhool ke apne iss bhanwre ke paas aana padega.."
He passed a comment staring at his wife who was as usual looking very beautiful in orange saree.

She heard him as she came to take something from the side table of their bed,'' Chee Viren ji... Laate kahan se hain aap yeh cheeky dialogues?" She said looking at him in disbelief.

Talent hai yaar.. tumhe dekhte hi apne aap ander se talent phoot'ta hai yeh..'' He said taking her hand in his and got up a little.

Chaliye chaliye jaa ke ready hoyiye.. saade 7 ho gaye hain..." She just blushed at his flirty comment.

Yaar tumne mere romantic mood ki band bajane ki kasam vasam khaayi hui hai kya..?


Aap kabhi iss romantic mood se bahar aate ho kya?


Aur tum kabhi iss mood ko 2 min se zyada rehne ni deti.. Goa mein hi thik thi tum.. Wahin shift ho jana chahiye humein.. "
He said pulling her close by her waist and nuzzled her cheek by his nose.

"Viren ji..chodiye mujhe.. kya kar rahe hain..", She tried hard to escape herself from his grip

Bohat ghisa pitta dialogue ho chuka hai.. kuch aur socho..jab tak main apni morning dose le lun.." He clutched her tightly from her waist and pulled towards him with force.

Her heart beats were increasing with every second, "Please na Viren ji.. Yeh koi time hai yeh sab karne ka.. Mujhe breakfast ready karna hai.. Ani uth chuka hai.. ghumta phirta yahin aa jayega.. aur aapko bhi toh office..."

He cut her in between making her slide under him,''Haan toh yeh sab karne ke time pe toh tumhara ladla sath hota hai humare..''

''Mere bete ko kuch mat kahiye... aur chodiye mujhe...'' She said angerily pausing her hands movements on his shoulders which she was using to get out of his grip.

Naa.. aisa mauka baar baar nahin milta.. '' He said taking hold of her hands nd entangling them with his tightly and then pinned them near her head.

She felt as if her heart was jumping in her body, "Jaane dijiye mujhe" She shivered when he hid himself in her hair and nuzzled her neck.

"Ammmaa" The loud voice of their son made him stop for a moment but there was no chance that he would let her go.

Ani hai bahar.. chodiye na mujhe ab.. " She literally pleaded.

Ek kiss de do.. phir jao jahan jana hai...

Jab itni zabardasti kar sakte hain, toh kiss bhi le lijiye zabardasti.." She said making a face.

Arey yaar.. kyun free mein laal peeli ho rahi ho... maza nahi aayega na zabardasti wali kissy mein.. de do na please..


Aur jo pehle kar rahe the usmein maza aa raha tha?

Toh tum maan bhi toh nahi rahi thi... jab dekho bhaagti rehti ho.. PT Usha..

Meanwhile they heard Vanshika's voice who took away Ani bribing him with his favourite ice cream.

Ab toh le gayi Maa use.. please thoda time aise hi raho na paas mein.. '', He said lovingly caressing her cheeks.

She smiled at his cuteness caressing his hair.

I love you too..''
he kissed her forhead.

Maine toh kuch kaha hi nai..

Kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai Mrs Vadhera.. aapki aankhein bol rahi hain iss waqt..

She chuckeled hugging him back when he started showering kisses on her face. Before claiming her lips, he looked deep into eyes and whispered intro her ears," May I?"

"Pehle mana kar rahi thi toh apni physical power dikha rahe the, aur jab main kuch nai keh rahi toh pooch rahe ho.."

Woh sab excuses tum nervous hoke deti ho, itna toh jaanta hun tumhe.. aur yeh jo tumhari aankhein hai na badi badi, yeh tumse zyada smart hain.. woh tumhari tarah dimag ka sath nahin deti, woh dil ka haal bayaan kar deti hain.. jab tum apni aankhon ka sath nahin de paati na toh pata chal jata hai k tum jo chahti ho, usse ulta bol rahi ho..

"Hey bhagwan, kaise pati diye hain mujhe''
, She said dramatically but she was so awwwed by her husband's words.

