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Sorry for this late update friends, got pinned down at the office for the last week. Here is part 4

Part-4

[That night, after dinner Baldev was standing in the terrace, staring to the sky. Lots of things were running through his mind. He was looking back at all those moments they spend together. Suddenly, he heard a  feminine voice]

V: Baldev, muthe tujh se zarrori baat karni hain...She sounded very different than her usual self, still having enough boldness in her voice.

B: Veera !!!! tu abhi taq soyee nahi?... Deee...Dekh didi bhi jaag rahi hogi...tu...tu jaake so jaa.

V: Kis se dur bhag raha hain Baldev?...mujh se?...ya phir apne aap se?...

B: Veera...yeh...keya keh rahi hain tu!!!!!

V: Baldev...mainu aap ne swalon ka jawab chahiye...tu aise mujhe ignore nahi kar sakta...

B: Thik hain...punch keya punchna hain...Suddenly he sounded like the Sher he is...

V: kiun kiya tune aisa...Baldev

B: Veera...sab kuch bohot achanak huwa...main tujhe bata nahi saka...

V: Phone to kar sakta tha...

B: Veera...mera phone kharab ho gaya tha...thik karne diya to 7 din baad wapas diya...lekin saare number delete ho gaye they...main chah kar bhi tujhe phone nahi kar saka. He said in his mind " hey wahe Guruji mujhe maaf kar dena... aaj na jaane kitne jhoot bone parenge mujhe...woh bhi usse..jisse main apne jaan se bhi zayada pryaar kar tha tha...lekin sayad ehi sahi hoga."

V: Aur aane se pehle?...Tune mainu galat sabit kar diya Baldev...mainu yekin tha...tu kam se kam mujh se ladne zaroor ayega...raat bhar khirki peh khari rahi thi main... lekin tu nahi aaya...

B: Aab mitti daal na us baat par...

V: Thik hain...waise...Baldev I'm sorry...  They kept mum for a while...Woh Baldev main keh rahi thi ke didi to apne naye flat main settle ho gaye hain...to kiun na kaal hum dono ...sath main hi wapas chalain?

B: Main abhi kaise chal sakta hun...abhi meri training dhai mahine baaki hain...

V: Veera was shcoked...trainiiing?...

B: Haan Veera...is bitch tujh se baat nahi ho payee is liye... bata nahi saka...main ne inhaan ek nakuri join ki hain ...tin mahine ka training hain use baad parmanent...

V: Baldeeev!!!!!! she could not believe her own ears...itna badda faisla le liya tune??? ek bari mujhe...batana taq zaroori nahi...samjah?

B: Kaise bata ta tujh ko...bataya na phone ...

V: tu apne ghar peh to baat karta hain na?...to kam se kam Nihal chachu se to baat kar sakta tha...un se to keh sakta tha ke mujhse kahen main tenu phone karoon...she sounded really anxious.

B: Veera...mainu nahi lagta ke main ne koyee galat faisla liya hain...waise bhi...krishi vidyalay or poly house ke kaam to pure ho chuke hain na...

V: matlab key hain tera?...tu sirf us waaste mere naal tha?...yah phir tu ye kehna chahta hain ke maine tera istamal kiya?

B: Veera...tu kahan ki baat kahan le ja rahi hain...main apne pyaaron pe khara ho na chahta hoon...is main keya galat hain?

V: Pritampura main rehke bhi to tu aap ne pyaaron peh khara ho sakta tha...aur phir tu to hamesha se aapni business karna chahta tha...to phir aachanak yeh job...

B: Pehle main kaam ko aache se sikh loon...phir to mujhe apna business hi karna hain...

V: to phir tu wapas kab jayega?

B: pata nahi...Veera looked shocked...tears started to pour down her chick...everything was becoming dark in front of her eyes...she gently knelt down to the terrace...Baldev ran up to her. Veera ..tu please ro maat...tu hi bol keya main kuch galat kar raha hoon...Papaji humesha kehte they...jo insaan apne pyaaro peh khar nahi hota...koye uski izzat nahi karta...main bass kusis kar raha hoon...

