#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 6

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Zola029 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congrats for the new thread ! πŸ₯³.πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
very well written update...πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 9 years ago
This was a pretty sad update !!
she lost the Baby 
and its soo upsetting ,, I really feel bad for Zoya !!
Thank God she has got a family finally to help her out πŸ˜’
Asad is taking care of her β€οΈ
update soon and a happy one if possible !!
and yup this update was really beautifully written !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
heelo heelo hello 


this update made me feel so saad πŸ˜­   
Zoya falling so weak.. and the heart wrecking pain she has to suffer.. 
And Asad's pain    

But when Asad is there.. There's nothing to fear 


p.s. Some more care scenes please  


Update sooner now  
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congrats on new thread 
Such a heartbreaking chapter 
Zoya is so broken her baby is gone 
No one can console her all r in pain seeing her like that 
Her lashing out at asad was understandable
U r my saviour y didn't u save my baby I want my baby 
He allowed her to cry it out and he stopped anyone from stopping her 
Let her get it out of her system 
No one could hav gotten her in a good mood 
She just lost a baby people come on
Glad asad send all home and let her have her space 
But he was there to hold her when she allowed him and comfort her and be there for her 
He was the only one who can get her to get over her grief and take care of herself 
Hope they grow closer with this lost
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow bano yaar what an update
it was so 😭
if you remember once I asked you something like zoya to lose the baby but I really felt bad here .
maybe it was for zoya or for the baby itself but in any way the credit all goes to you yaar beautifully written πŸ‘
just hop to see her have baby in last of this ff  .
loved it πŸ˜‰ 
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey...you are mindblowing writer...you managed to make us cry😭

zoya is ok but still weak...but baby is no more...😭

danial is become their family member...

i don't know how to explain in words...what i felt for zoya...
when she learn that her baby is no more...that scene was...😭😭

zoya behaviour towards asad...was expected...he is her savior...so she thought that he also can save her child...

asad is also feeling sad...

zoya is still in shock...she is not responding to anyone...

lovely family...they all try to cheer her up...but failed to grap her attention...😊

asad also try to grap her attention...atleast she ate her food and medicine...

you described the emotion of zoya very wellπŸ‘

you said in your note that this will bring new turn in asya life...

i am waiting for it...😊

thank you so much for sharing this update with us and for pm me...πŸ€—

please continue soon...

p.s-congratulation for your new thread...you deserve itπŸ₯³πŸ‘


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Posted: 9 years ago
Congrats on new thread!!!
This chapter was really awesome!!!

And emotional too πŸ˜­...

Continue soon...





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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...adin...

res

unrs
finally bitter truth is out
i know thi was going to be painful but i think i was the only one who didn't want that baby ..
i like this emotional chapter ...
everyone is really supportive in her case ...
waiting for next chapter


The lost of an innocent soul is always painful ! 😭
But dont worry Nida, u were not the only who didnt wanted that baby, there were many other readers requesting to me that Zoya should not give birth to Akram's baby πŸ˜•
I'm glad you liked it ! πŸ€— thanks ! ❀️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Res..:D

unRes...!!
Oh god dat was hell emotnl..!!
U wrote exceptionally well yr..!!
I cud feel her pain..!!
Hope she gets ovr dis soon..:(
ty..:*


Thank you so much cutie ! I'm glad you liked it ! 😳