Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1 - Page 2

Sorry meant to update my res and not quote 


Edited by Arshi67 - 9 years ago

I have never, ever liked the Shyam character.   Not even in fanfics..  However, I want to shout hooray for you turning the tables on Arnav and Anjali!!!  Brilliant!   Carry on!  I will be waiting!!'

I always like bold Khushi. But Arnav disappointed me. Anjali, 😡 better left unsaid. Shyam was a surprise package.

Awesome ...loved shyam character 

Just read alll eight parts of this story.

Congratulations dearies..⭐️⭐️
coming to the updates..
well this is called power punch..
"On your face guys"👏👏
loved the way Khushi talked with him..
Shyam's each dialogue was perfect and more than one slap for both the siblings but I loved the way Shyam talked with his wife and told her the truth.
so now Arnav what will you do ???
Awesome..awesome awesome updates Smitaji.👏👏👏
waiting eagerly for the next update.
Zara socho agar Khushi Arnav ko ghar pahunchane ke liye thank you ke badale kuchh Rupiyein de toh as fare..😆😆 but I know she will not act like this.





thanks for the mail Reshu.🤗
take care both of you.😊

Awesome dwae
Love it
3 cheers fr shyam

Congrats on the new thread 

Hum aapse ek baat kehna toh bhool hi gaye..
I LIKED THIS SHYAM BABUA VERY MUCH.😆

I liiikkkeee his shyam very much...