NaksH OS : Shaam Ki Gulabi Vadiyon Me PART 2 on PAGE 4 - Page 2

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by angel8426


nice os.. continue soon
Soon m posted 2nd part
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by saumya77


Very nice
Thank u
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by saumya77


Waiting for 2nd part
Posted it soon
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by anjali-naksh


Wrote soon
Sure
Posted: 9 years ago
PART 2
within a second some hairs falls on akshi's face.. akshi was about to remove her hair from face then naitik catch her hand and says her not to remove it..
N: ye baalon ki lat mujhe apke chehre pe bahut achi lagti hai.. apko yaad hai hamari pahli date kaise maine apse kaha tha ki ap ise aise hi rahne dijiye
A: haan mujhe achi tarah yaad hai kaise pahle apne khud ise hatane se mana kiya aur baad me khud hi hata diye ye kah kar ki ye sirf apke liye thi.. kitni sharma gayi thi main us samay
N: vaise ek baat to hai akshara shadi ke itne saal baad bhi ap abhi bhi bilkul ek nayi dulhan ki tarah sharmati hai
A: dhatt
N: dekhiye abhi bhi ap sharma hi rahi hai
A: ab ap mujhe chidaiye mat
N: vaise akshara seriously ek baat bataoon apka ye sharmana bhi mujhe bahut acha lagta hai
within a second a rain drops falls on akshi
A: naitik lag raha hai barish aane wali hai chaliye neeche chalte hai
N: are barish aane wali hai to hum neeche kyun jaye balki iska to main kabhi se wait kar raha tha.. thank u god barish karne ke liye aur hamari is romantic night ko aur bhi romantic banane ke liye
A: kya ap na sach me pagal ho gaye hai
N: pagal main nahi ap ho gayi hai.. itne ache mauke ko koi gavata hai kya.. sochiye kitna maja aayega barish me romance karne me
A: mujhe barish me bheegne ka koi shauk nahi hai main ja rahi hoon neeche aur ap yahan barish me bheeg ke barish ke sath romance karte rahiye
then raining starts and akshi was about to go down then naitik held her hand and take her in his arms.. both lost in each other then naitik approch her for dance and they do the dance on the song resham si hai ye hawaye sanam
in the morning in naksh room both are sleeping in each other arms.. akshara broke out from sleep and about to go then naitik hold her tightly
N: itni jaldi kya hai jane ki thodi der aur rukiye na mere paas
A: are naitik time dekha hai apne apko sona hai to soiye main ja rahi hu mujhe bahut kaam hai
N: nahi ap nahi jayengi then he sneezes
A: are ye kya apko to sardi ho gayi aur bheegiye barish me bahut man kar raha tha na apko barish me romance karne ka
N: sardi ho gayi to kya hua hamne kitne maje bhi to kiye kal
A: acha.. shayad ap bhul rahe hai aj apki office me bahut important meeting hai.. jab ap client ke samne aise naak pochenge tab aayega asli maza.. aur haan ab ap mujhse door rahiye varna mujhe bhi sardi ho jayegi kyonki meri bhi aj meeting hai aur main koi risk nahi lena chahti
N: hmm.. isse achi to koi baat ho hi nahi sakti ki apki bhi aj meeting hai.. ab to main ye sardi apko kisi bhi tarah dekar hi rahunga
A: naitik nahi ye galat baat hai chodiye mujhe
N: bilkul bhi nahi balki ab to main apke aur karib aaunga
A:naitik nahi..
within a second akshara also sneezes.. on this naitik laughs then akshi also laughs then both hug each other and says i luv u to each other
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Posted: 9 years ago
So romantic..
just loved it
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by saumya77


So romantic..
just loved it
Thanks dear
Posted: 9 years ago
very romantic and beautiful os .you write it so beautifully .thanks for giving us your nice stories dear.Edited by rainanaksh - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by rainanaksh


very romantic and beautiful os .you write it so beautifully .thanks for giving us your nice stories dear.
Thanks for ur such a precious comments
Posted: 9 years ago
very romantic and very beautifully written
nice song but i was expecting sawaan aaya hai song on the rain dance..
please do write more..

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