RaYa OS: Being With you Part - 2 on page 8 24-9-2014 - Page 2

lovely os..

Soo awesome
Continue soon

This content was originally posted by: luvsakshi

Hey  dear readers .. 

When i edited second time , the half of the portion got deleted 

after seeing your replies only i went and checkd 

but it was missed more than hakf of the story .. 

sorry for the inconvience 

please do read again .. you will find the whole First part .. 

Chers 

Neel

Read fully & commented too
Thanks once again 😊

Awesome OS di!!!
eagerly waiting 4 next part ...plz continue soon!!!
And thanks 4 pm

Thank u so much neel di for dedicating my wish in ur os awesome di pls continue soon

A beautiful story written very nicely. Jaipur track is my most favourite track in the serial. It reminded me of my childhood and teenaged days. The middle class ss family culture... their struggles for small things... and try to find happiness in small little things always fascinate me... coz I belong to the same class. But unfortunately in my opinion that track was not well executed in the serial. I love reading any fiction on the same track.

Its superb...
Lovely track... plz update d nxt part soon 😊

I didnt expect OS from you on rams bday

awesome os 😉
thanks for pm