V: Haan Bladev...thik kaha tune...tujhe toh sirf yehi pata hain na ke maine sab ke samne teri beizzati ki thi...lekin Baldev...tujhe yeh nahi pata ...kis tarah se teri biji ne saare pancho ke samne mujh par aur meri beeji par paise harp ne ka ilzaam lagay tha...kis tah maine sab ke samne teri begunahi ke bare main bayata tha...kis tarah sare pind wale tujhse maafi manga chahte they...Baldev could not believe his own ears...every time Nihal wanted to talk to him he made some excuses and never listened to him...kitni aasani se...kitni aasani se tune mere pyaar ko bhula diya Baldev...

Baldev could not held himself back any more...he gave her the tightest hug he could and tears started to dip down his chick. That moment he felt like killing himself...how could he...then controlled himself again...

B: Veera...dekh...yeh training mere liye bohot zarrori hain...agar main aache se sab sikh paya tabhi aapna business kar paunga...bas kuch hi din ki baat hain...uske baad...

V: tuje...apne ghar...apne pind...apne beeji-papaji ...yah phir meri yaad nehi ayegi?

B: yaad to unki aati hain jo humse door ho...tujhe to main khud se door hone hi nahi diya...yeh dekh...he shows her picture in the wall paper of his mobile. Veera cups his face and with teary eyes said

v: Baas 15 dino meh hi tu sehri ban gaya Baldev?...kitni khoobsoorti se baat gumana sikh gaya...aab tu woh Baldev nahi raha...jo khud se zayada mujh se pyaar karta tha...tu aapne pyaroon pe khara hona chahta hain na?...to mera pyaar tere raste ki rukawat nahi banegi...intezaar karoongi main tera...is umeed ke saath ke kahin se ek din woh gaonwala Baldev wapas aa gaye. She stood up very quickly and ran inside the house.

Pre-Cap: Baldev returns to PP

Edited by feck - 9 years ago

Part-5

Baldev was dumbstruck with what had happened. He sat there on the terrace knelling down. Tears kept dipping down his chicks. He asked himself "what have I done". kiun kiya maine aisa? kiun har bari mera gussa mujhe aise andha kar deti hain? kiun maine us shaam us se baat nahi ki? kiun maine Nihal chahu se bhi baat nahi ki, us raat agar thori der unke paas ruk jata toh...lekin karta bhi keya main? Didi neh bula liya, par keya is tarh Veera ko tarpana sahi tha? keya hasil kar liya maine? lekin rabji aap to jante ho na jitna maine usko tarpaya usse 100 gunah maine khood ko tarpaya hain, aur phir jaab taq main koyee aacha kaam nahi karne lagoonga kaise Ratan chachiji aur Ranvee say uska hath mangoonga? Nahi Baldev...tu is baar apne maqsad se bhatak nahi sakta...tujhe yeh training poori karni hi hogi...

[Next morning Veera was leaving for Pritampura, Baldev accompanied her to the Bus terminus. Veera was about to board the bus when Baldev hold her hand]

B: Veera...tera pyaar kabhi mere raste ki rukawat nahi ban sakti, wohi meri sab se bari takat hain...rabji ki kasam Veera... main jo bhi kar raha hoon...hum dono ke liye kar raha hoon...Please mujh peh bharosa rakh...

Veera didn't answer anything, she hold his and firmly and shook her head gently with a smile.

[ Baldev continued his training religiously. He and Veera are in touch through phone. Every night he use to tell her about his day and she use to tell him about her day. At his work place he met Kuldeep, who was also a trainee like him and Muskaan who used to work as a computer operator there. They became very good friends.  During launch hours and after office alternatively both of them helped Baldev in learning the basic operations of computer system. Gradually he learned to use a computer, send and receive e-mail, make video calls, preparing presentations etc. Kuldeep was already engaged and Muskaan's parents were trying to get her married. Muskaan started to like Baldev. The seniors were all impressed by his sincerity and dedication. The day Baldev got his first stipend...]

B: Muskaan...keya tum meri thori madat kar sakti ho?

M: Haan Baldev...bolo na...

