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#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
Congrats for the new thread Choti Bajijaan 👍🏼

There was no need to ask if anyone cried. Am sure anyone who will read this chapter will cry. A very very well written chapter, so emotional 😭

Every sentence you wrote about her plight about her suffering, her breakdown and what each in the room felt for her and with her was just superb.


I won't say anything more, it will dampen what you have written. 


Loved it Choti Bajijaan just loved it 
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful and emotional update 😭
how it 's hard to loose baby for any parent , specially a mother, you write it with decency

and congrats for the new thread, please update soon, can't wait for the next part 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
So emotional & sad update
I love it

It made me tear up😭

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was really sad :( Awesome update as always!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congratulations for the new thread..
I was so sad reading that the baby didn't survive... ;(
I just want to cry...
you are an amazing writer really.. Beautiful part.. Very well written.. Looking forward to the next ones... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very emotional update. . Beautifully written. .
Felt so sorry for Zoya. . 

Thanks for updating
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Posted: 9 years ago
very emotional update
 
emotions of Zoya were perfectly written
danial dilshad and najma cheering her
atlast asad made her eat
thanks for the update
 
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Posted: 9 years ago
emotional update😭
beautifully written😊
loved it❤️
felt so sorry for zoya😭
loved how dilshad,nazma and daniel were trying to cheer up zoya
continue soon
nd thnx 4r pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congrats on the new thread 
amazing update lovely 
thanx 4 the pm
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
congrats for new thread 
awesome and emotional update😭
zoya's condition is too weak but gr8 part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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