"See, this is what i was saying.. tum sochti kuch ho par kehti kuch aur.. and u just meant k thanku bhagwan wow kya pati diya hai mujhe." He laughed as she pouted and hit him lightly on his shoulder.

Aur tumse I love u bulwana aata hai mujhe.. He said claiming her lips. She shivered a bit when felt his hands crawling on her tummy. Unable to do anything, she moaned. Her body started surrendering itself to him, don't know when she too got engrossed in him.

He looked at her in between their kiss, her eyes were closed out of pleasure. He lightly slid down and kissed her collar bones, she shivered badly out of glitters and her hands itself moved on his back and started caressing his back. As he bent little more down nuzzling her passionately, she hugged him tightly out of pleasure, and deeply mumbled "I love you". He smiled hearing that.

 Soon the barrier of clothes got vanished from between and their bodies got merge into each other completely, their bodies were like crushing each other and finally they let their souls to unite once again.

They reached the ultimate everest of pleasure.

He was still laying on her with his face hid her hair and her hand's ruffling his hair. He kissed liightly on her neck when he heard her whispering,''Aapko court nai jaana tha?"

Getting no reply from him, she tapped lightly his back,''Viren ji"

''Sone do yaar Jeevika"
, He said shifting his head to her another side hiding in her shoulder.

"Mujhe toh uthne dijiye na phir, aap so jaiye aapko sona hai toh" She said trying to move a bit but she was totally locked under him. She kept on caressing his head till she felt he was lightly snoring.
She slightly pushed him, and managed to shift him on bed. She sighed heavily looking at his calm face. Though she also wanted to go back into his arms for a nap but thinking about her other responsibilites, she got up with  a heavy heart.

After getting an another quick shower, Jeevika stepped out of her room only to find Manvi and Vanshika in the hall. Manvi was sipping her morning tea and Vanshika was sitting  with Ani in her lap who was asleep in her arms. It took Vanshika whole 20 mins to make him drink milk and put him to sleep as he was getting cranky not getting her mother around?

"Maa!! Vanshika looked up when she heard a whisper.. ''So gaya ?" Jeevika asked bending towards them.

Haan abhi abhi soya.. badi mushkil se doodh piya isne. Tere bina toh na ise sambhalna bohat mushkil hai bhai hum logon ka."

"I am so sorry maa.. " She apologised

"Its Ok beta.. koi baat nai"

It is not Ok haan maa.. Main der se uthun toh Di mujhe daant-ti hai ki main jaldi kyun nai uthti.. aur khud dekho mere se bhi baad mein uthi.. Maine toh ready ho ke nashta bhi kar liya Di.. " Manvi said pouting cutely.

Vanshika smiled on Manvi's words and Jeevika just gave her the look and took Ani from Vanshika. She made her way towards her bedroom to put Ani sleep on bed comfortably and then came back to the hall to find it empty. Then she walked towards kitchen knowing that Vanshika wud be there only at this time.

As she entered, she heard Manvi' voice who was sitting on the counter and cutting some veggies, ''Lo aa gayi di.. Waise itni der kaise ho gayi aaj aapko Di? Jiju bhi nai gaye kaam pe... Raat ko soye nai kya?

Listening to her, Jeevika felt her cheeks heat a little changing its color.. and moved towards Vanshika,''I am so sorry Maa.. aage se der nahi hogi.. Bohat pareshan kiya na Ani ne aapko"

Vanshika turned and put her palm on her cheek lovingly,''Beta maine kuch kaha kya tumse? aur woh mera pota hai.. daadiyan kabhi apne poton se pareshan ni hoti..samjhi?"

"Phir bhi Maa..."

"Bas Jeevika.. aise behave mat karo ki tumne koi crime kar diya hai.. Its ok beta.. Ab raat bhar toh Ani tum logon ke paas sota hai.. tum logon ko bhi kahan time mil pata hai ek dusre ke liye.. toh its good na ki tumne thoda time sath bita liya..'' Vanshika said the fact.

"Ohh to di aap jiju ke sath quality time spend kar ri thi.. mujhe laga bas SO RAHi Thi..'' Manvi giggled.

