Originally posted by: WhiteQueen
unres๐your update was so funny, kalpu ko bhi english nahi aathi๐Bathroom ka itna desc๐ฒ, 2 buckets in bathroom๐Haan Kalpi ko aise hi rakna, I too don't like cry baby๐๐Nice update Erika๐
All three chapters were fun to read and were interesting to read younger version of two characters๐๐ผ
Originally posted by: Shivanie05
I love this sweet little Kalpi and that Rags oh how I would love to give him some trashing lol great update my dear please update soon
Originally posted by: zindgidilse
read part 2 nd 3 in one go
superb update erika
you portray the marrige sequence very well...funny also...
and after kalpana grahpravesh the story u describe its amazing...kalpana is lovely and bubbly girl and i must say she is a prank master in playing prank on raghav...๐
Originally posted by: sharanya0011
wow wonderful update๐
kalpi tho kitna cute aur naughty hai ๐ณcontinue soon
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