Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1 - Page 5

congrats on new thread
great update

Congrats on the new thread! :)

Awesome parts Smita! :)
Loved how Khushi maintained her cool and decided to take the matter to where it started from. The Raizadas had to know what was going on.
My hands were itching to virtually slap Anjali, not once, but innumerable times! Even in the show, I had wanted to enter the screen and strangle her 😡
I like this Shyam! Alot! 😛 Yes, the silly cry baby needs a psychiatrist! And I applaud him for leaving his hair brained wife to decide what she wants.

Loved it! Looking forward to the next parts. I'm so curious to know how Arnav will try to rectify himself and what Khushi has to say to him.

Thanks for the email Rashmi :) x

OMG...lovely os
u always leave ur readers wanting for more smitha and thanks to rashmi who posts ur works so dat we could read them
pls post nxt parts soon cant wait to read them...once again fabulous writing !!

Awesome parts
Loved it

superb...

Awesome OS.
I loved shyaam, the way he took class of bro sis.
Anjali needs to grow up and stop involving her brother in her nonsense.let him live his life.
Arnav use your havard brain yaar.
Glad that Khushi behaved mature and took her stand.

Wow wonderful updates loved them and congrats on new thread.

OMG, for the first time, I like Shyam in any Arnav - Khushi FF. Smita, hats off to you for making him good for once.

 

Khushi spoke calmly and took Arnav home to show him the truth. Very nicely written. I am so glad she did not start crying and ask the same old question to Arnav, "what you would have done if somebody asked the same question to your sister".

 

The pea-brained Arnav got his lesson. Hopefully TearDripping-WideEyed-DumbWoman Anjali learns her lesson too :-). Shyam was really good. I liked the way he spoke to everyone.

Wow, what a blast everyone had their share of
scolding from Mr Jha. Great he's a good man here
let's give him a break. 👏