Jeevika slapped her on her head and whispered,''Chup kar.. Maar khayegi werna".

Manvi gave her "MAine kya kiya'' look and then laughed out.

"Waise Viren utha ya nai? Nashta ready kar dun uska?'', Vanshika asked changing the topic.

"Nai Maa.. woh so rahe hain.. aur aap jaa ke rest kariye.. main dekh lungi kitchen ka.. sabne kar liya nashta?''

Haan beta..Maine aur Manvi ne abhi abhi kiya.. Bauji aur Swamini didi toh subah subah mandir chale gaye, shaam ko hi ayenge satsang ke baad.. Virat ki bhi early meeting thi toh woh Inder ke sath hi nikal gaya tha.. Kadambri shalok ko school chod ke apni friend ke yahan jaane wali hai.. toh lunch ke liye hum 5 jan hi hain.. tum nashta kar lo.. tab tak main lunch ka dekhti hun.."

Main dekh lungi Maa.. aap chaliye... Abhi ani so raha hai.. toh araam se lunch ready kar lungi main.. woh uth gaya toh kuch karne ni dega..." She said  pushing Vanshika out of the kitchen..

Aur agar Ani ke papa uth gaye toh?" Manvi chuckled.

Jeevika came to her and twisted her ear," Tujhe badi masti soojh rahi hai.. nautanki''

"Haaye iss gusse ke peeche chupi hui sharam aur sharam se tamatar huye yeh laal laal gaaal"
Mannu said dramatically puuting her arms around Jeevika's neck.

"Bhagwan kya karun main iss ladki ka" Jeevika sighed laughing a bit looking at her drama.., "Chal chod ab mujhe.. aur help kar meri lunch banane mein."

It was almost 12'o clock, Viren felt somthing on him. It wasnt Jeevika's arm, its not that he thought. Ignoring it he again went to sleep. But again feeling some movements, he woke up and saw Ani sitting on his tummy with his legs on his either sides. His tiny hands were on Viren's cheeks and he was trying to wake his father up.

Viren felt a kind of bliss at his touch. Till now he just noticed Ani doing these lil  things with Jeevika. He always found it cute and always wanted his son to do this to him also but he was never such close to him, though both Viren and Jeevika always tried to make Ani confortable with Viren. And today was the moment.. He gently held his tiny palms in his hands and the pulled him closed giving him a warm hug.

He patted his back with love and then found him asleep in the very next moment.

On other side, Jeevika almost finished her work and thought to check upon Viren if he has gotten up or not. As soon as she entered their room, she saw the most beautiful sight in front of her eyes. She made her way towards them with her eyes shining with happy tears. First she took a picture of them with her mobile and then kissed their temples.

"Jalan ho rahi hai Mrs Vadhera, apne bete ko mere paas dekh ke'' Viren whispered with his eyes closed.

Jeevika smiled and settled herself on the bed. Lying down beside them and taking them in a hug,'' Agar ise jalan kehte hain toh main zindagi bhar aise jalne ke liye ready hoon"

Kaha tha na aap time denge toh woh khud aapke sath comfortable ho jayega. Pehle hamesha use bechaini hoti thi mujhe paas na dekh ke.. neend se uth ke pehle mujhe dhundta tha.. ab bhi aise hi karta hai par ab uske paas options hain.. mumma nahi toh papa toh hain.. aur aapko nai pata viren ji ki ek maa ko kitni khushi hoti hai yeh dekh ke ki uska bacha apne papa se bhi utna hi pyar karta hai jitna apni maa se. Ek tarah ki surity ho jati hai ki meri absence mein bhi iska utna hi khyal aur use utnaa hi pyar dene wala koi hai.. " She said with teary eyes making her grip more tight on them.

"What absence, tum yeh ut patang baatein mat shuru kar diya karo.. khushi hui hai toh sirf khush nahi ho sakti? FM meter on karna zaroori hota hai?" Viren said jerking her hand and looked at her with anger.

"Main bas bata rahi thi jo feel kiya.. aap toh bina baat ke daant dete ho mujhe'' She said dramatically making him melt and put her arm back around him.

