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Posted: 9 years ago
part 7

Scene starts with Ishita and Subbu .Ishita was confused whether Subbu came to know about Raman being Amar.

Ishita "Kyaa baath karnee hain?"

Subbu "Ishita main tumhey itney din sey observe kar rahan hun .Tum Amar sey chupey chupey mil rahen hon."

Ishita "Mujhey kissey sey chupkey milney kee jaroori nahen hain."

Subbu "Ishita tum jhoot bol rahen hon .Mainey apney aakhon sey dekha tumhey ussey  "

Ishita was annoyed as some one questioning about her meeting with Raman.

Ishita "Mujhey tumhey jawaab deney kee jaroori nahen hain."

Subbu "It is not over tumm itna kaisey gir sakthee hon koi mard key saath .I am ashamed to say it too."

Ishita "Kyaa karogey tum Raman ko bathaogey .Tumhey kyaa lagatha hain Raman tumhaara baath par vishwaas karega."

Ishita "Theek hain Raman sey baath karo " taking her mobile and calling Raman's original number.

Raman was puzzled to see Ishita calling him on original number and peeps out and see Ishita standing with Subbu angry and understood the matter.

Ishita "Raman Subbu tumsey kuch kehnaa chahtha hain?" keeping her phone in speaker

Raman "Kyaa kehna hain ussey?"

Ishita "Ussko lagatha hain kee main kissey aadmee sey mil rahen hun.Tumhey yahen bathaana chaahtha hain."

Raman "Bakwaas.Mujhey aisey kahaani pey koi interest nahen hain.Tumney mujhey isskey liyen phone kiyya.Mujhey laga mujhey miss kar rahen hon.Theek hain baath mey phone karnaa.Abh good night." And cuts the call.

Subbu was shocked listening this .Raman was seeing this from his window.

Ishita "Tumhey kissey aur sey baath karnaa hain?"

Ishita "Theek hain peria appa sey baath karloo." Calling him .Then same thing repeats he cuts off the talk as he knew the truth before.

Subbu was shocked and then in same time Raman has called Mihika to handover the situation.

Mihika comes there.

Mihika "Akka koi problem hain aap yahan kyaa kar rahen hain .Subbu key saath."

Ishita "Mihu Subbu ko lag rahan hain kee main Amar key saath milkar kuch kar rahen hun.Jho issko bolney mey bhee sharam aarahen hain."

Mihika slaps him on face.

Mihika "Tumhaarey himmath kaisey huen.Akka key baarey mey aisey bolney kee."

Mihika "Koi aadmee itnaa kaisey gir saktha hain.Pehley tumney akka sey shaadi rokhlee .Fir jab akka kush hain apnee shaadi mey tho uss shaadi ko thodney kee koshish kar rahen hon.Tumhey chain nahen mil rahen hain naa kee akka tusey acchey ladkey sey shaadi huin hain."

Mihika "I am  never wrong  and I was right to hate you and you deserve it."

Mihika "Tum kehthey they kee tum akka sey pyaar kartehy they naa.Tum fir akka key uupar aisey ilzaam."

Ishita "Mihika choddo .Humey issey jawaab deney kee jaroori nahen hain.Lets go.I want Raman's trust and I have it I don't want any thing else."

Subbu "Ishita abh tum bach sakthey bhon lekin sach kabhee chuptha nahen hain.Ek din sach sabkey saamney aajayegi uss din tum kissey sey bheee kuch bol nahen apogee.Ishita chod do yeh sabh."

Ishita "Main bhee yahen bol rahen hun.Tum sach ko nahen jaanthey hon.Jiss din sach saamney aayega tum kuch boolney laayak nahen rahogey."

Ishita and Mihika leave and Subbu was shocked .

Ishita prays to god for close escape and he calls Raman and speaks to him on same  matter and decides to recduce their meetings in night.

Out side Subbu is hell bent to prove his imaginary point .