B: woh...Muskaan...mujhe kuch kharid na tha...aur us bari main mujhe kuch idea nahi hain...to  keya tum mere saath chal sakti ho...Please.

M: Oh ho Baldev! Itna formal hone ki zarorat nahi...main office ke baad chalungi tumhare saath...par yeh to batao ke keya lena hain...

B: [Baldev blushed a little] Woh main tumhe tabhi batunga...

M: Thik hain...

[During launch hours that day Baldev went out with Kuldeep and purchased a new mobile set for himself. During the afternoon Coffee break that day..]

K: Toh Baldeva...yeh tin din keya karega?

B: Oye ...Kuldeep...Yaar tu mujhe aur kuch bhi bula par Baldeva maat ...bula

K: kiun...meri hone wali Bhabhi tujhe is naam se bulati hain keya?

M: [A little shocked] keya...sach main Baldev?...aisy koye hain keya?

B: Kuldeep ...tu bhi na...waise kon tin din ki baat kar raha hain tu?

K: Mere bhai is weekend ki.  Friday ko company ka foundation day hain...Saturday 2nd October aur phir Sunday.

B: Saach main Kuldeep...Oye mainne to dhayan hi nahi diya...phir to main aaj raat hi bus se ghar jaunga...Saach main yaar 2 mahino se ghar nahi gaya main...Woh Muskaan tumhara ghar to Bus terminus ke raste me hi parega na...to phir main ...dukaan se sidha Bus stop pe chala jaunga...

[Kuldeep was bluntly looking at Muskaan]

M: Pata nahi Kuldeep Baldev ko keya kharid na hain...aur kiske liye kharid na hain...jo use mari madat chahiye.

K: Oye keya...bat hain.

B: Philhaal coffee break khatam...baad main bataunga...

[ After office Baldev called chanchali to inform he was going to PP. With the help of Muskaan, he purchased a nice wristlet for Veera. Since there was time they had ice cream at a parlour, twice Muskaan asked for whom did he purchased it, to which Baldev didn't replied anything apart from a blushing smile.

It was 11 in the night. Veera called Baldev, but heard a mobile ringing in her room only. She looked around and found a mobile ringing at the bed side table, with her picture and name flashing on the screen]

V: Yeh kiska mobile hain?...[she cut the call and picked up the phone. Before she could turn around someone grabbed her from behind. His very touch was enough to unleash the tears of joy from her eyes]

B: kaisy hain meri Sherni...[Veera turned around quickly]

V: Baldev...tu inhaan kaise?

B: Oye tin din ki chutti mili hain ...to aa gaya...[Veera tried to hug him, but couldn't manage to do so because of his small backpack]...abhi taq ghar bhi nahi gaya main...[Baldev put his backpack down and they hugged each other ...aftera while...] Oye soon raat bohot ho gayee hain...mainu ghar gana hai...kaal subha milenge...baas tu do minute beth jaaa...

[ They sat on the sofa...Baldev picked out the wristlet from his pocket and was about to put it on her wrist when his phone rang with Muskaan's name and photo flashing on the screen]

B: Muskaan!!! itni raat gaye!!!!![ He picked up the call and it set it to video call mode] Haan Muskaan bolo!!!![Veera could she her, but she could not]

M: Tum ghar paunch gaye Baldev?

B: Haan...kiun koye kaam tha...

M: kuch khaas nahi...baas tumhari fiqr ho rahi thi...aur tumse baat karne ka maan kar raha tha...

B: It ni raat gaye...tum abhi taq soyee nahi...

M: neend nahi aa rahi thi...

B: Woh muskaan...main baas abhi abhi ghar pauncha hoon ...kaal baat karen...

M: Good Night

B: Good Night [ He hangs up the phone and looks towards Veera]

V: Kon thi woh...

B: Woh mere office main kaam karti hain...

V: Bari phiqr hain na usey teri...tu keya uski neend ki dawa hain...roz ehi hota hain na?

B: Oye meri...Sherni...thand paa...woh bass meri dost hain...chal hath agey kar...mainu ghar bhi jana hain...

