~The Power Of Ink!~CID Forum Poetry Contest '14- RESULTS POSTED!

Posted: 9 years ago
                    

 
                        


  • CID-The Classic
  • The Friendship Bond (you may write about other cops too apart from duo)
                   

  • There is no limit to the number of lines but minimum 16 lines is a must
  • Make sure you are not writing anything in a way which might hurt others
  • All the poetry should be confined to the themes mentioned
  • Send in your poetry with an appropriate title. The theme name is also accepted.
  • A participant can send a maximum of 2 entries
  • Last date of submission of entries is August 28th 2014, 07PM IST.
  • Deadline will not be extended at any cost..
  • Send in your entries to me (Reshma.) by the deadline
                                    

See next post for the entries...

Edited by Reshma. - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
                                
  • This is a marking system where you will rate the poems out of 10
  • Detailed review of poetry shall be preferred and likes and dislikes are most welcome.
  • Last date for reviewing it September 10

The entries are

Entry 1:

The friendship bond

Sitting on the shore or
Lost somewhere on the road
When my thought travel ways
Most I see is you my friend

bonding all the time
Through thicks and thins
Through life and death
Or somewhere in between

Here you are right by my side
Every time I wished u be
Also when I never wanted to see
Holding me tight, a promise not to leave

I hear you in my laughs
I see you pulling my leg
I feel you taking my pains 
And I wonder if I am in my dreams

It's not a dream but real
Though I wonder if I deserve
What else should I be calling this?
A real friendship bond


Entry 2:

CID HIGHWAY

 

The Mourn Atmosphere of FORENSIC LAB turned to a Noisy Mall

When Two HODS entered and started discussing about the Call;

 

The Alteration of Clues, Evidence with Backgrounds of Reports

Shifts the Case Direction from Victim towards the Culprit Courts;

 

Confirmations and Verifications going on till the Final Bell was not Bang

Both Heads feeling Happy after Updating their Archive by catching another Gang;

 

They look at each one eyes with Victorious Smiles and Leaving the Lab in Rush

where One offering Bhindi without Oil while Other teasing reference of His Secret Crush;


The Two Sir's vanished Swiftly and Friend's popping out from that Serious Cocoons

The Long COMPANIANSHIP of PRADYUMAN and SALUNKHY forwarding along so soon.!

 



The SPOT looking Haphazard when Both are reaching inside the Base

Searching the Place and things Every Aspect with reference of the Current Case;

 

The Running, Rushing, Chasing, Catching and Hand Cuffing

The Praise and Punishment are the parts of their Recruiting;

 

The Injury of Acidic Rain gives ABHIJEET a Pure Smiley Joy

when ACP word Echoed around Him with Proud "I m Proud of U My Boy";

 

The Memorable moments of First Suspension always Hurts Him in refer

A Soothing tone brings sudden changes as "DAYA U are One of My Best Officer";

 

The Spot changes Smoothly to Home for ABHIJEET and DAYA for Sure

when Both feel a FATHER-SON's Relations growing within their Hearts Core.!

 



The Smoothly Ride chilled with Magical Humming fills

when Two Pals enjoying Journey in their Dearly QUILLAS;

 

The Joyous Momentum broke with Jerk and Both turned to Smart Cops

The Investigation and Interrogation started, collided with Heaps of Incidentally Caught;

 

They involved with everything, take any Way out to Cuffed the Actual Evil

They again get back to Life where Fights and Fun going on to Peak Level; 

 

When Chest Played as Protective Wall while Grip and Laps for Supportive Pool

when Transfer, Suspension and Quitting using only as a Threatening Tool;

 

When Both covering Stages from DOST to BHAI and Callout as BOSS or AIN

After JAI-VEERU of Big Screen, ABHI-DAYA is DUO of Small Screen without Two Options anyway.!

 

 


The Flower Bunch coming inside the BUREAU Spraying Black Powder

Roaring of a Senior brings Naughty Smile over Lips of a Junior;

 

Outside the Building, Sincerity and Obedience coming in their way

The Order must be taken as a Trust either coming Danger or Joy;

 

The Respect cum Friendship growing Slowly in this Bond

When FREDDIE puts Gun over VIVEK while He Hugged Him inside arms around;

 

They turned to BUDDIES How and When, simply Unknown

They Quietly Tightened that either living Land or Moon.!



 

Support and Trust of a Senior gives Courage to the Junior

Sr. Inspector VIREN is the Name coming in the Road as SAVIOR.