He shook his head and put his one arm under her head taking her into a side hug, "Pehle mujhe shak tha ab to pakka yakeen ho gaya ki Manvi ne nautanki karna tumse hi seekha hai" he mocked at her playfully.

"Woh toh hai" She chuckled looking at him and then hugged him and Ani who was sleeping peacefully on his Papa's tummy with her Mummy on his side, "I Love you both"

"We know that'' He smiled closing his eyes again feeling peaceful and satisfied in his own lil world.


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Posted: 8 years ago
That was such a beautiful update !
Thank god u updated ... I was waiting for this update since so long and finally u gave it today ! Thank u so much :)
It was Phenominal
Loved the romantic and cheesy viren and the last part was just aww !
Father son bond !!! It was so perfect
Loved it
Cont soon and dont take this long time to update the next part ;)
Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update.. love virika's early morning romance... it was hilarious when manvi make fun of jeevs... the best part of this update was ani and viren scene... u write it sooo fabulously.. that part was sooo sweet, cute... update soon.. its a request plz plz write more ani-viren scene...
Posted: 8 years ago
Neha thank u for updating this.. N thanks for a long update.. Love the sweet little talks btw Virika.. How sweetly viren teases jeevika n the way he craves to hv sometime alone with his love.. So adorable.. Manvi teasing jeevika.. Sweet bond btw the sisters.. N the cutest part being ani sitting on his dad's stomach n trying to wake him up.. Just made me go awww.. Can he get anymore adorable.. Love the moment btw the father n son n can just imagine how happy jeevika wld be to see them like tat.. Thanks for a lovely update.. Hope we get the next one soon.. Keep writing n updating.. :))
Posted: 8 years ago
Eeeps! story updated!!!
Ur pm made me realise that I had not commented on the previous part till now.. sorry bout that dw...
But seriously reading your story is pure bliss! i was awing throughout while reading both the parts... they are so cute and romantic parts and yes soo unique way of celebrating Virika's anniversary!!!❤️  How nicely you describe every bond in your stories ... be it the JV romantic moments or JM mast banter or be the JM and Vanshika's bonding without missing the cute little funny moments in every conversation (PT Usha 🤣)...I just luuv it and not to forget Ani!!! ❤️⭐️ U have described his bonding with everybody so perfectly!!! You describe every feeling so flawlessly and i luuv the song selection and dialogues!!! <3

Thank u for the pm and the update!!! :)) 

Posted: 8 years ago
OMG kuch kahi unkahi is back.
Thanks a ton Neha for continuing it.
I am so glad Viren and Jeevika are back in their charm, in each other's arms. All issues sorted!
Loved the way Viren teased and romanced her.
And Amma ka puttar is getting close to Daddy.
That last family hug was adorable!
Now please continue soon!
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you !!!
Posted: 8 years ago
Finally!  You updated! 
You know ur pm just brought a huge smile on my face! 
Too happy that you continued it!
The update was perfect! 
Viren teasing and flirting with her! 
Amazing!
Their make out in the morning! 😳
Happy that ani is coming close to his father 
The family moments at last were out of the world 
Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update 
loved it 
loved the whole update 
loved virika conversation  and their romance also 
and loved viren and ani how viren felt so happy seeing his son closing with him 
and jeevika happy with that scene 
and manvi is pulling jeevika leg it was nice
totally
amazing
superb
fantastic
mind blowing
splendid
continue soon 
thanks for the pm 
Posted: 8 years ago
Wow
Neha di!!!!!
What an
Mind blowing
Sweet
Wonderful
Fabulous
Superb
Cute
Romantic
Lovely
Awesome
Phenomenal
Splendid
Update!!!
Hayee was waiting for it so much! Thank u for writing such a wonderful update!!! Love the sweet conversation of virika and then the romance ! Hayeee tooo goood and the lovely talks of manvi and vanishika aunty! So cute! Love the way Ani is getting closer to viren! Hayee could not wait anymore to read moreee please update soonish di!!!
Eagerly waiting
Thnk for the pm and update!
Sorry for commenting so lateee

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