[Veera put her hand forward while making a face...Baldev put the wrist let on her wrist and then kissed her on the chick.]

B: cahta hoon...

to be continued...

It is upto misunderstanding,jealousy part,interesting. Nice

Part-6

[When Baldev reached home, he was very much surprised to see Balwant, Bansuri and Nihal waiting for him. They were all very happy to see him and so was he. Every one hugged him and praised him for his efforts. Bansuri was in her usual self, complaining about his physic and lack of food etc. Balwant and Nihal were throughly enjoying that. They all went to sleep about 1 in the night, but there was someone in PP who could not sleep. a sense of insecurity had engrossed her for the first time in her life]

V: Keya naam tha uska?...Muskan na. Agli bari Bladev ko agar phone bhi kiya toh uske saare dant tor dungi main. Yeh Veerji ka show ek baar khatam ho jaye to main bhi Delhi main koyee job dund lungee...[By the way Ranvee has made it to the final round of the compitition now]...par krishi vidyalay ka keya hoga?...Nihal chachu to poly house ko samal lenge...agar Veerji is competition ko jeet gaye aur unhe Mumbai me hi rehna para to?...Beeji aur chaiji ka kuon khayal rakhe ga?...Oh God...keya karoon?

[Next morning ...Poli house site]

N: Aaja Baldev...dekh humara Poli house kitne bariya se setup huwa hain...[some villagers were working there,...they all greeted Baldev and he also greeted them in reply]

B: Haan Chachu...Yeh to bilkul aap ke Poland wala poly house jaisa ban gaya...sab log kitne khoos hain na?

N: Lekin main khoos nahi hoon...[Baldev looke at him with disbelief]...is poly house aur krishi vidyalay ke banne main tera bhi bohot bara yogdan tha...lekin jab yeh pura huwa...tab tu inhaan nahi tha...

B: Koye nahi chachu...jo bhi huwa accha huwa...ab dekhona...mainu kitni badiya cheez sikh ne ko mil raha hain...

V: Saastri-ya-kaal chachu...hai Baldev...

N: Aa gaye tu...chal achha hain...Mujhe kisi kaam se sehar jana hain...Baldev in dino tera Jeep mera ban gaya...

B: koye nahi chachu...[Nihal left...]...Oye...raat bhar soye nahi keya...agar itna khus thi...toh keh deti...main ruk jata tere kamre witch...

V: Oye aisy koye baat nahi...mainu keya pari hain tere liye raat bahr jagne ki...[Baldev's phone rang...and it was Muskaan again]

B: Aare Muskaan...keya baat hain...sab thik hain na?

M: Haan Baldev sab thik hain ...lekin kuch thik nahi hain

B: mat lab...

M: Woh Mom-Dad kisi zaroori kaam se mere aunty ke ghar gaye hain. Main akele ghar peh bore ho rahi hoon...mere sare sahliyaan bhi apne apne boy friend ke saath program ban chuki hain...is liye hi muje chuttiyan aachi nahi lagti...

B: to tum bhi apne liye ek boy friend dhoond lo na...

M: Right...wohi karti hoon...tum meri madat kore ge na...dekho Baldev...maine kaal shopping peh tumhari madat ki thi...aab timhati bari...[ Baldev didn't knew what to answer...he didn't even dared to look at veera...from the corner of his eyes he could see her clinching her fist...he felt filhall ke liye bhaag ja Baldev]

B: Woh ..Muskaan...phil haal main tumhare mood fresh karne ke liye kuch dikhata hoon...yeh dekho ...yeh wohi poly house hain jiske bare main maine tumhe bataya tha...[he kept moving around the poly house for almost half an hour...and finally came back to where...Veera stood]...toh bolo Muskaan...kaisa laga...mera gaon...

M: Bohot Sunder hain Baldev...mera toh mann kar raha hain ke main tumhare gaon aa jaoon.

B: Haan to agli baar jab chutti me aaunga to chali ana... chalo aab phone rakho ...mujhe aur bhi kuch kaam hain...

M: Bye Baldev...

B: Bye..[Baldev moved close to veera...she was shivering with anger...she had already taken off the wristlet...she picked up Baldev's hand...]

