MG ff Mere papa ki dulhan part 18 on 92 - Page 6

Posted: 9 years ago
pm karna hai kya...?????

and isko nem do..

MERE FATHER KI DULHANN πŸ˜†

will think of more πŸ˜‰
Posted: 9 years ago
hai dena hai dada ki dulhan what say
Posted: 9 years ago
congrats dear...

prologue
interesting...
Posted: 9 years ago
CS
excellent...
liked the way its said...
cont soon dear...
Posted: 9 years ago
congrats on ur first FF! Lovely cs! fab prologue! superb start! update soon! Well written
Posted: 9 years ago
congrates fariya for ur writing...
nice start...
Posted: 9 years ago
πŸ˜†Lovely update
maan Mai kitna attitude hai yaar.πŸ˜‰
prerna is sweet bt naughty.
wo hungama karne wali ladki jarur hi hamari geet hai.
Posted: 9 years ago
 dear!!!!!!!!!!!!! 



Wonderful start dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! πŸ‘


 updates !!!!!!!!!!!!



part 1 was hilarous prerna and dadi scene πŸ˜†πŸ˜†



mujhe bhi aisi maan hi pasand hai(international wala πŸ˜‰ πŸ€£)



maan love prerna alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




but maan keep space for geet also ...she will be coming πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†



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Part 2

it was funny too!!!!!!!!!!!! πŸ˜†


enjoyed reading it dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! β­οΈ 



Oye ye line kya tha????????????  ki ladkiya khud mauka deti hai chedne ka!!!!!!!! πŸ˜² πŸ˜‘



tum nai piti tho i will beat maan  !!!!!!!!!! 😑 πŸ˜†  how could he say when his own daughter is there πŸ˜‘



Eagerly waiting for next dear!!!!!!!!!!!





Do cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!










Uma...




P.S- I know u r feeling nervous dear...i can feel ur tention in writing but to tell u truth u r writing very nice...there is no need to feel nervous or bad k...ur r giving us someting a story ...then y the heck u should feel nervous re...goli maar usko aur bindass   hoke likho k...πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
Edited by umamaaneet - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
nice part daai nd pari r big devils
maan ki meetng re schedule im sure dat chudel sasha hv did it nd poor assisstant of maan got fird
koi nahi abhi geet aayegi aur sabka band baajegi waitng 4 d nxt partπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 9 years ago
  

 For this first and new FF
 Lovely start
 Prerna is so cute
 Loved prerna-dadi-nakul part so much
 Maan is full of anger and attitude
 Loved geet,s entry
                


Loving ur first attempt,atleast u r trying 'Mujhe tu ye bhi nahi aata"

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