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New Poem-"Aditya Srivartava Does" @page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
HI EVERYONE !


First of all A very thank you everyone for being so nice friends right here, actually this forum had taught, is teaching and I am sure will always teach many more things...
Today I am going to start my another jorney and it's a jorney of poem, I am so much learned from the people here, the tallency of this forum is very high and I feel glad being member here...I am not a good poem writer but I am just trying..so I need Your's suggestions, advice, feedback to improve my writting and I am sure you take out few time to read and provide suggestions...


When I see aditya sir, I always feel proud being his fan.He is so much valuable that I can't express in words but again just trying expressing my views about him through poem...in the beginning of my jorney at the very first poem dedicated to aditya sir.

Aditya Sir

To catch of the replete of tallent
Wait all the time congregation the memories
Memories of the golden act
Through I get Plausible of heart;

You are the inspirer, near to my heart
Passion for one's task,language of the mind
The power of sound, feeling of ingenuite kind
Maze of the retiocinative, scriptures of the colleague;

Accomplish for the paradox is hardwork
Clarify different than others
You are such a canny, meaning to the life
Earnesty I am glad, flying in the sky ;

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debasree04 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow binod...its just lovely β­οΈ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...lovely poem bro...
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πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Edited by Abhi-Anamika - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Lovely Poem BINOD Baccha...πŸ‘πŸ‘
Keep it Up...πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
Thank You so much...😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous wonderful β­οΈβ­οΈ excellent poem Binod...πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈπŸ€—πŸ€—
Thank you for the superb poem dedicated for our beloved Adi sir...
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Posted: 9 years ago
This one is awesome buddy! True and love it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful poem, bro. Really liked it! Keep it up. πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely poem CA..
really ur firs try is very much good..
thank you dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
its awesome yar keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely poem BinodπŸ‘. Keep writing theseπŸ‘πŸΌ.