Then next morning .After break fast .

Mihika "Akka aap ready hojayiyen humey Megha ko pickup karney jaana hain."

Ruhi "Hercy bhee aa rahan hain."

Ishita  "Hercules bhee.Tumney Miss M ko bola kyaa Hercules ko laaney key liyen."

Ruhi "Nahen  papa ney bola kee Hercules bhee aa rahan hain."

Ishita "Raman bula rahan hain."

Mrs Iyer standing there was shocked "Raman bula rahan hain.Raman tho Delhi mey hain naa?"

Ishita "Nahen actually tongue slip ho gayen."

Mrs iyer "Hercules kaun hain "

Ruhi "Hercy hummara pet dog hain.Papa ney merey liyen khareedha thaa."

Mrs Iyer "Ishita tum log pickup karney jaarahen hon.Lekin driver nahen hain."

Ishita "Mujhey driving aathe hain.Main manage karloongi."

Mrs Iyer "Hum tum logon ko Akeley nahen bhejengey.Subbu ko saath lekey jaon."

Mihika "Bilkul nahen.Never."

Mrs Iyer "Fir kaisey." Raman was coming at same time.

Ruhi "Hum outhouse uncle ko le jaathey hain."

Ruhi "Aapko driving aathey hain naa?"

Amar "Aathe hain."

Mrs Iyer "Amar air port thak jaa sakthey hon kyaa.Driver nahen hain."

Amar acts as thinking and agrees.Subbu was confused.

Then Amar moves along with Ishita,Ruhi and Mihika.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update, continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
cont.soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
iss subbu ko tho 2-4 tappad padne chahiye...wht the hell wid him...mental guy...smae lik his mothr...awesom part...pls send pm yar...loved ur writing...waitng fr nxt update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
lols...subbu...
he got slap...on trying to bring the truth 😆

amar is made the driver...

wow my hercy coming...

im waiting for hercy...

P.S can we get some ishra moments in journey to airport
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Posted: 9 years ago
i m loving this ff...
my fav till now in ur collection is ad ven ture...

i miss the fun it had...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nichuss

lols...subbu...

he got slap...on trying to bring the truth 😆

amar is made the driver...

wow my hercy coming...

im waiting for hercy...

P.S can we get some ishra moments in journey to airport

in return from airport.
Even though it is partially true but not completely he deserves a slap for blaming with out knowing complete truth.Atleast he should be knowing Ishita can't do such work.
Hercules is specially brought for Subbu here.He is too busy spying on Ishita now a new work.
I think you know speaciality of Hercules.
It listens only to Raman  condition he is not quarreling with Ishita and Ruhi.
Then does everything opp to what others says.Unless situation is serious.

I dont know how subbu can face it.
In adventure Shagun ran away.Have to wait to see what Subbu can do
Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update everyone of u r previous works r coming in this so want to read it more the hell with this subbu use Jo sochna hain soche n yar kabhi to pm bheja kr next time u have to do it 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

in return from airport.
Even though it is partially true but not completely he deserves a slap for blaming with out knowing complete truth.Atleast he should be knowing Ishita can't do such work.

he need the slap... for always buting in ishu's life...
on othr side thanks to him...due to him
ishu got raman n ruhi... ðŸ˜³

Hercules is specially brought for Subbu here.He is too busy spying on Ishita now a new work.
I think you know speaciality of Hercules.

yup...hercy is very special in ishraru life... waiting for hercy entry...

It listens only to Raman  condition he is not quarreling with Ishita and Ruhi.
Then does everything opp to what others says.Unless situation is serious.

I dont know how subbu can face it.
In adventure Shagun ran away.Have to wait to see what Subbu can do


r u updting next part today????
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

nice update everyone of u r previous works r coming in this so want to read it more the hell with this subbu use Jo sochna hain soche n yar kabhi to pm bheja kr next time u have to do it 😡

will be from next time buddy.i am sorry.