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Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
it was awsome...loved it...

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Posted: 9 years ago
that was a straight shot! wonderfully written
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow! Loved the spirited Khushi and how she took the bull bythe horns but more than that loved loved and loved Shyam! You have portrayed him as an awesome character! And Anjali was perfectly characterised as the dependant whiny sould she was!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...

Loved Khushi for how she stood for herself but didn't let anyone questioned her dignity... And Shyam is bang on... He is clear in what he wants from Anjali and how he thinks after learning the truth... It is a shame that Anjali doesn't trust him...

Loved it... Waiting for the next update.. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
congrats on new thread 
Loved it.. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow congrats on new thread
nice updates
thanks for pm x
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Posted: 9 years ago

That was an awesome one.. Good to see anjali being told to handle her own things rather being dependent on arnav:) she can't always rely on others to solve her problems.
Khushi needs to give arnav a tough time to ask for her forgiveness:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
I love this Shyam and Anjali needed to hear that! Hopefully she will foloow the advice and let Arnav live his own life.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bravo Khushi 👏 I loved Khushi's attitude and her retort. It was much better than her slapping him though he deserved one. Loved how Shyam handled the issue. I don't even pity Anjali. She is nothing but a cry baby. She should really grow up. Arnav should immediately start using his brain and stop doing things without thinking. Doesn't he know how his sister is? Loved the updates. I am eager to know how he gets Khushi's forgiveness. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congrats on the new thread 😊