 

Same Designation and Work Closed them side by side

When SUDHAKER and FREDRIC turned COMPANION in that Ride.

 

when Junior suggesting something gives Senior a Refreshing Smile Shower   

Inspector ASHA convincing ABHIJEET for Marriage while DAYA referred Her as YAAR.




When a Parade moving on Saddened every Officer on Martyr of ADITI

Replication of Hurting emotions when TASHA killed Brutally and Unfairly.

 

When Rivals comes in Departments but Not Cheated with their Dedication

Dr. ANJALIKA Determination is the Best Example of that Contradiction.

 

The Scare less Smirks Glowed the Environment after Her Arrival

Dr. NIYYATI Capable Targeting from ACP to any Junior with Sweetly Jovial.

 

 


The Third Senior Coming with Uncomfirtability, Soothing and Softness

Sr. Inspector RAJAT gives Lesson How to give Respect with Sobriety to Others.

 

This 17 Years Difficult Routes gives so many Stacks of Learning's

The Officers Understandings and Abilities make Easier Lectures.  

 

The Journey of PROFESSIONALS to PERSONALS having Leaps and Bounds

Now gives Sooth of RELATIONSHIPS to Viewers of Hundreds and Thousands rounds.!

   


Entry 3:


CID ki Kahani

CIDien ki Zabani

 

gaye dino ka zikr hay

ek CIDien mila mujhy

tha rang buht samety wo

muhabbatun ki dhun liye;

 


poocha jo pass ja kay ye

sitaray kesy aa gaye

kaha CID ki ganth say

mujhy ye Chand bana gaye;


 

jo Safr ko Us ny shroo kiya

aankhun mein manzar jum gaya

lehjay ki khanak nay baandh liya

Atthanway (98) say jub ye Baab (chapter) khula;


 

Milwaye ACP Sir say wo

Doshi ko pakrein Kas kay wo

Gyan dilaye Salunkhy Sir say jo

banaye Hum ko Sarthak sa wo;


 

Abhi kay jesy mazboot hun

Daya jesi naramdili mily

Freddie kay jesy sath bhi ho

banayein aisa Sucheil wo;


 

Naye Purany Log aayein jo

Dhairun Pyar lay kay jayein wo

Singh Sir nay aisay Khawab dekhyein jo

17 saal say Tabeer paayein wo;

 


Dilun mein aisa bus gaya hy wo

Dewaana Hum ko kr gaya hy jo

Wishwas aisa bhar gaya hy wo

Dekhy bina din na guzry ab tou;

 


aawaz thami jo Us ki tou

laga neend say jaagy hun hum tou

jub aainy mein nazar pari

mil gaya hum ko CIDien wo.


Entry 4:


Friendship;Abhi-Daya


It sermon the daily life,
Bring in to the favour of bright,
Scaffold bestowed for serence heart,
Evoke profance and elegant the severe heart !
It always exemplify the sense,
Sense of friendship, voluptuous by it,
But spurn to it's hypothesis now,
The way it's going in the sense now,
It's pouring the imprecise nuances now!!
Our want is the golden moment,
Your need is always gratification,
Smile in your face and cope with the heart
Never making us hallucinating that it doesn't exis,
To blow and do content our heart as it inspires us !!!
Lamentation due to present matter,
Please don't make us along and riddle 
Relation must come up again,
And it makes us feel content again and again !!!!


Entry 5:


Pioneering bromance! 

One of history's greatest bromances!

Together in each phase, No differences

A Punch up dispatched criminals to ambulances

At end both get mitts on relaxed ambiences

 

I can't lose sight of a cheek by jowl chemistry

One's kick off following other's innate artistry

How ideally they pulled off action, without retry

Its ineffable, can't paint the bond in words of poetry  

 

Friends of note, Worthy of revote

Fulgurates like an epidote

Holds same intensity. Isophote!

Pirating our hearts on same boat

 

Bit by bit, it turned out to be clear as transpicuous

Both pinning faith in each other. Its quite unambiguous

One in hellish agony, other becomes unco anxious

Gobs of episodes describe Why the bond is precious!

 

Take your stroll down memory lane

Hark back to Behrupia! Daft's Crackbrain 

They couldn't prevail over duo in their domain

Writing off the pain, towards victory once again


Both are crumb of donuts, both pieces of cake

No boosting! They are steadfast for friendship sake

Pioneer bromance that was born once. No remake

Started from stream towards massive flood in lake


ENTRY 6:


That divine thread!