V: Jis ko sath may leke yeh kharida tha...usi ko jake pah na dena...[she put the wristlet in his palm and started to leave, Baldev ran upto her...]

B: Veera meri baat soon...mujhe is baari main kuch idea nahi hain...bass is liye...use saath leke gaya tha...Veera samjh na baat ko...dekh ...mere pehli stipend ke paise se main ere liye kuch khaas lena chalta tha...bass is liye...

V: kiun ...chanchali didi se nahi keh sakta tha?...aur tu hain keya uske liye...neend nahi aati to tuhje phone karti hain...bore hoti hain to tujhe phone karti hain...aur keya keh rahi thi?...boy friend dhoond ne main teri madat cahiye...

B: Oye hoye...meri sherni ko jalan hone laagi...

V: Asal main tu hi use barahaw deta hain...dekh Bladev...agar tu...[Bakdev put his finger on her lips]

B: thand paa...chal office ke andar chalke baat karte hain...[inside the office]...Oye meri Sherni...keya tujhe apne pyaar pe bharosa nahi?...Yaad rakh...Sher aur Sherni ek duje ke bina adhure hote hain...[he cupped her face and kissed her on the fore head and then hugged her tightly..after a while they broke the hug and Baldev put the wristlet on her wrist]

V: Baldev...main man ti hoon ke koye bhi insaan perfect nahi hota...paar ek doosre ke kamiyon ko apna kar hi humne pyaar kiya hain na...

B: Oye... yeh kaisy batain kar rahi hain tu...main to baas din gin raha hoon ke kaab meri training poori hogi aur main tere pass wapas aunga...bass aur ek mahina...phir main apna karowar suro karoonga aur jald se jald tere Beeji aur tere Veer se tera hath bhi mang loonga.

V: Baldev...na jaane koun mera dil bohot gabhra raha hain...

B: Oye kuch nahi hoga...[she put her head on his sholder and he put his arm arround her]

Pre-cap: Bladev returns to Delhi...Muskaan proposes him.

Originally posted by: feck

Part-6

[When Baldev reached home, he was very much surprised to see Balwant, Bansuri and Nihal waiting for him. They were all very happy to see him and so was he. Every one hugged him and praised him for his efforts. Bansuri was in her usual self, complaining about his physic and lack of food etc. Balwant and Nihal were throughly enjoying that. They all went to sleep about 1 in the night, but there was someone in PP who could not sleep. a sense of insecurity had engrossed her for the first time in her life]

V: Keya naam tha uska?...Muskan na. Agli bari Bladev ko agar phone bhi kiya toh uske saare dant tor dungi main. Yeh Veerji ka show ek baar khatam ho jaye to main bhi Delhi main koyee job dund lungee...[By the way Ranvee has made it to the final round of the compitition now]...par krishi vidyalay ka keya hoga?...Nihal chachu to poly house ko samal lenge...agar Veerji is competition ko jeet gaye aur unhe Mumbai me hi rehna para to?...Beeji aur chaiji ka kuon khayal rakhe ga?...Oh God...keya karoon?

[Next morning ...Poli house site]

N: Aaja Baldev...dekh humara Poli house kitne bariya se setup huwa hain...[some villagers were working there,...they all greeted Baldev and he also greeted them in reply]

B: Haan Chachu...Yeh to bilkul aap ke Poland wala poly house jaisa ban gaya...sab log kitne khoos hain na?

N: Lekin main khoos nahi hoon...[Baldev looke at him with disbelief]...is poly house aur krishi vidyalay ke banne main tera bhi bohot bara yogdan tha...lekin jab yeh pura huwa...tab tu inhaan nahi tha...

B: Koye nahi chachu...jo bhi huwa accha huwa...ab dekhona...mainu kitni badiya cheez sikh ne ko mil raha hain...

V: Saastri-ya-kaal chachu...hai Baldev...

N: Aa gaye tu...chal achha hain...Mujhe kisi kaam se sehar jana hain...Baldev in dino tera Jeep mera ban gaya...

