#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 2

Posted: 9 years ago
so emotional 
feeling bad fr zoya and asad both
cont soon
thnx fr pm 
Posted: 9 years ago
Yep you have portrayed zoya's emotions so well. 
Indeed zoya is lucky to get a family like this & mostly our asad Miya!
Hope zoya recovers fast & leads a normal life soon
Posted: 9 years ago
Very emotional update zoya lost her baby all are very sad to see her condition
Posted: 9 years ago
This was a super depressing chapter!

Loved the way Asad handled Zoya. ❤️

I'm kinda outta words today and lazy to type a long comment, plus my wrist pains off and on.

So please manage with this chhota comment this time behna! 🤗

- Mrina <3
Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update..
 u have written the pain very well..

 hope things will be good from now on..


Posted: 9 years ago
Congratulations For New Thread...👏

Amazing + Emotional Update...👍🏼

Every Scene Is Written Beautifuly...🤗

Just Love It...😊

Update Next Part Soon...😃
Posted: 9 years ago
M broken🥺

I cant see Zoya like this 😭

She thinks Asad isnt a Savior... 😭

Agar usske bus main hota vo aisa kuch nahi hone deta 😭

Why did this happen ??😭

Me crying badly 😭😭😭

I had goosebumps while reading it you are just awsum Bano 👏

Congratulations for new thread 🤗

This is how I can Imagine them right now 😭



Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM.
It was so Sad and Emotiomnal Part.😭
I just can't stop crying after reading this.😭
Zoya was saved but the baby was no more,it was so sad.
All the family members were crying for Zoya,it was so sad.
Asad(KSG) finally confronted Zoya,it was nice.
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
___________________________________
(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
                                                                                                     PRIYAKABHI.
Posted: 9 years ago
Congratulations on the 5th thread! Well deserved!








Posted: 9 years ago
Reserved for Chapter 20!


~~~


Unreserved!


An agonizing chapter.

 

The miscarriage was expected. I was a little afraid at the beginning of the chapter, I thought amongst the grief, she may misunderstand and blame Asad for it. Despite the pain loved the scene where she grabs his collar and repeatedly hits against his chest [Hopeless romantic, hope that doesn't make me a sadist].

 

The entire family, Daniel and Sana were amazingly supportive.


Asad with her at the end was amazingly beautiful.


"When Asad started feeding her, she wasn't eating but when she looked up at him and he gave her an encouraging smile, she ate but with tears rolling down her cheeks. When Asad gave her painkillers, she silently swallowed them before resting on his chest once again and crying herself to sleep while Asad caressed her hair soothingly. Her plight was heartbreaking to him but he knew that he wasn't supposed to be breaking down, he needed to be strong for her."


@Red: Picture perfect!


Do you know you are doing an amazing job with this FF?


Well you are!


Your writing really overwhelms and amazes me - Keep up the fantastic work!


P.S Just realized I used the word #Amazingly too many times in this comment.   😳

Edited by p_s05 - 9 years ago

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