Friendship comes, friendship goes,

But some are just meant to stay as friends,

Loving, caring and laughing together,

Like their relation knows no ends.


Such is meant for the two souls that live,

To awaken our spirits when we feel dead

To make us cry with joyous tears, and

Make all our agony to shed.


Understanding is what that it is built of,

Through 17 golden years of  their golden journey

Needless to say who they are,

For their relationship is just meant to be.


Started with "aap", then "tum" and now "tu"

This is the journey that the ship has sailed.

Fighting all odds that lay a hurdle

It was always the difficulties, that failed.


Abhijeet-Daya, the two pillars of everlasting friendship,

One look into each others eyes just, for friends, so fair. 

Always a silent and hopeful look, that revives,

One's look that promises the other saying "I'm always there"



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I expected a few  more entries, but unfortunately they turned out so busy.. Khair, I do expect all of you to review all these poems sincerely and laud the efforts of the writers who took pain in writing these..


Thanks,

Reshma 

Posted: 9 years ago
6 entries..goodπŸ‘!
All the entries are looking classy..
I'll read & review soon😊.
Posted: 9 years ago
Entry 1:
 
This poem is about a general friendship bond. It doesn't really indicate duo or any other cops in the team. Since the rules say " (you may write about other cops too apart from duo)", I am assuming that it has to mention some cops in the team.
 
Otherwise as a general standalone poem it is good.
 
6/10.
 
 
Entry 2:
 
Such a long poem! It is very nice...πŸ˜ƒ Loved this line.
 

When Chest Played as Protective Wall while Grip and Laps for Supportive Pool

when Transfer, Suspension and Quitting using only as a Threatening Tool; 🀣

 
But which theme does it fit into? I am assuming it is CID-Classic. πŸ˜†
 
8/10
 
 
 
 
 
Entry 3:
 
Now which theme does this fit into? πŸ˜• Is it CID classic? πŸ€” The poem is good but somehow doesn't really match the theme...it's about a CIDian's view.
 
 
6/10
 
 
 
Entry 4:
 
I presume this is about friendship bond. Would have loved it if it were expressing more about the friendship and not complaining about FW and Sony have ruined it. I understand the writer is as frustrated as we all are...πŸ˜†
 
 
7/10
 
 
Entry 5:
 
 
Hmmm...it's nice but some parts were tough to understand...like

'Both are crumb of donuts, both pieces of cake

No boosting.

πŸ˜•
I am not someone who can get the deep inner meanings out of these sentences. 😳 Sorry.
 
 
Anyway... 6/10
 
 
Entry 6:
 
Nice one...enjoyed it. 😊
 
 
8.5/10
 
 
 
Edited by visrom - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Poem 1 : Short but nice poem on general friendship.. I like the simplicity but the length is a negative factor..
Marks : 6.5/10

Poem 2 : Classy..I loved it a lot..lengthy but worth cherishing throughout.. Writer could have included a few more characters and special incidents when the theme is CID classic.
Marks : 8/10
Poem 3 : The poem ir lovely but it deviates from the given plot..It would be great if it was longer.
Marks : 7.5/10
Poem 4 : Starting lines are fantastic but the rest part are based on the ruinning of the friendship..that's a negative point.
Marks : 7/10
Poem 5 : This is even more generalised.. I would like to see mention of other special incidents apart form Beherupiya..Sorry to say but some parts were too difficult to understand.
Marks : 7/10
Poem 6 : Lovely poem on journey of duo friendship.. Sweet and amazing.
Marks : 8.5/10Edited by ANGELICEYES - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
First of all hat's off to all the writers... πŸ‘ you are amazing guyz...i loved all the poems... πŸ˜›
My votes

Entry 1

A lovely poem on friendship...loved it... 😊 πŸ‘

7/10


Entry 2

Wow...very nice poem..you represented the current scenario of cid...loved how u mentioned all the cops...enjoyed it a lot... πŸ‘ πŸ˜›
9/10


Entry 3

Nice one.what i feel is somewhere it does'nt fit into both of the themes...otherwise a very good poem...
7/10

Entry 4

Nice poem and it simply expressur feelings towards the current situation in Cid
πŸ˜†
Wish it to be more focussed on friendship bond... 😊
6/10


Entry 5

Nice one,i think ur poem consists of deep meaning of words...i could'nt undetstand some words...but superb poem...
πŸ‘ ⭐️

8/10


Entry 6
Very nice...loved it... πŸ˜›
πŸ‘ πŸ‘

8.5/10
Posted: 9 years ago
so sorry Reshu 4 not participating this time😳actually last month was v hectic 4 me
all d entries r really niceπŸ‘but should have b divided according to d themeπŸ˜›
anyways here's my ratings & reviews...
 
