#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 5

Hi...Bano..thanx for the P.M...well it was a emotional and a turmoil full of update...well what can we say about the loss of the baby and only those mothers who goes through this pain know its grief...you potrayed Zoya's emotions in a very perfect manner...and asad's turmoil and helpnessness is also painful .i really liked the part where zoya says that Asad in not her SAVIOUR...because he didn't saved her baby...what a scene... : ) can imagine Asad's plight at that...continue soon..

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Congratulations on the new thread Bano

Emotional update
You said it right that chapter made everyone cried more.
Zoya lost her baby & the way she took out her emotions was well written.
Asad tried to calm her down but her position broke him more. He took her in his arms & consoled her.
This phase is difficult for both zoya & asad. Hopefully they will come out together.
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm

Emotional update!!!
Yep life is complicated!!!
Hope she recovers soon!!
Asad is no less!!

Unreserved @: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/112651016

emotional chapter

always knew it was going to happen...
but still it hurt...
you penned it down beautifully bano...
awesome emotional update...
hope zoya gets over the loss soon..
she has a no. of supportive n loving people around...
continue soon

Beautiful update sis. But its very emotional and heartbreaking. I always wanter the baby to died but when its happened i m feeling so sad. U captured the emotions so beautifuly. I usualy dont feel much emotions. But your updates always touched my heart. Hope zoya able to get over from the loss very soon. Now waiting for the twist in asya life. Hope Zoya now recovered fully. Update next part soon. ❤️ Raj

made it 88.. my bed calls.. will unres tomorrow.. zzz