B: koye nahi chachu...[Nihal left...]...Oye...raat bhar soye nahi keya...agar itna khus thi...toh keh deti...main ruk jata tere kamre witch...

V: Oye aisy koye baat nahi...mainu keya pari hain tere liye raat bahr jagne ki...[Baldev's phone rang...and it was Muskaan again]

B: Aare Muskaan...keya baat hain...sab thik hain na?

M: Haan Baldev sab thik hain ...lekin kuch thik nahi hain

B: mat lab...

M: Woh Mom-Dad kisi zaroori kaam se mere aunty ke ghar gaye hain. Main akele ghar peh bore ho rahi hoon...mere sare sahliyaan bhi apne apne boy friend ke saath program ban chuki hain...is liye hi muje chuttiyan aachi nahi lagti...

B: to tum bhi apne liye ek boy friend dhoond lo na...

M: Right...wohi karti hoon...tum meri madat kore ge na...dekho Baldev...maine kaal shopping peh tumhari madat ki thi...aab timhati bari...[ Baldev didn't knew what to answer...he didn't even dared to look at veera...from the corner of his eyes he could see her clinching her fist...he felt filhall ke liye bhaag ja Baldev]

B: Woh ..Muskaan...phil haal main tumhare mood fresh karne ke liye kuch dikhata hoon...yeh dekho ...yeh wohi poly house hain jiske bare main maine tumhe bataya tha...[he kept moving around the poly house for almost half an hour...and finally came back to where...Veera stood]...toh bolo Muskaan...kaisa laga...mera gaon...

M: Bohot Sunder hain Baldev...mera toh mann kar raha hain ke main tumhare gaon aa jaoon.

B: Haan to agli baar jab chutti me aaunga to chali ana... chalo aab phone rakho ...mujhe aur bhi kuch kaam hain...

M: Bye Baldev...

B: Bye..[Baldev moved close to veera...she was shivering with anger...she had already taken off the wristlet...she picked up Baldev's hand...]

V: Jis ko sath may leke yeh kharida tha...usi ko jake pah na dena...[she put the wristlet in his palm and started to leave, Baldev ran upto her...]

B: Veera meri baat soon...mujhe is baari main kuch idea nahi hain...bass is liye...use saath leke gaya tha...Veera samjh na baat ko...dekh ...mere pehli stipend ke paise se main ere liye kuch khaas lena chalta tha...bass is liye...

V: kiun ...chanchali didi se nahi keh sakta tha?...aur tu hain keya uske liye...neend nahi aati to tuhje phone karti hain...bore hoti hain to tujhe phone karti hain...aur keya keh rahi thi?...boy friend dhoond ne main teri madat cahiye...

B: Oye hoye...meri sherni ko jalan hone laagi...

V: Asal main tu hi use barahaw deta hain...dekh Bladev...agar tu...[Bakdev put his finger on her lips]

B: thand paa...chal office ke andar chalke baat karte hain...[inside the office]...Oye meri Sherni...keya tujhe apne pyaar pe bharosa nahi?...Yaad rakh...Sher aur Sherni ek duje ke bina adhure hote hain...[he cupped her face and kissed her on the fore head and then hugged her tightly..after a while they broke the hug and Baldev put the wristlet on her wrist]

V: Baldev...main man ti hoon ke koye bhi insaan perfect nahi hota...paar ek doosre ke kamiyon ko apna kar hi humne pyaar kiya hain na...

B: Oye... yeh kaisy batain kar rahi hain tu...main to baas din gin raha hoon ke kaab meri training poori hogi aur main tere pass wapas aunga...bass aur ek mahina...phir main apna karowar suro karoonga aur jald se jald tere Beeji aur tere Veer se tera hath bhi mang loonga.

V: Baldev...na jaane koun mera dil bohot gabhra raha hain...

B: Oye kuch nahi hoga...[she put her head on his sholder and he put his arm arround her]

Pre-cap: Bladev returns to Delhi...Muskaan proposes him.

Sorry for late reply cz I am busy with my exams... I read your all parts and I must say all parts were amazing and twist was just fab 👍🏼 continue it soon 

Great update, jealous veera! Great stuff.