Entry-1
v nice poem on  friendship but it's 4 general not particularly on CID😊.poet cud add some more lines to it.
7/10
 
Entry-2
wonderful poem on d characters of CIDπŸ‘i guess it belongs to theme 1.
it's too long but loved it😊
9/10
 
Entry-3
lovely poem in hindiπŸ˜ƒbut it doesn't suit to any theme of d contestπŸ˜•
7/10
 
Entry-4
gud oneπŸ‘d poem shows how frustrated d poet is with d current situation in CIDπŸ˜›
7.5/10
 
Entry-5
very nice poemπŸ‘some lines r tough to understand but I liked d other partsπŸ˜ƒ
8/10
 
Entry-6
it's fabulousπŸ‘v well written .
8.5/10
 
Posted: 9 years ago

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Edited by buublly - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Poem 1: its a general one but simple and really nice πŸ‘
7/10

Poem 2: hey I really like it, lengthy but really enjoyableπŸ‘πŸΌ the way poet describe different realtions one by one is really good πŸ‘
9/10

Poem 3: its more about cidian but a really good effort πŸ‘
6.5/10

Poem 4: good one, nice attempt πŸ‘
7.5/10

Poem 5: yr its nice but a difficult oneπŸ˜›
7/10

Poem 6: sweet and really very nice poem on duo friendship, enjoyed it πŸ‘πŸ‘
8.5/10
Posted: 9 years ago

@RESHMA... Baccha, U did not Categorize the Poems after asking to Poets that for which Theme they wrote their Poems...😊
Tell Me as the Result of Both Theme U will announced Separately...πŸ˜•
U did not tell that the RATINGS of Poet for His/Her Poem would Be Added or Subtracted...πŸ˜‰


POEM ONE: In General way, Its really a Very Simple, Nice and Soothing Poem...😳
I knew its Not belonged to CID but Poet really gives a Good Shot...πŸ‘πŸΌ
Second and Third Stanza are so Lovely...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
Excellent Attempt...β­οΈπŸ‘
Thank You so much...😳😳

Rate: 7/10



POEM TWO: its No Doubt really an Awesome Attempt in All Six Poems...⭐️⭐️
Lovely Transition of Profession to Personal ways although its too much Lengthy...πŸ˜‰
I really Enjoyed Oldie DUO, DUO and mostly FREDDIE Sir and VIVEK Part...πŸ˜³πŸ‘
the Flicks of VIREN Sir, ASHA, ANAJALIKA, NIYYATI. TASHA, ADITI and RAJAT Sir is added Nicely...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
Somehow did not Understand that why Poet covered all Cops rather mentioning some of them...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
But its really a Outstanding Effort...⭐️⭐️
Thank You so much...😳😳

Rate: 9/10 



POEM THREE: I really enjoyed that Poem...😳😳
I Some Stanza's are Marvelous...β­οΈπŸ‘
Lovely way of Telling the Likes/Dislikes in form of Story and by seeing the Reflection...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
Good Attempt...πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸΌ
Thank you so much...😳😳


Rate: 7/10



POEM FOUR: Very Casual and Usual kinda Poem...😳
Gives Pleasure of Knot of a Relation in Daily Life...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
Lovely Effort by Poet...β­οΈπŸ‘
Thank you so much...😳😳

Rate: 7/10



POEM FIVE: its a Cute and Sweet Blending of Both Themes of this Contest...😳😳
The DUO Friendship was Really panned down with Classy Applaudable Terms...⭐️⭐️
Really Touchy and Fine kinda Stuff here...😳😳
I like if U added More of Centric Epis on DUO with BEHROPIYA...πŸ‘πŸΌ
An Awesome Attempt...β­οΈπŸ‘
Thank You so much...😳


Rate: 8/10




POEM SIX: Honestly the Simplicity is the Soul of this Poem...😳⭐️
Absolute Classy way of givinf those Precious Years of this Lovely Friendship...😳⭐️
The whole 5 Stanza's are Stunning and Enjoyable...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
Another Awesome Effort...⭐️⭐️
Thank you so much...😳😳


Rate: 9/10


Edited by gadhadada - 9 years ago

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